Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more natural and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one clear reason with a linking word. Correct grammar (verb forms) and avoid redundancy.

Ejemplo: Not really. I prefer reading to taking photos because books help me relax and learn new things. For example, when I travel I usually bring a novel instead of a camera.

Sugerencia: Improve grammar and clarity: use a clear topic sentence, correct singular/plural and verb agreement, and give one specific example. Use a linking word like 'because' or 'for example'. Avoid repetition.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views because they make me feel calm and relaxed. For example, I enjoy watching mountain ridges and rivers at sunrise, which helps me unwind after a busy week.

Sugerencia: Be more specific and correct vocabulary. Give one main reason, use linking words, and provide a concrete example. Replace unclear phrases (e.g., 'blue face') with accurate terms like 'blue lakes' or 'coastline'.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country because it has diverse landscapes. For instance, we have scenic mountains and clear blue lakes that I love to visit on holidays.

× No, I don't like taking pictures of different views because I prefer reading rather than take photos.

✓ No, I don't like taking pictures of different views because I prefer reading rather than taking photos.

The structure 'prefer A rather than B' requires parallel forms. 'Reading' is a gerund here, so the second verb should also be a gerund ('taking') not the base form ('take'). Keep verb forms parallel to improve grammatical correctness. Suggestion: Use parallel gerunds after 'prefer ... rather than' (for example, 'I prefer reading rather than taking photos').

× I prefer views in rural areas because the areas in the villages makes makes me more relaxing and calm.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because the areas in the villages make me more relaxed and calm.

The subject 'areas' is plural, so the verb must be 'make' (not 'makes'). Also 'relaxing' describes something that causes relaxation; the speaker's state should be 'relaxed'. Remove duplicate word 'makes'. Suggestion: Ensure subject and verb agree in number and choose appropriate adjective for the subject's state (use 'relaxed' for a person feeling calm).

× I like seeing the mountains, rivers and song.

✓ I like seeing the mountains, rivers and the sea.

The word 'song' is incorrect in this context; likely the student meant 'sea' or 'lake'. Also add 'the' for specific natural features if needed. Choose correct noun vocabulary to match intended meaning. Suggestion: Use correct nouns for natural features (mountains, rivers, sea/lake) and include articles when referring to specific features.

× I like views in my country. My country is very big. There are many beautiful things in my country, the scenic mountains, the blue face and every.

✓ I like views in my country. My country is very big. There are many beautiful things in my country: the scenic mountains, the blue sky and everything.

'The blue face' is wrong—likely 'blue sky' is intended. 'Every' is incomplete; use 'everything'. Use a colon or conjunction to list examples and correct nouns. 'The' before 'scenic mountains' and 'blue sky' is appropriate when specifying features. Suggestion: Use correct vocabulary ('sky' not 'face'), complete words ('everything'), and proper punctuation or conjunction when listing examples.