Walking— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be direct and grammatical: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers, and add one specific detail with a linking word. Keep it under 3–4 short sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I walk a lot as part of my daily routine. For example, I usually walk for 30 minutes each morning to get exercise, and again in the evening to relax after work.

Sugerencia: Use past tense consistently and give a specific example. Use a linking word to connect ideas (e.g., "because" or "so"). Avoid mixing present and past forms.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often went outside to walk when I was a child. For instance, I would walk to my friends' houses in the evening because we liked playing in the street.

Sugerencia: Answer the question directly (people, not you) and give 2 clear reasons joined by linking words (e.g., "because", "so"). Use precise vocabulary like "relax" or "get fresh air."

Ejemplo: People like to walk in parks because they can relax and get fresh air. Also, parks are social places, so people often meet friends there in the evening to chat and enjoy themselves.

Sugerencia: Use the conditional correctly and give a clear location with reasons. Start with a topic sentence: name the place, then give 1–2 specific reasons connected by linking words.

Ejemplo: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk in a national park because the scenery would be peaceful and there would be many interesting trails. I would also enjoy walking there with my family to share the experience.

Sugerencia: Use the past tense for a recent action (e.g., "I went"), state a clear location and a specific detail about the walk. Keep sentences short and use linking words like "and" or "so."

Ejemplo: I went for a walk in the neighborhood park yesterday. I walked slowly at first to warm up, then I walked faster for about 20 minutes to get some exercise.

× Yes, I walk a lot of daily routine like uh, morning time and evening time.

✓ Yes, I walk a lot as part of my daily routine, in the mornings and in the evenings.

The student used an incorrect present tense structure and awkward noun phrases. Use 'walk' in simple present to describe a habitual action and a clearer noun phrase 'as part of my daily routine.' Also pluralize 'mornings' and 'evenings' for repeated times and add prepositions 'in the' for natural expression.

× Yes, I often go outside to evening time and I'm going to friends and families.

✓ Yes, I often went outside in the evenings and visited friends and family.

The question asked about childhood (past), so use past tense 'went' and 'visited.' 'Evening time' should be 'in the evenings.' 'Friends and family' is the correct collocation and should be singular 'family' when referring to the group.

× Yes, I like people who work in parks in morning time in a fresh mood and evening time that's chilling and enjoying in friends.

✓ I enjoy walking in parks in the mornings because the air feels fresh, and in the evenings it is relaxing and pleasant when I'm with friends.

The original sentence is fragmented and has unclear clauses. Reorganize into two coordinated ideas: mornings (fresh air) and evenings (relaxing with friends). Use 'in the mornings/evenings,' adjective 'relaxing,' and correct preposition 'with friends.'

× Yes, I would like to take a long walk if you had the chance is I was very appreciated in people to walk in parks and cheerful in your family.

✓ If I had the chance, I would take a long walk in a park because I appreciate seeing people walking and it makes me feel cheerful with my family.

The original mixes conditional forms and has pronoun mismatches. Use the correct second conditional: 'If I had the chance, I would...' Clarify reasons with proper verbs 'appreciate' and prepositions 'in a park' and 'with my family.' Ensure subject-pronoun consistency.

× I go for a walk lately to I am decided in walk and slowly and faster than other peoples.

✓ Lately I have been going for walks; I decide to walk slowly and sometimes faster than other people.

The adverb 'lately' requires present perfect continuous or present perfect simple: 'have been going.' The phrase 'I am decided in walk' is incorrect; use 'I decide to walk' or 'I choose to walk.' 'Peoples' is incorrect plural; use 'people.' Also separate ideas with a semicolon or conjunction and use adverbs 'slowly' and 'sometimes' to compare pace.