Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make the response more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct minor grammar (e.g., 'patience in taking pictures') and avoid redundancy.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, I like exploring various angles and lighting because it helps me create more interesting compositions; in doing so, I practise patience and attention to detail.

Sugerencia: Give a clear topic sentence and provide two specific reasons with linking words. Correct grammar and word choice (e.g., 'at night', 'avenues surprise me' or 'are surprising'). Keep sentences shorter and natural.

Ejemplo: I prefer urban views, especially at night, because the illuminated buildings and busy streets create a vibrant atmosphere. For instance, I enjoy watching people walking by and the neon-lit stores, which often surprise me with unexpected scenes.

Sugerencia: Make the answer more direct and grammatically correct. Start with a clear preference, then give one specific reason and a brief example using linking words. Avoid vague phrases like 'which is very real' and restructure the second sentence for clarity.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries because travel exposes me to different cultures and fresh perspectives. For example, visiting a foreign city once made me rethink my priorities after seeing different lifestyles, whereas in my own country I still enjoy discovering new places close to home.

× I think the process of finding different angles is a way to make the picture more beautiful, and this represents my patience on taking picture.

✓ I think the process of finding different angles is a way to make the picture more beautiful, and this shows my patience in taking pictures.

Use of preposition: 'patience on' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'patience in'. Also 'taking picture' needs plural 'pictures' or an article; 'taking pictures' is natural. 'Represents' is acceptable but 'shows' is more natural here; however it is optional. Suggestion: use 'patience in taking pictures' to be idiomatic.

× I prefer views in urban areas, especially ones in night because I love these buildings, stores, people walking by and the avenues really surprised me.

✓ I prefer views in urban areas, especially at night, because I love the buildings, shops, people walking by, and the avenues really surprise me.

Preposition and time expression: use 'at night' not 'in night'. Word choice: 'stores' is acceptable but 'shops' is more natural; maintain article consistency: 'these buildings' -> 'the buildings' refer generally. Tense/verb agreement: 'surprised me' implies past; since speaking generally, use present simple 'surprise me'. Also list punctuation improved. Suggestion: use 'at night' and present tense for general preferences.

× I would say in the other countries because the experiences of visiting another country can give me a whole new perspective about my life, which is very real.

✓ I would say in other countries because the experience of visiting another country can give me a whole new perspective on my life, which feels very real.

Article use: 'in the other countries' is incorrect; say 'in other countries' for generalization. Count/number: 'the experiences of visiting another country' sounds awkward—use singular 'the experience' for the idea in general. Preposition: use 'perspective on my life' rather than 'about my life'. Word choice: 'which is very real' -> 'which feels very real' is more natural. Suggestion: use 'in other countries' and 'perspective on'.

× In the visiting of my own country also, I like facing new things.

✓ When visiting my own country, I also like encountering new things.

Phrase and preposition: 'In the visiting of my own country' is ungrammatical; use 'When visiting my own country' or 'When I visit my own country'. Verb choice: 'facing new things' is understandable but 'encountering new things' is more natural. Word order: place 'also' near the verb: 'I also like' or 'I like ... also'—here 'I also like encountering new things' is clear. Suggestion: use 'When I visit my own country, I also like encountering new things.'