Walking— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and use linking words for contrast. Correct verb forms and eliminate duplicate phrases (e.g., "work from home" repeated). Add a brief reason or frequency phrase to enrich the answer.

Ejemplo: No, I don't walk a lot because I work from home and spend most of my time indoors. However, I occasionally go to the nearby park at weekends to have a short stroll and get some fresh air.

Sugerencia: Correct tense and clarity: use past tense consistently and avoid confusing statements ("because I work" is incorrect). Give a clear topic sentence then specific supporting details (how/where you played, frequency). Use linking words like 'also' or 'because'.

Ejemplo: Yes, I walked a lot as a child because my family lived close to the school. I usually walked to and from school every day, and I also spent afternoons playing football and riding bikes with my friends in the neighborhood.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear general reason first, then specific supporting points. Avoid fragmented sentences and repeat words. Use linking words (for example, because, so, therefore) and give concrete reasons people enjoy parks (relaxation, space for children, exercise).

Ejemplo: People like walking in parks because they offer open space and fresh air, especially in crowded cities. For example, in Malaysia many families choose parks at weekends to relax, let children play safely, and escape the busy malls.

Sugerencia: This answer is clear and personal; tighten phrasing and correct minor grammar. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give concise supporting reasons and one or two vivid details. Replace repetitions like "I would say I would".

Ejemplo: If money were no object, I'd love to take long walks in UK parks. I've visited twice and enjoyed their cosy, green spaces and cool weather, which feel much more comfortable than the heat in Malaysia.

Sugerencia: Use past tense and concise sentences. Give one clear statement about where you walked, then add specific reasons (convenience, quiet, facilities). Avoid sentence fragments and repetition.

Ejemplo: Recently I walked in the small park near my house because it's convenient and easy to access. The park is pleasant and quiet, with few people around, so it's perfect for relaxing walks.

× I don't typically walk a lot because I work from home and I tend to stays indoors and spend most of my time working from home.

✓ I don't typically walk a lot because I work from home and I tend to stay indoors and spend most of my time working from home.

The verb 'stay' was incorrectly given as 'stays' after the subject 'I'. With the first person singular subject, the base form 'stay' should be used. Suggestion: use the base verb after 'I' and after modal-like constructions such as 'tend to'.

× Although yes occasionally I do go to the park sometime on weekends to have a stroll and get some.

✓ Although occasionally I do go to the park on weekends to have a stroll and get some fresh air.

The original sentence ends with an incomplete phrase 'get some.' and uses redundant adverbs ('yes occasionally' and 'sometime on weekends'). This is a sentence structure/content issue (present participle not required). Suggestion: remove 'yes', use 'occasionally', 'on weekends', and complete the object 'get some fresh air' to make the sentence grammatical and natural.

× Yes, when I was a child I usually walk a lot because I work.

✓ Yes, when I was a child I usually walked a lot because I walked to school.

The speaker mixes past context ('when I was a child') with present tense verbs 'walk' and 'work'. Past-tense 'walked' should be used for habitual actions in the past. Also 'because I work' is inconsistent and likely intended to explain walking to school: replace with 'I walked to school' or clarify. Suggestion: use past simple for past habits.

× I walk to school from home and I would usually spend my time outside with my friends and playing.

✓ I walked to school from home and I would usually spend my time outside with my friends playing.

Mix of present and past tenses: 'I walk' should be past 'I walked' to match past context. Also the phrase 'and playing' is awkward after 'with my friends'; move 'playing' after 'friends' and remove redundant 'and' or change to 'and played'. Suggestion: keep tense consistent and place participle directly after the noun it modifies.

× I think for Malaysia, for a country like Malaysia, we have a lot of malls, especially in Kuala Lumpur. So during weekends I think most of the families. Would love to go to the park and spend their time there.

✓ I think in a country like Malaysia we have a lot of malls, especially in Kuala Lumpur, so during weekends I think most families would love to go to the park and spend time there.

The original has sentence fragments ('most of the families. Would love') and redundant phrasing. Combine into one sentence, remove unnecessary articles ('the') before 'families', and fix fragment by joining clauses. Suggestion: avoid fragments and keep clauses together to form complete sentences.

× If financial is not a constraint for me, I would say I would love to go to have a stroll in the parks in the UK because I've been in the UK twice and I love the parks there and it's cosy and bright and it's not as hot as in Malaysia.

✓ If finance is not a constraint for me, I would love to take a stroll in the parks in the UK because I've been there twice and I love the parks; they're cosy and pleasant, and it's not as hot as in Malaysia.

'Financial' is an adjective; the noun 'finance' or phrase 'financial situation' is needed. Redundant 'I would say I would love' simplified to 'I would love'. 'I've been in the UK' is acceptable but 'been there' is smoother. Also replace 'bright' (ambiguous) with 'pleasant' and combine clauses for fluency. Suggestion: use correct noun forms and avoid repetition.

× I only go to the park nearby to my house because it's close and it's easier and have a very good access for me.

✓ I usually only go to the park near my house because it's close, convenient, and easily accessible for me.

Mixed and awkward phrasing: 'park nearby to my house' should be 'park near my house'. 'It's easier and have a very good access' mixes subjects and verbs; use 'convenient' and 'easily accessible' to express meaning. Also habitual present acceptable as 'usually'. Suggestion: use fixed expressions 'near my house' and 'easily accessible'.

× And the park there is very nice. There's not. It's not crowded and there's not a lot of people.

✓ The park there is very nice. It's not crowded and there aren't a lot of people.

The original contains a sentence fragment ('There's not.') and incorrect quantifier agreement. 'A lot of people' with negation requires plural verb 'aren't' not 'there's'. Suggestion: remove fragments and match plural nouns with plural verb forms ('there aren't').