Food— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be direct, use correct vocabulary and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details (what dishes you mean and why you like them). Use linking words like “for example” correctly and avoid filler words like “etcetera” and repeated words.

Ejemplo: My favourite food is Nepali fusion cuisine. For example, I especially enjoy a Nepali dal-bhat dinner set and momo dumplings, because the flavours are hearty and familiar from my childhood.

Sugerencia: Use correct tense and be specific about examples and reasons. Begin with a clear statement about the past, then give one or two specific items and a brief reason. Avoid vague phrases like “dark foods” unless you explain them.

Ejemplo: When I was young, I really liked dark chocolate and other bitter sweets. I preferred them because I enjoyed the rich, slightly bitter flavour compared with very sweet candies.

Sugerencia: Correct grammar and vocabulary, and give clear seasonal contrasts with accurate linking words. Use present simple for habits, and avoid contradictory examples (lemonade in winter is odd). Provide two clear examples and a short reason for each season.

Ejemplo: Yes, we eat and drink different things depending on the season. For example, in summer I often drink mango shakes and eat fresh fruits to stay cool, while in winter I prefer hot tea and soups to keep warm.

Sugerencia: Use correct grammar and a clear structure: a direct answer then a brief explanation. Fix subject-verb agreement and vocabulary mistakes (“haven't” → “hasn't” and “jeans” → “cuisine”). Give a concise reason why it hasn’t changed.

Ejemplo: No, my favourite food has not changed since I was a child. I still enjoy Nepali cuisine because I grew up in a Nepali community and the flavours are part of my family tradition.

× My favorite food is Nepali fusion because I am Nepali so I like Nepali kusion for example, Nepali dinner set, Nepali kaza set, more more common etcetera.

✓ My favorite food is Nepali fusion because I am Nepali, so I like Nepali cuisine, for example Nepali dinner set and Nepali khaja set, which are very common.

The student used incorrect word forms (kusion, kaza) and awkward phrasing. 'Cuisine' is the correct noun. 'More more common' is ungrammatical; use 'very common' or 'more common'. Also add commas and connectives for clarity. Suggestion: learn correct vocabulary (cuisine, khaja) and use coordinating conjunctions and adjectives properly.

× When I am young, I like dark foods like dark chocolate etcetera.

✓ When I was young, I liked dark foods like dark chocolate.

The time clause 'when I was young' refers to the past, so the past tense 'was' and 'liked' must be used. Using present tense 'am' and 'like' with a past time expression is incorrect. Suggestion: match verb tenses to time expressions (use past tense for past time frames).

× Yes, we defend food at different times of year. Like in summer we we drink mango shake, banana shake, but in winter we drink hot tea, lemonade, etcetera.

✓ Yes, we eat different foods at different times of the year. For example, in summer we drink mango shakes and banana shakes, but in winter we drink hot tea and lemon tea.

'Defend food' is incorrect word choice; 'eat different foods' is appropriate. 'We we' is a repetition. Use plural forms for countable drink names (mango shakes). 'Lemonade' in British/Asian context can be confusing; 'lemon tea' or 'lemonade' must be consistent. Suggestion: choose correct verbs (eat, drink), avoid repetition, and use plural forms for multiple items.

× No, my favorite food haven't since when I was child. I like Nepali jeans. I grew up in Nepali community so I like Nepali cuisine.

✓ No, my favorite food hasn't changed since I was a child. I like Nepali cuisine. I grew up in a Nepali community, so I like Nepali food.

'Haven't' is incorrect with singular subject 'food'; use 'hasn't changed'. The clause 'since when I was child' is ungrammatical; use 'since I was a child'. 'Nepali jeans' is a wrong word; should be 'Nepali cuisine' or 'Nepali food'. Also include the article 'a' before 'Nepali community'. Suggestion: use present perfect for changes since a past time (hasn't changed), correct vocabulary (cuisine/food), and include needed articles.