Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Improve grammatical accuracy, word choice and sentence structure. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two concise supporting details using correct tense and vocabulary. Avoid redundancy and unclear words (e.g., "implicit").

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views, especially landscapes when I travel abroad. For example, I like photographing unfamiliar coastal cliffs and traditional architecture because they offer unique colors and shapes I've never seen at home.

Sugerencia: Focus on clear, correct grammar and concise supporting detail. Begin with a direct answer, then give one or two specific reasons linked with connectors like "because" or "so". Use correct nouns (nature, scenes) and avoid unnecessary words.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in rural areas because they are full of nature and peaceful landscapes. Since I work in a busy city, I visit the countryside when I have free time to enjoy fresh air and scenic views.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and use clearer vocabulary and examples. Avoid filler words and correct plural/singular forms (buildings, scenes). Provide a specific reason and an example of countries or features you like.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries because I rarely have the chance to travel, so foreign buildings and landscapes feel more exciting and different. For instance, I enjoy the traditional temples in Japan and the modern skylines of Korea because they contrast with what I see at home.

× I do love take a pictures in a different views or landscape, especially when I go abroad.

✓ I do love taking pictures of different views or landscapes, especially when I go abroad.

The verb 'love' should be followed by the -ing form 'taking' not the base verb 'take'. Also 'a pictures' mixes singular article with plural noun; use 'pictures' without 'a'. Use 'of' with 'pictures' and plural 'views' and 'landscapes' to match meaning. Suggestion: practice verb + -ing after verbs of preference and correct article-noun agreement. Grammar problem type ID: 8

× The scene I never met or seen before in my life does make me implicit.

✓ Scenes I have never met or seen before in my life really surprise me.

The student used incorrect past forms and auxiliary: 'never met or seen before' requires present perfect 'have never met or seen' to link past experience to present. 'Does make me implicit' is incorrect vocabulary and structure; 'really surprise me' or 'impress me' fits. Suggestion: use present perfect for experiences and choose appropriate verbs. Grammar problem type ID:5

× I prefer Will in rural areas because it's full of the natures and the scene that I don't have much opportunity to miss because I work in the urban area so when I have times I visit.

✓ I prefer rural areas because they are full of nature and scenes I rarely get to see since I work in an urban area, so I visit when I have time.

Several issues: 'Will' is incorrect word choice; remove it. Use plural pronoun 'they' to agree with 'rural areas' (third person plural). 'the natures' is uncountable 'nature' not 'natures'. 'the scene that I don't have much opportunity to miss' is incorrect: should be 'scenes I rarely get to see'. 'when I have times' should be 'when I have time'. Suggestion: ensure subject-pronoun agreement and use uncountable nouns correctly. Grammar problem type ID:2

× I prefer the view in another country because that I said we never have much opportunity to see the other country bills and I think it's more beautiful than the scene in my country, uh, as well as umm, Japan or Korea.

✓ I prefer views in other countries because we rarely have the opportunity to see the buildings in other countries, and I think they are more beautiful than the scenes in my country, for example Japan or Korea.

Problems: 'the view in another country' should be plural 'views in other countries' to match general statement. 'because that I said' is ungrammatical; remove 'that I said'. 'we never have much opportunity' is better as 'we rarely have the opportunity'. 'other country bills' likely meant 'buildings'; use correct noun. Pronoun agreement: refer to 'buildings' and 'scenes' with 'they'. Suggestion: simplify sentence structure, avoid redundant phrases, and choose correct nouns and pronouns. Grammar problem type ID:12