Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be clear and directly answer the question (views, not meals). Use a concise topic sentence, then one or two specific supporting details with linking words. Reduce hesitation and avoid repetition. Focus on natural phrasing and correct word choice (e.g., “angles,” “composition,” “mood”).

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because photography helps me capture the mood of a place. For example, I pay attention to the composition and angles to show depth, and I often shoot at different times of day to record changing light.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear direct answer (e.g., “I like both”), then give specific contrasting details using linking words (e.g., “whereas,” “for example”). Avoid vague phrases and filler sounds. Use accurate vocabulary for urban (skyscrapers, streets, architecture) and rural (fields, countryside, traditional crafts).

Ejemplo: I like both urban and rural views. Urban scenes offer dynamic architecture and bustling streets, whereas rural areas provide peaceful landscapes and traditional farms, so I choose depending on the mood I want to capture.

Sugerencia: Answer directly (e.g., “I prefer views in other countries”) and explain with two clear reasons using linking words (e.g., “first,” “also”). Be specific about what you notice (architecture, streetscapes, cultural scenes) and avoid repetition. Keep the response within four sentences and use correct collocations (e.g., “cleanliness of the streets,” “local customs”).

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries because they show different architectural styles and cultural scenes. For example, I enjoy photographing narrow historic streets in Europe and colorful markets in Asia, which reveal local customs and daily life.

× Yes, I like taking pictures of different meals.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different scenes.

The student used 'meals' (food) instead of a word meaning 'views' or 'scenes'. This is a word choice error related to prepositional idea and meaning. Use 'of different scenes' or 'of different views' to match the question about views.

× It gives me the different directions give exactly uh, in the uh angles of what we are taking the pictures and it shows the accurate or not accurate.

✓ It gives me different perspectives and shows the exact angles of the pictures, and whether they are accurate or not.

Multiple problems: unnecessary definite article 'the' before 'different directions'; awkward repetition and sentence structure. The correction removes incorrect articles and restructures the sentence for clarity. Use 'different perspectives'/'angles' and 'whether they are accurate or not'.

× I cannot say it accurate.

✓ I cannot say it is accurate.

The sentence is missing the verb 'is'. This is a sentence structure error. Use the verb 'is' to link subject 'it' and complement 'accurate'.

× I can say it in a positive ways.

✓ I can say it in a positive way.

'Ways' is plural while the indefinite article is missing; also 'positive' modifies 'way' so singular 'way' is appropriate. Use singular noun 'way' with 'a' or change to 'in positive ways' without 'a' if plural is intended.

× It gives a complete an idea of the picture exactly.

✓ It gives a complete idea of the picture.

The sentence contains both 'a' and 'an' before 'idea' causing redundancy and wrong article usage. Remove the extra article and 'exactly' is unnecessary; keep the concise phrase.

× I prefer views in both the usual urban as well as in the rural areas.

✓ I prefer views in both urban and rural areas.

'Both the usual urban as well as in the rural areas' is wordy and uses incorrect articles and prepositions. Use the quantifier 'both' followed directly by the nouns 'urban and rural areas' for clarity.

× Urban areas gives a wide variety of uh, uh, waves are erased buildings and all, whereas the rural areas gives the good landscape and agricultural forms and uh complete well-being and handmade things we can.

✓ Urban areas give a wide variety of buildings and scenery, whereas rural areas offer good landscapes, agricultural features, and handmade products.

'Urban areas' is plural and requires the plural verb 'give' (subject-verb agreement). Also 'gives' was repeated for 'rural areas'. The sentence had many word choice and word order issues; corrected to use plural verbs and clearer vocabulary ('scenery', 'landscapes', 'agricultural features', 'handmade products').

× I prefer views in foreign countries because it gives us an exactly how it looks, how the neatness, how the cleanliness, how the streets are, how the lands are, how the people are and everything.

✓ I prefer views in foreign countries because they show exactly how places look: their neatness, cleanliness, streets, land, people, and so on.

Several preposition and pronoun errors: 'it gives us an exactly how it looks' is ungrammatical. Use plural 'they' to refer to 'views' or 'places' and a noun phrase 'show exactly how places look'. List items should be parallel ('their neatness, cleanliness, streets').

× Everything I like about the foreign countries and I would prefer for the foreign countries as well.

✓ I like everything about foreign countries and would prefer to visit them as well.

'The foreign countries' and 'prefer for the foreign countries' are incorrect uses of articles and prepositions with pronouns. Use 'foreign countries' without 'the' in general statements, and 'prefer to visit them' for clarity and correct pronoun reference.