Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but has hesitations, repetition and lacks a clear structure. Aim for a concise topic sentence, one or two supporting details, and avoid filler words (uh, um). Use linking words (for example, so, therefore) and more precise vocabulary (memories → keepsakes; capture → photograph). Keep it under five sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views, especially while travelling. For example, I often take landscape shots to keep the memories of special moments. I usually edit a few photos and share them with friends and family on social media, so they can see what I experienced.

Sugerencia: Your answer expresses preference but is unclear and contains grammatical errors and hesitations. Start with a direct topic sentence stating your general preference or that it depends, then give two concise reasons using linking words (for example, however, because). Correct grammar (e.g., 'take a breath of fresh air' → 'get fresh air'). Avoid asking questions at the end.

Ejemplo: It depends on my mood: sometimes I prefer urban views because I enjoy the lively streets and architecture, but other times I choose rural scenery to relax and get fresh air. For instance, after a busy week in the city I go to the mountains to unwind and enjoy quiet nature.

Sugerencia: Your response gives a clear preference but is repetitive and grammatically weak. Provide a clear topic sentence, then give specific reasons or an example. Reduce filler words and correct verb agreement ('my country has nice places'). Use linking words like 'however' or 'because' properly.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries because I enjoy exploring new cultures and architecture. For example, visiting a foreign city lets me discover unfamiliar streets and local food, which makes travelling more exciting, although my own country also has beautiful places.

× Yes, I like to capture different scenery from different views, especially when I travel uh, this, uh, help me to memorize these special moments and after capturing this, I really, I do share these memories on social media with the friends and family uh, I think that for me, capturing or.

✓ Yes, I like capturing different scenery from different views, especially when I travel; this helps me to remember these special moments, and after capturing them I share these memories on social media with friends and family.

The original contains incorrect verb forms and several sentence-structure issues. 'Like to capture' is acceptable but 'like capturing' is more natural with general preference (Verb + -ing form). 'This, uh, help' uses base form 'help' where third-person singular is needed (this helps) — that is also subject-verb agreement but corrected here. 'Memorize' is not the best collocation for remembering experiences; use 'remember'. 'After capturing this' should match plural 'these moments' so use 'after capturing them'. Remove unnecessary fillers and redundancies to improve clarity. Suggestion: use 'like + -ing' for habitual preferences and ensure verbs agree with their subjects; replace 'memorize' with 'remember' for experiences.

× Well actually it depends. Sometimes I want to see the busy city in the countryside while other times I just want to relax and see the to see the mountain and drivers in the rural area.

✓ Well, actually it depends. Sometimes I want to see the busy city, and other times I just want to relax and see the mountains and rivers in rural areas.

The original misuses prepositions and contains wrong nouns. 'Busy city in the countryside' is contradictory; likely meant 'busy city' (urban) versus countryside, so separate with 'and'. 'See the to see the mountain and drivers' has word errors: 'mountain' should be plural 'mountains' and 'drivers' is incorrect — likely 'rivers'. Use 'in rural areas' rather than 'in the rural area' for general preference. Suggestion: choose correct prepositions and plural forms when speaking about general places (in rural areas).

× This helped me to relax and taking a fresh air.

✓ This helps me relax and get some fresh air.

The sentence incorrectly mixes past tense 'helped' with present context and uses wrong verb form 'taking' and incorrect article 'a fresh air'. For general statements about what a place does for the speaker, use present simple 'helps'. Use the base verb 'get' for 'get some fresh air' and uncountable phrase 'fresh air' without 'a'. Suggestion: keep tense consistent (present simple for habitual or general effects) and use correct collocations ('get fresh air' or 'get some fresh air').

× So it depends on the time that what?

✓ So it depends on the time or the situation.

The original is fragmented and unclear ('depends on the time that what?'). Replace with a complete noun phrase 'depends on the time or the situation' to express that preference varies with circumstances. Suggestion: avoid leaving questions incomplete and use a complete clause or noun phrase to finish the thought.

× Well, I think that I prefer, uh, views in other countries. However, my place in my country have, has nice places, but, uh, but uh, I want to see and explore new cities and, uh, I enjoy seeing new things in other countries. Uh, so for me, I prefer to.

✓ Well, I prefer views in other countries. However, my country has many nice places, but I want to see and explore new cities, and I enjoy seeing new things in other countries. So for me, I prefer that.

The original mixes singular/plural and incorrect pronoun/possessive usage: 'my place in my country have, has nice places' is redundant and ungrammatical. Use 'my country has many nice places'. Remove filler words 'uh' and redundant phrases. 'So for me, I prefer to.' is incomplete; finish the sentence ('I prefer that' or 'I prefer views in other countries'). Suggestion: use correct subject-verb agreement with country as subject ('my country has'), avoid redundant possessives, and complete sentences to convey full meaning.