Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 간결하게 직접 질문에 답한 후, 이유나 예시로 한두 문장을 덧붙여 답변을 확장하세요. 현재 답변은 짧고 정보가 부족합니다. 예를 들어 어떤 장면을 좋아하는지(예: 풍경, 건축물, 인물), 사진을 찍는 목적(취미, 기록, 예술) 등을 구체적으로 말하면 점수가 올라갑니다. 발음에서 ‘really’나 ‘pictures’ 같은 단어를 또박또박 말하고 불필요한 망설임(uh)을 줄이세요.

Ejemplo: Yes, I really enjoy taking pictures. I especially like capturing cityscapes and sunsets because the changing light makes each photo unique. For example, last weekend I photographed the river at dusk and got some colourful reflections that I was proud of.

Sugerencia: 문장을 정확한 문법으로 정리하고 불필요한 반복과 망설임을 제거하세요. 주제문으로 바로 시작한 뒤 이유와 구체적 예시(예: 카페, 공원, 산책로 등)를 연결어(for example, because, so)를 사용해 명확히 제시하면 좋습니다. 현재는 동사 형태 오류('it have' → 'they have' 또는 'there are')와 의미가 애매한 부분('but it's not')이 있어 이해가 어렵습니다.

Ejemplo: I prefer urban areas because they have many cafés and parks where I can walk my dog. For example, there is a riverside park near my home that offers nice views and interesting architectural backdrops.

Sugerencia: 의도를 분명히 하고 문장을 문법적으로 바로잡으세요. 현재 답변에는 의미 불명확한 표현('sour salt is so high')과 문장 구조 오류가 있습니다. 먼저 주제문(own country)으로 답하고, 이유를 구체적이고 논리적으로 제시하세요(예: 높은 빌딩, 야경, 친숙함). 연결어(because, when, for instance)를 사용해 문장을 매끄럽게 이어야 합니다.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country because I love the skyline and tall buildings. When the sun goes down, the city lights create beautiful night scenes that I enjoy photographing.

× I prefer urban areas because uh, it have uh, many cafe and parks, uh, where I walk with dog, uh, it is beautiful urban areas, but it's not.

✓ I prefer urban areas because they have many cafes and parks where I walk with my dog; they are beautiful urban areas.

The original sentence has multiple subject-verb agreement and related errors. 'It have' is incorrect because the subject refers to plural 'urban areas' so the verb should be 'have' with the plural subject 'they' (Grammar problem type ID 27). 'Many cafe' should be plural 'many cafes' (Grammar problem type ID 1). 'Walk with dog' needs the possessive pronoun 'my' (Incorrect use of pronouns, ID 12). 'It is beautiful urban areas' mixes singular 'it is' with plural 'urban areas'; use 'they are' to match number (Subject-verb agreement, ID 27). Suggestion: identify the true subject (urban areas), ensure verbs and pronouns agree in number, pluralize countable nouns, and include possessive pronouns where appropriate.

× I prefer in my own country because I love sour salt is so high, uh, high buildings and is uh, when sun's down, it's beautiful, uh, night.

✓ I prefer my own country because I love the tall buildings; when the sun goes down, the night is beautiful.

This sentence contains several issues. 'I prefer in my own country' should be 'I prefer my own country' (preposition unnecessary; Sentence structure error, ID 26). 'Sour salt is so high' is unclear and likely a mis-speech; interpreted as 'tall buildings' which requires adjective 'tall' with plural noun 'buildings' (Incorrect use of adjectives or nouns, IDs 13 and 1). 'And is uh, when sun's down, it's beautiful, uh, night' mixes structures and omits articles: use 'when the sun goes down, the night is beautiful' to correct verb tense and article use (Present tense phrasing, ID 6; Article errors, ID 22). Suggestion: use clear noun phrases, include necessary articles ('the'), use correct adjective-noun order, and form the time clause with 'when the sun goes down'.