Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundancy (e.g., "traveling and photographing" could be streamlined) and keep sentences to a maximum of five. Also use more precise vocabulary (e.g., "photography" instead of "photographing") and correct small grammar issues.

Ejemplo: Yes, I really enjoy taking photographs of different views. For example, I love shooting mountain landscapes — I’ve photographed parts of the Himalayas — and I plan to photograph tea gardens in Kerala and the Taj Mahal in the future.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear preference statement, then give two concise, specific reasons linked by a connective (e.g., "because" or "while"). Avoid vague phrases like "etcetera" and correct grammar ("which brings" → "which bring"). Keep the response to two or three sentences for clarity.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views because they bring me close to nature and help me relax — for instance, I enjoy visiting mountain areas and reservoirs. However, when I’m at home I also like city parks for a quick escape.

Sugerencia: Give a direct, balanced answer and avoid repetition. Use linking words (e.g., "both, because") and provide one specific example for each side. Remove unnecessary phrases and fix grammar ("both the countries" → "both countries", "yet to tick" → "yet to tick off").

Ejemplo: I like views in both countries because my homeland has amazing spots like Rajasthan and Kerala that I want to tick off my list, while abroad I’m excited to see places such as Italy for its landscapes and architecture.

× I love travelling and photographing like I have travelled some of the places in my bucket list which includes beautiful mountains to the north covering the Himalayas.

✓ I love travelling and photographing; I have visited some places from my bucket list, which include beautiful mountains to the north, including the Himalayas.

The original sentence mixes forms and has awkward phrasing. 'Travelling' and 'photographing' are fine as -ing nouns, but 'like' is misused and 'I have travelled some of the places' is incorrect collocation. Use 'I have visited some places from my bucket list' and ensure subject-verb agreement: 'places... which include' (plural). Also add punctuation to separate clauses and replace 'covering' with 'including' for clarity.

× There are places that are yet to visit like the Kerala Tea Gardens, Rajasthan Deserts and the Taj Mahal.

✓ There are places that I have yet to visit, such as the Kerala tea gardens, the Rajasthan deserts and the Taj Mahal.

The phrase 'yet to visit' needs a subject: 'I have yet to visit'. Also use 'such as' rather than 'like' for examples in formal speech, and include articles and correct capitalization: 'the Kerala tea gardens', 'the Rajasthan deserts'. This fixes sentence structure and clarity.

× I love going to rural areas wherein there are beautiful mountains, dams which brings me close to nature and relaxes me from within whereas in my native land I love going to the city parks, malls etcetera.

✓ I love going to rural areas, where there are beautiful mountains and dams that bring me close to nature and relax me from within; in my native land I enjoy visiting city parks and malls.

Use 'where' instead of 'wherein' for natural speech. 'Dams which brings' is incorrect: 'dams' (plural) requires 'bring' not 'brings', and 'that bring me close...' is more natural. 'Relax me from within' is odd; 'relax me' or 'help me relax' is better. Replace 'etcetera' with examples or omit. Also adjust prepositions: 'going to' vs 'visiting' for variety and naturalness.

× I love views in both the countries like in my native country there are beautiful places to visit and there are yet to tick in my bucket list like the Kerala, Rajasthan, Jaipur etcetera.

✓ I love views in both my country and abroad; in my native country there are beautiful places to visit that I have yet to tick off on my bucket list, such as Kerala, Rajasthan and Jaipur.

Do not use 'in both the countries' — say 'in both my country and abroad' or 'in both countries'. 'There are yet to tick' is ungrammatical; use 'that I have yet to tick off on my bucket list'. Use 'such as' for examples and list regions/cities without redundant commas. 'Kerala, Rajasthan, Jaipur' capitalization is fine but keep consistent punctuation.

× Whereas there are foreign beautiful lands which include Italy.

✓ There are also beautiful foreign places, such as Italy.

'Whereas' is used to contrast two clauses and is incorrectly placed at the start of this standalone sentence. Use 'also' to add information. 'Foreign beautiful lands' is awkward; 'beautiful foreign places' is natural. Use 'such as' for examples.