Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more natural and clear: answer directly, avoid hesitations and incorrect word choices. Start with a topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Also correct grammar (verb tenses, articles, plural forms) and reduce repetition.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. I enjoy photographing landscapes whenever I travel because I like capturing different colors and light. For example, on my last trip I took many photos of mountains and lakes, which helped me remember the trip better.

Sugerencia: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence, then give specific reasons and use linking words. Fix vocabulary and grammar (use correct place names, articles, and comparative phrasing). Keep it within 3–4 concise sentences.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views because they are quieter and full of nature. For instance, when I have free time I visit nearby villages where I can see fields and hills, which helps me relax. Also, the fresh air and open spaces are a nice change from city crowds.

Sugerencia: Give a clear direct answer and then contrast with the other option using linking words (however, although). Use more precise vocabulary and grammar (countable nouns, articles). Provide one specific example to support your opinion.

Ejemplo: I usually prefer views in my own country because it already has many beautiful places such as beaches, waterfalls and hills. However, I also enjoy visiting other countries occasionally because they offer different cultures and landscapes that I find interesting.

× I'm a very photogenic person.

✓ I like taking photographs of scenery.

The original sentence 'I'm a very photogenic person' is not appropriate for the context: the student likely means they enjoy taking photos, not that they themselves look photogenic. This is a lexical/word-choice issue (incorrect adjective use). Suggest using a clear, context-appropriate phrase: 'I like taking photographs of scenery.'

× That's why, uh, when I uh, visited, uh, many beautiful, uh, place always I taking a photo in different, different fields.

✓ That's why when I visit many beautiful places, I always take photos of different scenes.

Multiple issues: incorrect tense and verb form ('visited' vs present habitual 'visit'), singular/plural ('place' should be 'places'), word order ('always I taking' is incorrect), and verb form ('taking' should be 'take'). According to the instruction only apply listed types; primary issues fall under 'Sentence structure errors' and 'Singular and plural issue' and 'Verb + -ing form'. The corrected sentence uses present simple for habitual action, plural noun, correct word order, and base verb form. Suggest practicing subject-verb order and plural nouns.

× I always prefer rural areas because I live in Arvind areas so when I get free time always I visit a rural areas.

✓ I always prefer rural areas because I live in Arvind, so when I have free time I always visit rural areas.

Errors include unnecessary pluralization ('Arvind areas' and 'a rural areas') and awkward word order. 'Arvind' likely refers to a place and should not take 'areas' after it unless intended; 'a rural areas' mixes singular article with plural noun. Also verb tense: 'get free time' is better as 'have free time.' The correction fixes pluralization and word order. Suggest using 'have free time' and match article with noun number.

× Higher is full of natural views and I feel refreshed.

✓ It is full of natural scenery and I feel refreshed.

'Higher' is incorrect word choice here (likely 'here' intended). 'Natural views' is acceptable but 'natural scenery' sounds more natural. The sentence needed a subject pronoun 'It' to refer to the area. This is primarily an adjective/word-choice error and also a missing/incorrect pronoun. Suggest substituting correct place words and using 'scenery.'

× Actually it's a depend uh, I uh, prefer always our own country uh, because our country also full of umm beautiful places like sea, beach, waterfall, hills umm uh.

✓ Actually it depends. I always prefer our own country because it also has many beautiful places like the sea, beaches, waterfalls, and hills.

'It's a depend' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'it depends' (present simple with verb). The original also lacks the verb 'has' for 'our country also full' and has singular/plural mismatches ('beach' vs 'beaches', 'waterfall' vs 'waterfalls'). This is primarily modal/verb usage and present tense issues. The correction uses correct verb forms and plural nouns. Suggest learning the fixed expression 'it depends' and using 'has' to describe possession.

× On the other hand, I also like other countries beauty also.

✓ On the other hand, I also like the beauty of other countries.

The original misorders words and omits the possessive structure: 'other countries beauty' should be 'the beauty of other countries' or 'other countries' beauty.' This is an incorrect use/placement of noun phrases and possessive form (pronoun/possessive structure). The correction uses the correct possessive structure. Suggest practicing possessive 'of' constructions and placing adjectives/adverbs correctly.