Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be direct and use correct tense and grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and keep it under five sentences. For example, say whether you like landscape photos or people photos, explain why, and give a brief example.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of both landscapes and people. For example, I often photograph my friends because those pictures capture special moments and memories. Also, landscape photos remind me of places I have visited, so I keep both types in my album.

Sugerencia: Answer the question directly (urban or rural) with a clear reason, use correct vocabulary, and avoid unclear words. Use a linking word to add a specific detail or example. Keep it concise and grammatical.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural areas because I enjoy peaceful natural scenery. For instance, I like photographing mountains and rivers since they offer calm atmospheres and unique colors at sunrise.

Sugerencia: Give a direct answer and then support it with specific reasons or examples. Use correct grammar and linking words to connect ideas. Mention particular places or features you like to make the response concrete.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country because I feel connected to its landscapes and culture. For example, Japan has beautiful coastal towns and mountain scenery that I know well, so I enjoy photographing familiar spots that reflect my heritage.

× Yes I did, but I also like taking a picture of my with my friend.

✓ Yes I do, but I also like taking a picture of me with my friend.

The student used 'did' which indicates past tense but the context is general preference so present tense 'do' is correct. Also 'my' is the wrong pronoun; the object form 'me' must be used after a preposition. Suggestion: use present simple for habits ('I do') and use object pronouns after prepositions ('with me').

× This is so memory for me.

✓ This is such a memorable moment for me.

'Memory' is a noun and cannot directly modify 'for me' in this way. The student likely meant an adjective meaning 'easy to remember' — 'memorable' — and to specify it as 'memorable moment'. Also 'so' + adjective is acceptable ('so memorable'), but 'such a memorable moment' is more natural. Suggestion: use adjective forms to describe experiences and include a suitable noun ('moment', 'memory').

× Good memory for me.

✓ It is a good memory for me.

This fragment lacks a clear subject and verb. Adding 'It is' makes a complete sentence. Alternatively combine with previous sentence. Suggestion: ensure each sentence has a subject and verb; avoid sentence fragments.

× And.

✓ (Delete)

'And.' is a sentence fragment with no content. Remove it or complete the thought. Suggestion: avoid leaving single conjunctions as sentences.

× Umm. I like I like a ruler every year the photo because I like jewelry movies.

✓ Umm. I like to take photos every year because I like scenic views.

The original contains many errors: 'I like I like' is repetitive, 'a ruler' and 'jewelry movies' appear to be incorrect words likely meant 'rural' and 'scenery' or 'scenic views'. The action of regular activity should use 'like to take' or 'like taking'. Suggestion: use clear verbs ('take photos') and correct vocabulary ('rural', 'scenic views').

× This is so beautiful view.

✓ This is such a beautiful view.

When modifying a noun with an adjective and an article, use 'such a' + adjective + noun. 'So' would require just the adjective ('This view is so beautiful'). Suggestion: choose correct structure: 'such a beautiful view' or 'so beautiful' with the adjective after 'is'.

× I prefer people in my country because I'm Japanese.

✓ I prefer places in my country because I'm Japanese.

The student said 'prefer people' which doesn't match question about views/places. 'Places' fits context. If they meant 'people', further clarification is needed. Suggestion: use context-appropriate nouns; here 'places' or 'views' is correct.

× So yeah, I'm proud of my country and my country is a has a good view.

✓ So yeah, I'm proud of my country, and my country has good views.

The phrase 'is a has a' is ungrammatical; remove extra verb and article. Use plural 'views' for general statement about scenery. Also combine clauses with a comma. Suggestion: use simple present 'has' for general truths and pluralize when speaking generally ('views').