Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and correct repetition and minor grammar errors. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and keep to 2–4 sentences. Also correct plural/singular and article use (e.g., "green spaces", "different shapes").

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photographs of different views because photography has been my hobby since childhood. For example, I especially like capturing sunsets and flowers, focusing on their colours and shapes to create striking compositions.

Sugerencia: Organize your response: state preference clearly, give 1–2 specific reasons with linking words, and briefly acknowledge the exception. Fix grammar (e.g., "urban areas", "I don't really prefer urban areas"). Remove fillers and repeated words.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural areas because they offer diverse natural scenes, such as rolling hills and colourful meadows, which are more inspiring to photograph. However, I also enjoy photographing green urban areas occasionally, especially parks and tree-lined streets.

Sugerencia: Answer directly, then compare with specific details. Correct grammar and awkward phrases (e.g., "my country has many varied landscapes"; "I'm looking forward to seeing"). Use linking words like "however" and give a clear reason why other countries appeal to you.

Ejemplo: I appreciate the variety of landscapes in my country, from historical buildings to diverse natural areas. However, I am also keen to visit other countries, such as those in Europe, because many of them have well-preserved natural parks and scenic countryside that I would love to photograph.

× I love to take photos of different views, especially since photography has always been my favorite hobby since I was young, and I love to take photos of sunsets, greenery spaces, nature in general.

✓ I love taking photos of different views, especially because photography has been my favorite hobby since I was young, and I enjoy photographing sunsets, green spaces, and nature in general.

Use of verb + -ing (gerund) after 'love' is more natural: 'love taking' rather than 'love to take'. 'Since' with 'has been' should indicate a starting point; use 'because' for reason and 'has been' for present perfect. 'Greenery spaces' is incorrect collocation; use 'green spaces'. Use parallel verbs: 'enjoy photographing' and list items with commas.

× For example, I used to love taking photos of flowers and I like the different shape of them, the different colors, they all all.

✓ For example, I used to love taking photos of flowers, and I like their different shapes and colors.

Run-on sentence and awkward phrasing: combine clauses properly and use possessive pronoun 'their' to refer to flowers. 'Shape' should be plural 'shapes' to match 'flowers'. Removed repeated word 'all' and combined into a concise structure.

× I prefer views in rural areas because they have a lot of natural scenes and views, different colors and different shapes of it.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because they have many natural scenes and different colors and shapes.

Pronoun 'it' is incorrect because 'rural areas' is plural; drop 'of it' and use plural nouns. Replace 'a lot of' with 'many' for countable 'scenes'. Avoid repeating 'views'.

× However, I don't much prefer urban area.

✓ However, I don't really prefer urban areas.

Subject is general; use plural 'urban areas'. 'Don't much prefer' is unidiomatic; use 'don't really prefer'. Ensure subject-verb form matches plural noun.

× However, there are a lot of green urban S urban areas around me and it's worth capturing as well.

✓ However, there are a lot of green urban areas around me, and they're worth capturing as well.

Remove stray 'S' and duplicate 'urban'. Use plural pronoun 'they're' to refer to 'areas'. Add comma before conjunction for clarity.

× My country has a lot of different views for for nature, for historical sites and buildings.

✓ My country has many different views, from natural landscapes to historical sites and buildings.

Avoid repeated 'for' and improve parallel structure. Use 'many' for countable 'views' and rephrase to show range with 'from... to...'. Remove duplicate word.

× My country, I'm grateful that they it has a lot of varieties.

✓ I'm grateful that my country has a lot of variety.

Pronoun confusion: 'my country' is singular, so 'they' is incorrect. 'Varieties' is awkward; use 'variety' or 'a lot of diversity'. Simplify sentence by removing redundant subject.

× However, the nature is more preserved in other countries, like Europe for example.

✓ However, nature is better preserved in some other countries, such as those in Europe.

Article 'the' before 'nature' is unnecessary in this general sense. Use comparative 'better preserved' rather than 'more preserved'. 'Like Europe for example' is redundant; use 'such as' and 'some other countries'.

× They have a lot of natural scenes which I'm really looking forward to see.

✓ They have a lot of natural scenes that I'm really looking forward to seeing.

After 'look forward to' the verb must be in -ing form: 'seeing'. Also 'which' is acceptable but 'that' is more natural here. Ensure correct gerund form after the phrasal verb.