Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make the response more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition (e.g., "because" twice) and correct small grammar errors ("picture" → "pictures", "the more details" → "more details").

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views, especially nature. I find that photographing a scene helps me notice fine details, such as textures of leaves and subtle light changes, which I often overlook when just looking with my eyes.

Sugerencia: Give a direct topic sentence and support it with clear, specific reasons. Fix grammar and word choice ("view" → "views", "a many" → "many", remove double words, "human being" → "people"). Use a linking phrase like "for example" or "because" once to connect ideas and keep it within 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in urban areas because cityscapes showcase diverse architecture. For example, I enjoy looking at old cathedrals next to modern skyscrapers, which makes me curious about the history and engineering behind those buildings.

Sugerencia: Respond with a concise topic sentence and one specific supporting reason. Correct grammar and phrasing ("prefer much more the view" → "prefer the views in my own country", "they give me a feeling of nostalgia that I experience as a child" → "they make me feel nostalgic because of childhood memories"). Use a linking word like "because" and avoid vague phrases like "just dive in into that feeling."

Ejemplo: I prefer the views in my own country because they make me feel nostalgic. For instance, visiting the old streets and parks where I played as a child brings back warm memories and a sense of comfort.

× I like taking picture of the different views such as nature because I can feel, because I can see the more details in the photos that I usually don't notice in real life.

✓ I like taking pictures of different views, such as nature, because I can see more details in the photos that I usually don't notice in real life.

The noun 'picture' should be plural 'pictures' to match general activity of taking many photos (singular/plural issue). 'The different views' is better as 'different views' (unnecessary definite article). 'I can feel, because I can see the more details' is redundant and 'the' before 'more details' is unnecessary; remove redundancy and article. Suggestion: use plural nouns for general activities and avoid unnecessary articles and repetitions.

× I really prefer view in urban areas because I can see a many different architectural structure that people made and I just wonder how how that is possible for human being to do that.

✓ I really prefer views in urban areas because I can see many different architectural structures that people have built, and I wonder how that is possible for human beings to do.

Multiple plural errors: 'view' should be 'views' and 'architectural structure' should be plural 'architectural structures' to match 'many' (singular/plural issue). Also 'a many' is incorrect—use only 'many'. 'People made' should be 'people have built' (past participle with present perfect) but that falls under past participle; however focus here is plural. Suggestion: ensure nouns match quantifiers and use plural when referring to multiple items.

× I really prefer much more the view in my country because they give me a feeling of nostalgia that I experience as a child and visit the familiar places and just dive in into that feeling.

✓ I much prefer the views in my country because they give me a feeling of nostalgia from when I was a child; I visit familiar places and immerse myself in that feeling.

Pronoun disagreement: 'the view in my country' is singular but followed by 'they give me' (plural pronoun). Change to plural 'views' to match 'they' or change pronoun. Also 'experience as a child' should be 'from when I was a child' to clarify time. 'Dive in into' is incorrect preposition repetition; use 'immerse myself in' (pronoun and preposition use). Suggestion: keep noun and pronoun numbers consistent and use correct verb forms and prepositions for clarity.