Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make the response more natural and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two supporting details using linking words. Correct common errors (e.g., 'exciting' → 'excited', 'for all views that I watch it' → 'of the views I see during the day'). Keep it under five sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. I often take photos of views I see during the day because they help me remember special moments. For example, I like capturing morning light on buildings or green parks when I walk to work.

Sugerencia: Give a clear direct answer followed by specific reasons and use correct grammar. Use linking words (because, for example, and) and correct singular/plural and article use (e.g., 'rural areas' or 'the countryside', 'there are beautiful views'). Avoid trailing hesitations.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural areas because they offer wide green spaces and peaceful scenery. For example, I enjoy photographing rolling hills and small villages, which feel more relaxing than busy city streets.

Sugerencia: Answer clearly and give specific supporting details; correct grammar and word choice (e.g., 'landscapes that are very beautiful and magnificent'). Use linking words to expand briefly and give an example or reason.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country because it has diverse landscapes that are both beautiful and unique. For instance, we have coastal cliffs and mountain trails that I find more familiar and meaningful than places I haven't visited.

× I'm very exciting to have a memorable picture for all views that I watch it through the day.

✓ I'm very excited to have memorable pictures of the views I see during the day.

The student used the adjective 'exciting' (which means 'causing excitement') instead of the adjective 'excited' (which describes a person's feeling). Also 'a memorable picture for all views that I watch it through the day' is unnatural: use plural 'pictures' or 'a memorable picture' and 'of the views I see during the day' is clearer. Suggestions: replace 'exciting' with 'excited', use 'pictures of' or 'a picture of', and change 'watch' to 'see' and 'through the day' to 'during the day'.

× To be honest, I like a rural areas because.

✓ To be honest, I like rural areas because...

The phrase 'a rural areas' mixes the singular article 'a' with the plural noun 'areas'. Remove the article to use the plural 'rural areas', or use singular form 'a rural area'. Suggestion: choose one number: 'a rural area' or 'rural areas'.

× There is a beautiful views and a wide green areas that's very beautiful and uh.

✓ There are beautiful views and wide green areas that are very attractive.

'There is' should be 'There are' because the subject 'views' and 'areas' are plural. 'A beautiful views' and 'a wide green areas' use the singular article 'a' with plural nouns; remove 'a'. Also 'that's' refers to singular; use 'that are' for plural. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement with 'there is/there are' and match articles to singular/plural nouns.

× There is a beautiful views and a wide green areas that's very beautiful and uh.

✓ There are beautiful views and wide green areas that are very attractive.

The repeated use of 'beautiful' is stylistically weak; replace one with a synonym like 'attractive' or 'scenic'. Also avoid filler 'uh' in formal responses. Suggestion: vary adjectives to improve fluency and clarity.

× I prefer views in my country because there are many places and landscape that is very beautiful and very magnific

✓ I prefer views in my country because there are many places and landscapes that are very beautiful and magnificent.

The sentence mixes plural and singular: 'many places and landscape' should be 'many places and landscapes'. 'That is' should be 'that are' to agree with plural noun. 'Magnific' is incorrect; use 'magnificent'. Suggestions: make nouns and verbs agree in number and use the correct adjective form 'magnificent'.

× I prefer views in my country because there are many places and landscape that is very beautiful and very magnific

✓ I prefer views in my country because there are many places and landscapes that are very beautiful and magnificent.

'That is' does not agree with the plural subject 'places and landscapes'; use 'that are'. Also correct spelling of 'magnific' to 'magnificent'. Suggestion: ensure verbs agree with compound subjects and check adjective spelling.