Typing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Reduce hesitations and filler words.

Ejemplo: I prefer typing for most school work because it is faster and easier to edit. However, I usually handwrite my diary and brainstorming notes because writing by hand helps me think more creatively and remember ideas better.

Sugerencia: Give a direct opening sentence and correct small errors (plural/singular). Remove fillers and add a brief specific example of use to make the answer more concrete.

Ejemplo: I usually type on a laptop keyboard every day because it's portable and convenient. For example, I use my laptop to write assignments and to type notes when I brainstorm ideas for projects.

Sugerencia: Fix grammar and give a clear time reference followed by a coherent explanation. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide one specific detail about lessons or practice.

Ejemplo: I learned to type when I was in primary school, around age eight. We had regular computer lessons where the teacher taught us typing basics, and afterwards we had to use computers for homework which helped me practice a lot.

Sugerencia: Organize into a clear topic sentence and supported details. Correct word choice (e.g. 'typing' not 'drying', 'speed' not 'speech'). Mention a specific routine or tool to show concreteness.

Ejemplo: I improve my typing by practicing every day. Specifically, I spend 15 minutes each morning on online typing exercises and timed tests to increase my speed and accuracy, and I track my progress with a typing app.

× Oh I I think it's really depends on what I'm doing.

✓ Oh, I think it really depends on what I'm doing.

Remove the extra 'I' and use the base form 'depend' with 'it' + 'really' + 'depends' is third person singular present; the original had an extra pronoun and incorrect verb form. Suggestion: say 'I think it really depends...' for natural present-tense opinion.

× For school exercise I usually type because it's much faster, but for my diary or brainstorming I often use umm, handwriting.

✓ For school exercises I usually type because it's much faster, but for my diary or brainstorming I often use handwriting.

Use plural 'exercises' to refer generally (singular 'exercise' without article is incorrect). Remove filler 'umm' and the comma before 'handwriting' is unnecessary. Suggestion: use plural for general activities and avoid fillers in formal answers.

× Uh, I usually type on my laptop keyboard every day because I think it's a faster way for me to, uh, do assignment or write some brainstorming about my, uh, exercise.

✓ Uh, I usually type on my laptop keyboard every day because I think it's a faster way for me to do assignments or write some brainstorming about my studies.

Use plural 'assignments' for general tasks; 'do assignment' is incorrect. Also 'write some brainstorming about my exercise' is unclear; 'studies' or 'schoolwork' fits better. Maintain simple present for habitual action. Suggestion: use plural nouns for general activities and clearer nouns like 'studies'.

× I learned to type on keyboard when I was about attended primary school.

✓ I learned to type on the keyboard when I was attending primary school.

Original mixes past simple 'learned' with wrong clause 'was about attended'. Use continuous 'was attending' to indicate the time period when learning occurred, and include the article 'the' before 'keyboard'. Suggestion: say 'I learned to type on the keyboard when I was attending primary school.'

× And we had made these computer lessons, so my teacher.

✓ We had computer lessons, and my teacher taught us how to use the computers.

Original is a fragment and incorrect tense 'had made these computer lessons' is unnatural. Recast into a full sentence describing that lessons existed and the teacher's role. Suggestion: use clear subject and verb, e.g. 'We had computer lessons, and my teacher taught us how to use the computers.'

× All the people typing in needed to use computers for homework.

✓ Everyone needed to use computers for homework.

'All the people typing in' is awkward and unclear. Use 'everyone' as the subject and keep past tense 'needed' consistent. Suggestion: simplify phrases to 'Everyone needed to use computers for homework.'

× Drying every day.

✓ Practicing every day.

'Drying every day' is incorrect word choice and form. The intended meaning is to 'practice' typing daily; use the -ing gerund as part of a sentence such as 'I practice every day' or 'Practicing every day.' Suggestion: use 'practice/practicing' for rehearsal activities.

× Well, I practice every day because I really because I would love practice the best way for me to improve my typing skills.

✓ Well, I practice every day because I believe practice is the best way for me to improve my typing skills.

Original repeats 'because' and omits necessary words ('love practice' is ungrammatical). Rephrase to express belief that practicing helps improvement. Suggestion: avoid repetition and include proper nouns/verbs: 'practice is the best way...'.

× I use online typing exercise and time tests each morning to increase my speech and accuracy.

✓ I use online typing exercises and timed tests each morning to increase my speed and accuracy.

Use plural 'exercises' and 'timed tests' (adjective + noun). 'Increase my speech' is incorrect; the intended word is 'speed'. Also 'time tests' should be 'timed tests'. Suggestion: choose accurate vocabulary and correct noun forms.