Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Nên trả lời trực tiếp hơn, mạch lạc và tránh tiếng lấp đầy như "umm" và "uh". Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng (Yes/No + lý do), sau đó cung cấp một hoặc hai chi tiết hỗ trợ ngắn gọn (ví dụ: ai bạn thích chụp, tình huống, cảm xúc). Giữ tối đa 3-4 câu, dùng liên từ như "because" hoặc "so" để kết nối ý.

Ejemplo: Not really. I prefer taking photos of people because they show emotions and tell a story. For example, I usually take portraits of my friends during celebrations because their expressions make the photos interesting.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng: nói rõ thích cả hai hay một trong hai và giải thích lý do bằng các chi tiết cụ thể. Tránh lặp từ và tiếng lấp đầy; sử dụng liên từ như "because", "while" hoặc "however" để so sánh. Giới hạn 2-4 câu, mỗi câu ngắn gọn và mạch lạc.

Ejemplo: I like both urban and rural views because they offer different atmospheres. Urban areas have modern architecture and busy streets, while rural places are peaceful and full of natural scenery.

Sugerencia: Trả lời thẳng câu hỏi và cung cấp lý do cụ thể, tránh tiếng lấp đầy. Nói rõ ví dụ cụ thể (nơi, di sản thiên nhiên) và cách bạn chụp ảnh ở đó. Giữ 2-3 câu, dùng từ liên kết như "because" hoặc "for example" để làm rõ ý.

Ejemplo: I prefer taking pictures in my own country because Vietnam has many natural and cultural sites. For example, I enjoy photographing Ha Long Bay and rice terraces because their landscapes are unique and photogenic.

× Not necessarily umm, because I believe that, uh, the person is the most necessary in, in a picture. So I want to take a picture, uh, with me myself.

✓ Not necessarily, because I believe that the person is the most important thing in a picture. So I want to take a picture with myself.

The student used incorrect reflexive and emphatic pronoun forms ('me myself') and an awkward adjective 'necessary' for describing importance. Use 'myself' only when the subject and object are the same and 'with myself' is acceptable but 'me myself' is incorrect. Also replace 'necessary' with 'important' for natural English. Suggestion: use 'myself' for reflexive reference and choose appropriate adjectives like 'important'. Grammar problem type ID:12

× Both through I in my opinion, it places have umm have different features, different views in open is was modern modern building or and.

✓ Both. In my opinion, places have different features and views; urban areas have modern buildings, while rural areas have open spaces.

The original sentence is very disfluent and has multiple structure issues: wrong word order, repeated words, and unclear comparison. This is a sentence structure error. Reorganize into clear clauses: state 'Both' then explain why, use parallel structure 'urban areas have..., rural areas have...'. Remove filler words and repetitions. Suggestion: plan the sentence mentally, use simple clauses and conjunctions to compare. Grammar problem type ID:26

× Of course, in my country, you know, uh, Vietnam has made may, uh, nature heritage so I can travel around Vietnam and take up many pictures with them, uh, with.

✓ Of course, in my country. Vietnam has many natural heritage sites, so I can travel around Vietnam and take many pictures of them.

Errors include incorrect preposition 'made' and awkward 'take up many pictures with them'. Use 'has' for possession ('has many natural heritage sites') and 'pictures of them' to indicate the object of photos. Also 'natural' is the correct adjective before 'heritage sites'. Suggestion: use 'take pictures of' + object, and 'around' is fine for traveling within a country. Grammar problem type ID:11