Building— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid hesitations and repetition. Correct verb agreement and word order (e.g., 'Both my home and the Canton Tower are located in Haizhu District').

Ejemplo: Yes. There is a tall building near my home called the Canton Tower. It and my neighborhood are both located in Haizhu District, and the tower is a famous landmark in Guangzhou, known for its evening light displays.

Sugerencia: Use a clear conditional sentence and link clauses properly. Begin with a direct answer, then explain with specific details and a linking word like 'because' or 'if'. Reduce filler words and keep it under five sentences.

Ejemplo: Sometimes. If a building has an interesting structure or attractive ornaments, I will take photos because I like architectural details. If a building seems ordinary, I usually don't bother taking pictures.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and organize time references correctly. Avoid contradictory phrasing and split ideas into coherent sentences with linking words (e.g., 'however', 'but'). Be specific about which building and when you plan to visit.

Ejemplo: Not at the moment, but I plan to visit some buildings after my exams. For example, I would like to tour the Canton Tower next month because I've never been there and it offers great views.

Sugerencia: Give a clear opening sentence and concrete reasons. Use correct collocations (e.g., 'goodwill' is wrong here; say 'many advantages' or 'benefits') and avoid repeated words. Include a linking word to connect reason(s).

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because it has several benefits. For example, I could enjoy beautiful night views and a wide cityscape from a high floor, and it would usually be quieter than street-level apartments.

× Yes, the tall building, there is a tall building near my home that's uh, Canton Tower.

✓ Yes, there is a tall building near my home; it's Canton Tower.

The original repeats 'the tall building' and misorders the existential 'there is' construction. Use 'there is' before the noun phrase and use 'it's' to identify the building. Also omit the unnecessary repeated article and pause words for clarity.

× Umm, both my home and the Canton Tower was located in Hydro District, and it was the, uh, landmark of Guangzhou is very famous.

✓ Umm, both my home and the Canton Tower were located in the Hydro District, and it was a very famous landmark of Guangzhou.

Subject 'both my home and the Canton Tower' is plural and requires the plural verb 'were' (subject-verb agreement). Use the article 'the' with 'Hydro District' and change phrasing to 'a very famous landmark' to form a correct noun phrase. Remove redundant 'is'.

× It depends, if the building with amazing structures or ornaments I will take some photo of that well, if not I will just pass.

✓ It depends; if the building has amazing structures or ornaments, I will take some photos of it; if not, I'll just pass.

The original lacks the verb 'has' after 'building' to complete the conditional clause. Use plural 'photos' for multiple pictures and the pronoun 'it' to refer back to 'building'. Use the contraction 'I'll' for future intention and commas to separate clauses.

× And to be honest, I don't want to visit any buildings recently, but I think I will go to visit. Some after the examination.

✓ To be honest, I don't want to visit any buildings right now, but I think I will visit some after the examination.

Using 'don't want to visit... recently' mixes present simple with 'recently' (which suits present perfect). Replace 'recently' with 'right now' to match present tense. Also correct word order: 'visit some after the examination' and remove the unnecessary period.

× Absolutely yes, because I think it will have a goodwill and you can overlook the beautiful night view and the city city landscape.

✓ Absolutely yes, because I think it would have good views and you could overlook the beautiful night view and the city landscape.

'Goodwill' is incorrect in this context; use 'good views' or 'a good view'. Use 'would' or 'could' for hypothetical ability and remove the duplicated word 'city'. 'City landscape' is sufficient. Adjust articles and modal verb for natural phrasing.