Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more grammatically accurate, concise and organized. Start with a clear topic sentence answering the question, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and correct verb forms (e.g., “I take” not “I taking”).

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. For example, when I travel I always photograph landscapes because they help me remember the trip, and later I can look back at those images to relive the experience.

Sugerencia: Give a direct topic sentence and then add specific reasons with linking words. Use singular/plural correctly and tidy word order. Limit to about three sentences and include concrete examples.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views to urban ones because there is more greenery and natural scenery. For instance, I enjoy photographing mountains, lakes and waterfalls, which offer peaceful backgrounds and varied colors for my pictures.

Sugerencia: Clarify your main point and avoid fillers. Provide a clear reason and one specific example. Correct factual phrasing (e.g., "Mount Everest is in my country" only if true) and use linking words like “because” or “for example.”

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country because I feel more connected to familiar landscapes. For example, the nearby mountains and rivers are easy to visit and photograph, and they remind me of home, so I often choose them over foreign scenery.

× Yes I do every time I taking picture of difference view whenever I go anywhere I like to take pictures and it's all it's kind of memories we will remember in our later lives. So it's good idea for taking picture to collect and.

✓ Yes, I do. Every time I go somewhere, I take pictures of different views. I like to take pictures because they are memories we will remember later in life. So it is a good idea to take pictures to collect memories.

The student used incorrect verb forms: 'I taking' should be 'I take' (simple present for habitual actions). 'Difference view' should be 'different views' (adjective and plural). 'Whenever I go anywhere' is redundant; 'every time I go somewhere' is clearer. 'It's all it's kind of memories we will remember in our later lives' is ungrammatical and unclear; use 'they are memories we will remember later in life'. Suggestions: use simple present for habits, use correct adjective 'different', pluralize countable nouns, and simplify repetitive phrases. Grammar problem type ID:8

× I prefer views and rural areas because there are lots of greenery and mountain and everything there is like a lake, river and waterfall. We are taking pictures so I like to take.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because there is a lot of greenery and mountains, and there are features like lakes, rivers, and waterfalls. I like to take pictures there.

Errors with singular/plural and article usage: 'views and rural areas' should be 'views in rural areas'. 'Lots of greenery and mountain' — 'mountain' should be plural 'mountains' and 'a lot of' is more natural than 'lots of' before uncountable/collective nouns. 'A lake, river and waterfall' should be plural 'lakes, rivers, and waterfalls' or 'features like lakes, rivers, and waterfalls'. Also 'We are taking pictures so I like to take' is awkward; change to 'I like to take pictures there.' Suggestions: match singular/plural forms, use 'there is/there are' correctly, and choose consistent plural nouns when listing multiple features. Grammar problem type ID:1

× I prefer my own country because in my country, uh, topist Mount Everest in my country, so so I just log my country and there is lots of greenery and rivers, no one bit from no one or challenge about.

✓ I prefer my own country because Mount Everest is there, and my country has a lot of greenery and many rivers. I feel comfortable in my country and there are no challenges for me in that respect.

This sentence has serious structure and word-choice issues. 'Topist Mount Everest in my country' is ungrammatical; correct form is 'Mount Everest is there' or 'my country has Mount Everest'. 'So so I just log my country' is unclear; likely meant 'so I like my country'. 'No one bit from no one or challenge about' is nonsensical; interpreted as 'there are no challenges for me in that respect'. Suggestions: reorder ideas into clear clauses, use subject-verb-object structure, avoid fillers like 'uh' and repeated words like 'so so', and replace unclear phrases with concrete expressions. Grammar problem type ID:26