Building— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and correct grammar: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid filler sounds and article errors. Also use precise vocabulary (e.g., offices, companies, shopping malls, grocery stores).

Ejemplo: Yes. There are many tall buildings near my home because I live in the city. For example, there are office towers, company headquarters and several shopping malls nearby, so the area is very busy.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and confidently. Use correct modal verbs and tense. Provide a brief reason and one specific condition when you would take photos. Remove hesitation words and correct articles and plurals.

Ejemplo: Not usually, because my schedule is very hectic and I rarely go out. However, if I had free time, I would take photos of different buildings and try to capture various angles and perspectives.

Sugerencia: Give a clear topic sentence naming the building and a specific reason. Avoid unclear phrases (e.g., "I have 12 busy and a time"). Use linking words to show intention or future plans and be specific about when or why you will visit.

Ejemplo: Yes. I would like to visit the city museum near my home because it has interesting historical exhibits. In the future, I plan to go there with my friends during a weekend when I am free so we can explore the exhibits and spend time together.

Sugerencia: State your preference clearly, give two specific reasons, and use correct conditionals for future possibilities. Fix grammar and vocabulary (e.g., "student" unclear; use "student" only if relevant). Keep it to two or three sentences.

Ejemplo: No, I prefer living in a small house because it feels more cozy and is cheaper to rent. However, if I had the opportunity in the future, I might live in a tall apartment building with my family for convenience and better facilities.

× Yes, there are a lot of the tall buildings in near my homes because I lived in a city.

✓ Yes, there are a lot of tall buildings near my home because I live in a city.

The phrase 'a lot of the tall buildings' incorrectly uses the definite article and plural possessive; 'a lot of' should be followed directly by the noun without 'the'. 'in near my homes' mixes prepositions and plurality: use 'near my home' for a single location. 'I lived' implies past time, but the context asks about current surroundings, so use present simple 'I live'. Suggested improvement: omit unnecessary articles after 'a lot of', use correct preposition 'near', keep singular 'home' when referring to where you live, and match tense to the context.

× So that's why there are near office and another companies, uh etcetera.

✓ So that's why there are offices and other companies nearby.

The original misuses 'near' before a noun and uses 'another companies' which mixes singular 'another' with plural 'companies'. Use plural 'offices' and 'other companies'. Place 'nearby' or 'near' after the noun: 'companies nearby'. Suggested improvement: use 'other' for plural nouns and place prepositions/adverbs correctly.

× But on the another hand, there are a lot of the malls of and also grocery shops.

✓ But on the other hand, there are a lot of malls and grocery shops.

'On the another hand' is wrong; use 'on the other hand'. 'a lot of the malls of' contains unnecessary 'the' and extra 'of'. Use 'a lot of malls' or 'many malls'. Suggested improvement: learn fixed expressions ('on the other hand') and avoid extra articles after 'a lot of'.

× No, I can't take the any photos of that buildings because I have the hectic schedules.

✓ No, I can't take any photos of those buildings because I have a hectic schedule.

'Can't' is acceptable but 'the any photos' is incorrect: use 'any photos'. 'that buildings' mixes demonstrative 'that' with plural noun; use 'those buildings'. 'the hectic schedules' should be 'a hectic schedule' or 'hectic schedules' depending on meaning; here singular 'a hectic schedule' fits. Suggested improvement: use 'any' with negatives, match demonstratives to number, and choose singular/plural for 'schedule' consistently.

× Uh, I don't go any outside of my home.

✓ I don't go outside my home.

'go any outside of my home' is ungrammatical: 'any' is unnecessary here and 'outside of' can be simplified to 'outside'. Suggested improvement: remove unnecessary words for clearer sentences.

× Uh, but if I get a chance, I, uh, get, uh, I click the different type of the pictures and different views of the tall buildings.

✓ But if I get a chance, I take different types of pictures and shots of the tall buildings.

'I click' is informal and nonstandard for taking photos; use 'take'. 'the different type of the pictures' misuses articles and singular/plural; use 'different types of pictures' or 'different kinds of photos'. Also 'different views' can be 'shots' or 'angles'. Suggested improvement: use standard verbs for actions (take photos), match plural forms, and avoid repetitive filler words.

× Yes, of course I want to visit a museum in near my home because I have a hectic schedule so I have 12 busy and a time.

✓ Yes, of course I want to visit the museum near my home, but I have a hectic schedule and little free time.

Use 'the museum' if a specific nearby museum is intended. 'in near my home' is wrong: use 'near my home'. 'I have 12 busy and a time' is incoherent; likely intended 'little free time' or 'I'm very busy'. Replace with 'I have a hectic schedule and little free time'. Suggested improvement: choose correct article for specific places, use correct preposition 'near', and express time constraints clearly.

× But in future I usually visit the museum and tall buildings with my friends and I also spend the quality time with them at tall buildings.

✓ But in the future I will usually visit the museum and tall buildings with my friends, and I will also spend quality time with them at these buildings.

'In future' should be 'in the future'. 'Usually visit' with present simple conflicts with 'in the future'—use 'will' for future intention. 'spend the quality time' should be 'spend quality time'. Add 'these' or 'those' to specify the buildings. Suggested improvement: use 'will' for future intentions and correct collocations like 'spend quality time'.

× No, I do not want to live in the tall buildings because I like the small houses and as usually I have the students so I usually live in the rent house and everyone is very comfortable for me.

✓ No, I do not want to live in tall buildings because I prefer small houses. As a student, I usually live in a rented house, and it is very comfortable for me.

'the tall buildings' and 'the small houses' unnecessarily use 'the' when speaking generally. 'as usually I have the students' is incorrect; likely 'as a student' was intended. 'live in the rent house' should be 'live in a rented house'. 'everyone is very comfortable for me' is unclear; change to 'it is very comfortable for me'. Suggested improvement: avoid unnecessary definite articles for general statements, use correct noun phrase 'a student', and use 'rented house' for rented accommodation.

× But in if I get a chance in future I usually will leave in the tall buildings with my family members.

✓ But if I get a chance in the future, I will live in a tall building with my family.

'in if' is incorrect word order; use 'if'. 'in future' should be 'in the future'. 'usually will leave in the tall buildings' misuses 'leave' instead of 'live' and mixes 'usually' with future 'will' awkwardly. Use 'live in a tall building' (singular) or 'live in tall buildings' depending on meaning, and 'with my family' is sufficient. Suggested improvement: fix word order, choose correct verbs ('live' vs 'leave'), and use 'will' without 'usually' when expressing a specific future plan.