Building— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be concise, grammatically correct and clearer. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using correct grammar and linking words. Avoid invented phrases like “go to the fastest” or “yarn”; use ‘yard’ and correct verb forms. Keep to 2–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: No, there aren’t many tall buildings near my home. I live in the countryside, so most houses are small or medium-sized and have a small yard or garden. Because the area is mostly residential, there hasn’t been much high-rise development.

Sugerencia: Answer directly, then explain briefly with clear grammar and vocabulary. Use linking words (for example, because, so) and replace unclear phrases like “refer taking photos about landscape a symbolism.” Mention specific subjects you photograph and why.

Ejemplo: Not really. I usually photograph landscapes rather than buildings because I love watching sunrises and sunsets at the beach. For example, I enjoy capturing the colours of the sky and reflections on the water.

Sugerencia: Give one clear example and explain why with specific, accurate language. Correct grammar (it belongs to Ho Chi Minh City; it is one of the tallest buildings). Avoid unclear phrases like “see the paranormal” unless you mean something specific; perhaps say ‘see the view’ or ‘observe the cityscape.’ Use linking words such as because or so.

Ejemplo: I would like to visit Landmark 81 in Ho Chi Minh City because it is one of the tallest buildings in Vietnam. I want to go to the observation deck to see the skyline and get a panoramic view of the city.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and give two clear reasons with correct grammar and linking words. Replace ambiguous words like “symbolism.” Use plural/singular correctly (tall buildings, have) and connect thoughts logically (for example, because… so…). Keep to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: No, I wouldn’t want to live in a tall building. I think flats in high-rises can feel small, and I would be concerned about emergencies such as fires because evacuation could be difficult if elevators are unavailable.

× A simple reason go to the fastest if I live in the countryside and most of house are small and middle sized with a small yarn or garden.

✓ A simple reason is that I live in the countryside and most of the houses are small and medium-sized with a small yard or garden.

Errors: missing article 'a' before 'simple reason', incorrect verb 'go to the fastest' (sentence structure) — classified here as article errors because definite/indefinite articles are missing/incorrect and 'house' needs plural with article. Suggestion: Use 'a simple reason is that' to introduce explanation; use 'the houses' or 'houses' with correct plural; use 'medium-sized' and 'yard' spelling. Ensure subject and verb ('are') agree with plural 'houses'. Note: Although other issues exist (sentence structure, word choice), only article-related and plurality corrections are applied per instructions.

× A simple reason go to the fastest if I live in the countryside and most of house are small and middle sized with a small yarn or garden.

✓ A simple reason is that I live in the countryside and most of the houses are small and medium-sized with a small yard or garden.

Error: 'house' should be plural 'houses' when referring to most of them; 'yarn' is incorrect word, should be 'yard'. Suggestion: Use plural nouns when referring to multiple items and check vocabulary (yard not yarn). Also add 'the' before 'houses' if referring to specific group.

× A simple reason go to the fastest if I live in the countryside and most of house are small and middle sized with a small yarn or garden.

✓ A simple reason is that I live in the countryside, and most houses are small and medium-sized with a small yard or garden.

Error: 'go to the fastest' is ungrammatical and the sentence lacks a linking verb; the clause order is confusing. Suggestion: Use 'A simple reason is that' to introduce explanation, connect clauses with 'and', and place modifiers ('medium-sized') immediately before the noun.

× A simple reason go to the fastest if I live in the countryside and most of house are small and middle sized with a small yarn or garden.

✓ A simple reason is that I live in the countryside, and most houses are small and medium-sized with a small yard or garden.

Error: 'go to the fastest' uses incorrect verb form and tense; 'go' is wrong here. Suggestion: Use present simple 'is' to state a reason and present simple 'are' for permanent facts.

× I refer taking photos about landscape a symbolism go to the fact that I love seeing the sunsets or sunrise on the beach and it brings me the feeling fascinating.

✓ I prefer taking photos of landscapes because I love watching sunsets or sunrises on the beach, and they make me feel fascinated.

Error: 'refer taking photos about' uses incorrect prepositions; 'about' should be 'of' and 'go to the fact that' is wrong. Suggestion: Use 'prefer taking photos of landscapes' and 'because' to express reason. Use plural 'sunsets' and 'sunrises' and correct verb 'watching' or 'seeing'.

× I refer taking photos about landscape a symbolism go to the fact that I love seeing the sunsets or sunrise on the beach and it brings me the feeling fascinating.

✓ I prefer taking photos of landscapes because I love seeing sunsets or sunrises on the beach, and they make me feel fascinated.

Error: 'fascinating' is used incorrectly as a noun phrase 'the feeling fascinating'; should be 'feel fascinated' or 'find it fascinating'. Suggestion: Use 'they make me feel fascinated' or 'I find it fascinating' to convey emotion correctly.

× It's belong to Ho Chi Minh City.

✓ It belongs to Ho Chi Minh City.

Error: 'It' refers to a singular building and requires singular verb 'belongs'; classification here as singular/plural because original phrase 'It's belong' mixes contraction and base verb. Suggestion: Use 'belongs' for third-person singular.

× It's belong to Ho Chi Minh City.

✓ It belongs to Ho Chi Minh City.

Error: Third-person singular requires adding -s to the verb 'belong'. Suggestion: Use 'belongs' with he/she/it subjects in present simple.

× I think it's a one of the tallest building in my country and I want to go to there to see the paranormal of the.

✓ I think it's one of the tallest buildings in my country, and I want to go there to see the panorama of it.

Errors: 'a one of the' is wrong — use 'one of the' without 'a'; 'building' should be plural 'buildings' after 'one of the'; 'go to there' should be 'go there'; 'paranormal' is incorrect word, likely 'panorama'. Suggestion: Use 'one of the tallest buildings' and 'go there' and check correct vocabulary.

× I think it's a one of the tallest building in my country and I want to go to there to see the paranormal of the.

✓ I think it's one of the tallest buildings in my country, and I want to go there to see its panorama.

Error: Incorrect article and phrase order 'a one of the' and misplaced 'to' in 'go to there'; sentence ends with incomplete phrase 'paranormal of the'. Suggestion: Remove 'a', use plural 'buildings', use 'go there', and replace 'paranormal' with correct noun 'panorama' or 'view'.

× Definitely not a symbolism.

✓ Definitely not, symbolically.

Error: The original sentence 'Definitely not a symbolism' is ungrammatical; modal/attitudinal phrase unclear. Classified here for modal/attitudinal use because speaker expresses refusal. Suggestion: Say 'Definitely not' or 'Definitely not, symbolically' depending on intended meaning; better: 'Definitely not'.

× If I think most tall building has small spaces and I worry about the emergency such as the fire, it's a difficult to find the elevator.

✓ I don't want to. I think most tall buildings have small spaces, and I worry about emergencies such as fire; it would be difficult to find an exit or the elevator.

Errors: Run-on and incorrect clauses: 'If I think' is unnecessary; subject-verb agreement; 'a difficult' wrong article usage; unclear phrase 'find the elevator'. Suggestion: Use conditional or declarative structure ('I think...'), plural 'buildings' with 'have', 'emergencies' plural, and 'difficult to find an exit' or 'difficult to reach the elevator'.

× If I think most tall building has small spaces and I worry about the emergency such as the fire, it's a difficult to find the elevator.

✓ I think most tall buildings have small spaces, and I worry about emergencies such as fire; it is difficult to find an elevator in an emergency.

Error: Subject-verb agreement: 'most tall building has' should be 'most tall buildings have'. Suggestion: Make the noun plural and match the verb accordingly; use plural 'emergencies' for general situations and correct article use with 'an elevator'.