Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition and filler sounds, and give one or two specific examples with brief reasons. Also vary vocabulary (e.g., use 'landscapes' or 'scenery') and correct small grammar (e.g., 'mine and the nature' → 'people and nature' or just 'nature').

Ejemplo: Yes — I enjoy photographing different views, especially natural scenery. For example, I often photograph sunsets and gardens because I like the rich colors and contrasts they create in a photo.

Sugerencia: Clarify and correct content: give a clear topic sentence stating your preference, avoid contradictory statements (rural areas are usually less congested), and support your opinion with specific reasons or examples. Use linking words (for example, however) to connect ideas and fix grammar errors.

Ejemplo: I prefer urban views because my city has many tree-lined streets and public ponds. For example, there is a riverside park near my apartment where I can photograph reflections and city skylines together.

Sugerencia: Provide a clearer, structured response: start with 'It depends' then immediately state the main factor (season/weather), and give one specific comparison (e.g., summer in my country vs. winter abroad). Avoid hesitations and vague phrases like 'concrete type', replace with precise descriptions (e.g., 'bare trees' or 'less colorful').

Ejemplo: It depends on the season — I prefer views at home in summer because the parks are full of flowers and greenery, but I enjoy views abroad in winter if I can photograph snowy landscapes, which are quite different from our bare trees.

× I love to take pictures of mine and the nature.

✓ I love to take pictures of nature and of my surroundings.

The phrase 'mine and the nature' is incorrect because 'mine' is a possessive pronoun used alone (meaning 'those that belong to me') and cannot modify 'nature'. Use 'my' with a noun (my surroundings) or simply 'nature'. Rewriting to 'nature and of my surroundings' clarifies meaning and uses correct possessive form.

× Nature like sunset, uh, trees, gardens, flowers.

✓ Nature includes sunsets, trees, gardens, and flowers.

The original uses 'like' incorrectly with the singular noun 'nature'. 'Nature' as a collective noun takes verbs like 'includes' or 'consists of'. Also pluralize items (sunset -> sunsets) and add commas for a list. This yields grammatically correct subject-verb agreement and clearer enumeration.

× I love them because of their color contrast and the colorfulness of the nature.

✓ I love them because of their contrasting colors and the colorfulness of nature.

Use 'contrasting colors' instead of 'color contrast' for natural phrasing, and remove the definite article before 'nature' ('the nature' is generally incorrect). 'Their' correctly refers to the plural items (flowers, trees), so keep it. The revision improves idiomatic expression.

× I prefer views in urban areas because rural areas are are more congested and have concrete views.

✓ I prefer views in urban areas because rural areas are more congested and have concrete views.

There is a duplicated 'are are' — remove the extra word. The verb 'are' correctly agrees with plural 'rural areas'. The correction fixes the typo and preserves subject-verb agreement.

× But in the urban side we can see that we found here ponds, trees and more natural views.

✓ But in urban areas we can find ponds, trees and more natural scenery.

Original mixes tenses and has redundant words ('we can see that we found here'). Use consistent present-tense modal 'can find' and replace 'the urban side' with 'urban areas'. 'Natural scenery' is more idiomatic than 'natural views'. This corrects sentence structure and tense consistency.

× That's why I prefer urban areas.

✓ That's why I prefer urban areas.

This sentence is correct. It uses the demonstrative 'That' and contraction 'That's' appropriately to refer to the previous reason. No change needed.

× It depends.

✓ It depends.

This short answer is acceptable in context as it correctly responds to the question. No grammatical change required.

× It specially depends on the uh, weather or season, because sometimes we can see that in the winter season the leaves of the trees falls, then the natural looks so umm, concrete type.

✓ It especially depends on the weather or the season, because sometimes in winter the leaves fall and nature looks bare and drab.

Use 'especially' rather than 'specially' for emphasis. Remove filler ('uh', 'umm'). 'Winter season' can be shortened to 'winter'; 'the leaves of the trees falls' has subject-verb agreement error — 'leaves' is plural so use 'fall'. 'The natural looks so concrete type' is ungrammatical and unclear; replace with 'nature looks bare and drab' to convey the intended meaning. These changes fix adverb choice, subject-verb agreement, and idiomatic expression.

× That's why it depends on the seasonal weather sometimes.

✓ That's why it sometimes depends on the season's weather.

Reorder for natural word order: place 'sometimes' before the verb or before the clause it modifies. 'Seasonal weather' is acceptable but 'season's weather' or 'the weather in a season' is more natural. The corrected sentence improves adverb placement and natural phrasing.