Walking— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more fluent and remove fillers (uh). Start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (e.g., “it is comfortable for me”), and keep to 1–3 concise sentences. Add a specific detail using a linking word to support your statement.

Ejemplo: Yes, I walk a lot. It is comfortable and good for my health, so every morning I walk in the garden with my friends and family.

Sugerencia: Use past tense consistently and avoid unnecessary phrases like “so as I remember.” Begin with a clear past-tense topic sentence, then add a specific supporting detail linked with a word like “because.”

Ejemplo: Yes, I often went for walks as a child. I usually walked with my grandfather in the mornings because he liked to show me the birds in the park.

Sugerencia: Be natural and concise. Use correct verbs and smoother phrasing (e.g., “people like to walk in parks because parks feel natural and relaxing”). Add a specific reason and link it with “because” or “for example.”

Ejemplo: People like to walk in parks because the natural environment is relaxing. For example, the trees and fresh air help many people reduce stress.

Sugerencia: Answer directly with a clear conditional sentence and correct vocabulary (e.g., “busy schedule”). Avoid repetition and unclear phrasing. State a place and a reason, linked by “because” or “so.”

Ejemplo: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk along the beach with my friends because the sea view and fresh air would be very relaxing.

Sugerencia: Use simple past for a recent completed action and avoid redundant phrases. Start with the direct answer, then add a short specific detail (when or who you went with).

Ejemplo: A few days ago I went for a walk in the local park with my family. We walked for about forty minutes around the lake.

× Yes, I usually walk a lot because uh, it is a com being comfortable for me and uh every morning I walk off walking in the garden with my friends and family.

✓ Yes, I usually walk a lot because it is a comfortable activity for me, and every morning I walk in the garden with my friends and family.

The original has awkward wording and incorrect adjective forms: 'it is a com being comfortable' is ungrammatical. Use the adjective 'comfortable' to describe 'activity' and simplify the phrase. Remove redundant 'walk off walking' and use 'walk in the garden'. Keep present simple for habitual action. Grammar problem type ID:13

× Yeah, so as I remember when I was a child, that time I walk with my grandfather in the morning and it is a very enjoyable for me.

✓ Yes, as I remember, when I was a child I walked with my grandfather in the morning and it was very enjoyable for me.

The sentence mixes past context with present verb forms. When referring to past habits use past simple 'walked' and 'was'. Also remove unnecessary fillers and correct 'a very enjoyable' to 'very enjoyable' because 'enjoyable' is an adjective and does not need 'a' here. Grammar problem type ID:6

× As per my perspective, people like to work in the park because of park gives a natural vibe and it feels comfortable people.

✓ From my perspective, people like to walk in the park because the park gives a natural vibe and people feel comfortable there.

Use the correct preposition 'from my perspective' instead of 'as per my perspective'. 'Work in the park' is wrong context; use 'walk in the park'. Add the definite article 'the park' and place 'there' to show location. Change 'it feels comfortable people' to 'people feel comfortable there' for correct word order and subject-verb agreement. Grammar problem type ID:11

× Nowadays I am suffering from active schedule, but if I got a chance to work, walk long, walk I. Openly walk with my friends.

✓ Nowadays I have a busy schedule, but if I got a chance I would take a long walk and walk openly with my friends.

The original is ungrammatical and disordered. Use 'have a busy schedule' to express current state. For hypothetical present/future use conditional: 'if I got a chance I would take a long walk'. Remove repeated fragments and place verbs correctly. 'Openly walk' is unclear; kept but adjusted to fit sentence. Tense alignment: present for current state and conditional for hypothetical. Grammar problem type ID:26

× Generally I am going to walk in the park with my friends and family, but as I remember last time a few days ago I went to the park for walking.

✓ Generally I go for walks in the park with my friends and family, but as I remember, a few days ago I went to the park for a walk.

For habitual actions use simple present 'I go for walks' rather than 'I am going to walk'. 'Last time a few days ago' is redundant; use 'a few days ago'. Use 'went to the park for a walk' (countable) rather than 'for walking'. Ensure tense consistency between habitual and past specific event. Grammar problem type ID:6