Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答能表达喜欢拍照的意思，但语言不够自然，句子结构和时态使用不准确，有多余词汇（例如“as”）。建议用简单清晰的主句直接回答，随后用一到两句具体细节支持（地点、场景或原因），并注意语法和时态一致。可练习将复合想法分成不超过五句。

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. I often take photos when I encounter beautiful or unusual scenes, such as a colorful sunset or an interesting street mural. For me, taking pictures helps preserve memories and share experiences with friends.

Sugerencia: 回答存在词汇错误（“roots”应为 “routes”/“scenes”/“views” 或表达城市），填词停顿多且语法不清晰，信息重复。建议先直接给出偏好（urban areas），然后用一到两条具体原因支持（例如建筑、夜景或多样性），并用连接词（because, for example）组织句子，避免不必要停顿。

Ejemplo: I prefer urban views because cities offer a variety of scenes, from modern architecture to lively streets. For example, city sunsets behind skyscrapers often create striking silhouettes and colorful skies.

Sugerencia: 回答能表达想去国外的意愿，但语法和词汇错误较多（例如“use”应为“views”，时态和动词形式错误），表达重复且不够具体。建议先明确偏好（other countries），然后给出具体原因（新奇文化、不同 landscapes），并用一两个例子说明，同时注意动词时态和单词拼写。

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries because they feel new and exciting to me. For instance, seeing ancient temples or coastal landscapes in another country would offer experiences and scenery I can't find at home.

× Of course, when I saw all those beautiful views or some special views, I would take pictures of them as.

✓ Of course, when I see beautiful or special views, I take pictures of them.

原句时态混乱且用词多余。考官问一般喜好，应使用一般现在时而不是过去时或条件式 “would”。“saw” 应改为 “see”；“would take” 改为一般现在时 “take”。去掉多余的 “as”。建议在描述习惯时使用一般现在时，如 “I see... I take...”

× I prefer roots in urban areas because I think the, uh, views there will be more, uh, enjoy for uh, for example, those sunsets will be amazing with the the, uh, wider sky.

✓ I prefer views in urban areas because I think the views there are more enjoyable; for example, the sunsets look amazing against the wide sky.

原句中 “roots” 用法错误，应为 “views”。短语 “more enjoy” 语法不正确，需用形容词或形容词结构 “more enjoyable” 或副词结构；“will be” 在此描述偏好时用一般现在时更自然，改为 “are”。句中重复和填词（uh）应省略。建议学习形容词与副词的正确使用，表达偏好时用一般现在时。

× I prefer use in other other countries because I've barely went to other countries so I think the the offer they are unfamiliar to me and attract attracts me a lot.

✓ I prefer views in other countries because I've barely been to other countries, so I think they are unfamiliar to me and attract me a lot.

原句中 “prefer use” 是错误搭配，应为 “prefer views”。现在完成时后应接过去分词，原句 “I've barely went” 中 “went” 是一般过去时，正确为过去分词 “been”。“the offer they are” 语序和词汇混乱，简化为 “they are unfamiliar to me and attract me a lot”。建议复习现在完成时结构（have/has + 过去分词）以及常见动词搭配（prefer + 名词/动名词）。