Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer shows enthusiasm but has many pronunciation and grammar errors, repetition, and unclear vocabulary (e.g. “beers” instead of “views”). To improve: 1) Use a clear topic sentence answering directly. 2) Avoid repetition; give one or two specific supporting details. 3) Use correct vocabulary and simple grammar (plural/singular, articles, and verbs). 4) Keep it to 2–4 sentences. For coherence, use a linking word before a supporting detail (e.g., “because” or “for example”).

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because each scene provides a unique background. For example, mountains give a dramatic backdrop, while city skylines add an energetic feel, so I choose a view based on the mood I want to capture.

Sugerencia: The answer is unclear and contains many hesitations, incorrect words (e.g. “paper bills,” “abuse”), and grammatical errors. To improve: 1) Decide and state a clear preference in one sentence. 2) Support it with 1–2 specific reasons using correct vocabulary (e.g. “tall buildings,” “natural scenery”). 3) Reduce hesitations and avoid repeating words. 4) Use linking words such as “because” or “however.”

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views because they offer natural scenery and peaceful settings. For example, fields and forests provide varied colors and textures that make photographs more interesting than the uniform look of many tall buildings in cities.

Sugerencia: Your answer communicates a preference but is confused by incorrect phrases (“paper bills,” “peers”) and grammar mistakes. To improve: 1) State your preference clearly in one sentence. 2) Give a concise, specific reason why (familiarity, cultural context, unique landscapes). 3) Use correct possessives and verb forms. 4) Keep to 2–3 sentences and use a linking word like “because” or “so.”

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country because I am familiar with the best locations and cultural details that make photos more meaningful. For instance, I know which traditional villages or landscapes look best at sunset, so I can plan shots more effectively.

× Yes, I like taking picture of different beers because different views gives give us a difference background and it helpful.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because different views give us a different background and they are helpful.

The sentence has several singular/plural mismatches: 'taking picture' should be plural 'taking pictures'; 'different beers' is incorrect word choice and likely 'different views'; 'views gives' should be 'views give' (plural subject with plural verb); 'a difference background' should be 'a different background'; 'it helpful' should be 'they are helpful' to agree with plural 'pictures' or 'views'. Suggestion: ensure nouns and verbs agree in number and replace incorrect nouns with intended ones.

× It helpful for a a helpful for a picture subject views.

✓ It is helpful for a picture subject's views.

The sentence repeats 'a' and omits the verb 'is'. Also 'picture subject views' needs a possessive to show the views belong to the picture subject: 'picture subject's views'. Suggestion: include the verb 'is', remove duplicate article, and use possessive form for clarity.

× I paper bills in, uh, our area, because urban areas is, uh, has lot of, uh, lot of uh, abuse like uh, uh, long, long, long, long build and an artificial.

✓ I prefer places in our area, because urban areas have a lot of buildings and artificial structures.

Multiple issues: 'I paper bills' is meaningless and likely intended 'I prefer places' (preference verb). 'Urban areas is' should be 'urban areas have' (subject-verb agreement and correct verb choice). 'has lot of' needs 'have a lot of' and 'build' should be 'buildings'. 'an artificial' is incomplete; use 'artificial structures'. Suggestion: use correct verbs ('prefer'), ensure subject-verb agreement (areas have), use correct countable nouns and complete noun phrases.

× I paper bills in on my country because my I knows about my about my country's peers like my natural views is very important for a picture background.

✓ I prefer places in my country because I know about my country's scenery; my natural views are very important for a picture background.

Errors include 'I paper bills' (should be 'I prefer places'), incorrect preposition 'in on my country' (should be 'in my country'), 'I knows' should be 'I know' (subject-verb agreement), 'country's peers' is wrong word choice — likely 'scenery', and 'my natural views is' should be 'my natural views are' (plural agreement). Suggestion: choose correct verbs and nouns, fix prepositions, and ensure verbs agree with subjects.

× That's why I papers on my.

✓ That's why I prefer them in my country.

'I papers on my' is ungrammatical: 'papers' is wrong verb form and 'on my' is incomplete. The intended meaning is 'I prefer them in my country'. Suggestion: use correct verb 'prefer' and complete the prepositional phrase 'in my country'.