Walking— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Keep your answer relevant and fluent: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Focus on correct grammar and avoid repetition. Pronunciation and sentence structure need simplification so meaning is clear.

Ejemplo: Yes, I walk quite often. For example, I usually walk with my friends or family for about two to three hours at the weekend, which helps me stay healthy and chat with them. As a result, I feel more energetic and relaxed.

Sugerencia: Answer directly with a clear past-time sentence, then give one specific example and reason using linking words. Use simple past tense for childhood habits and avoid filler words.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often went for walks as a child. My parents would take me to the park or the mall for two to three hours on weekends, because those places were quiet and good for exercise.

Sugerencia: Give a concise topic sentence with clear reasons and one specific detail. Use linking words (for example, because, so) and more accurate vocabulary (fresh air, relax, nature). Avoid repetition.

Ejemplo: People like walking in parks because of the fresh air and natural surroundings. For example, parks have flowers and trees that create a calm atmosphere, so walking there helps people relax and clear their minds.

Sugerencia: Be specific about one preferred location and give a reason and a detail why. Use conditional structure correctly (If I had the chance...) and avoid vague or mixed ideas. Keep to two or three sentences max.

Ejemplo: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk along the beach. I enjoy walking by the sea because the sound of waves and the open view help me relax and think clearly.

Sugerencia: Use correct past tense to describe recent actions and be specific about time and activity. Start with a topic sentence (I went to...) and add one detail (how long, who with, why). Avoid mixing present and past tenses.

Ejemplo: Recently I went to the mall to walk and shop for about two to three hours. A couple of days earlier I walked in the park to exercise and enjoy the fresh air.

× Yes, I am low a week a lot so I work a lot because it is make my my my body very healthy.

✓ Yes, I walk a lot every week, and I work out a lot because it makes my body very healthy.

The original sentence has incorrect word order, wrong verb forms, and missing articles. 'am low a week' is meaningless; replace with 'walk a lot every week'. Use 'work out' for exercise. 'it is make' should be 'it makes' (third person singular present). Remove repeated words. Suggestion: simplify to subject + verb + object and use correct present tense verb forms.

× I am always from I am always work with my friend and family for one day for more hours or three hours and always we are talking and walk.

✓ I often go with my friends and family for an hour or more, sometimes three hours, and we always talk and walk.

Pronouns and noun forms are incorrect: 'friend' should be plural 'friends' when referring to more than one; 'I am always from I am always' is redundant. Time expression 'for one day for more hours' is wrong; use 'for an hour or more' or 'for three hours'. Use simple present 'go' or 'often go' for habitual action. Maintain subject-verb order and pluralization.

× Therefore I am losing more time to work.

✓ Therefore I end up spending less time working.

The phrase 'losing more time to work' is awkward and incorrect for the intended meaning. Use 'spend less time working' or 'end up spending less time on work'. Keep tense consistent with habitual present.

× This make my my body and my.

✓ This improves my body and my health.

Verb form error and incomplete phrase. 'This make' should be 'This improves' (third person singular). The sentence was cut off; clarify with a complete noun 'health'. Avoid repetition.

× And yes, always my parents depended on to depended all all the day to work out on the week for two or three hours and the park or in the mall or and and every place was there have no no people are crowded.

✓ Yes, when I was a child my parents always took me out to exercise on weekends for two or three hours at the park, the mall, or other places that were not crowded.

Tense and verb choice errors: 'depended on to depended' is incorrect; use 'took me out' (past simple) for past habit. 'on the week' should be 'on weekends'. 'there have no no people are crowded' should be 'that were not crowded'. Use correct past tense and relative clauses.

× Therefore it is the make my.

✓ Therefore it made me happy/healthy.

Incomplete and incorrect structure. Use a complete clause: 'Therefore it made me happy' or 'Therefore it made me healthier.' Match past tense context.

× And because the park have more flowers and the vegetable on the other at May when they can when they are walk in the in the park and get air fresh and they can go out, it's make them more relaxing and sometimes left has has left has mind.

✓ People like parks because parks have many flowers and plants, and in May the air is fresh when they walk there; going out makes them feel relaxed and sometimes clears their minds.

Multiple errors: subject-verb agreement 'park have' -> 'parks have'; 'the vegetable' -> 'plants' or 'vegetation'; word order and articles wrong. 'get air fresh' -> 'the air is fresh'. 'it's make them more relaxing' -> 'it makes them feel relaxed' (third person singular). 'left has has left has mind' intended 'clears their minds'. Use clear clauses and correct verb forms.

× When I have a chance I am work always in the park or in the mall sometimes and when I have a beach I will go to the say say the more the way otherwise when they are talking to when they are moving from from and then say from my side to side.

✓ When I have the chance, I usually go to the park or sometimes to the mall, and if I can go to the beach I will. Otherwise I walk while talking to others, moving from side to side.

Article and tense issues: use 'the chance' not 'a chance' depending on context; 'I am work always' should be 'I usually go' (habitual present). 'when I have a beach' should be 'if I can go to the beach'. Remove repeated words and clarify meaning. Use consistent verb forms and correct prepositions.

× And sometimes I walk via the food on the stone to make my.

✓ Sometimes I walk barefoot on stones to strengthen my feet.

Preposition and word choice errors: 'via the food' likely means 'barefoot' (on the foot). 'on the stone' -> 'on stones' or 'on rocky paths'. Complete the sentence with purpose 'to strengthen my feet' or similar. Use correct vocabulary and prepositions.

× I am going to the mall. I am always there going to the mall and make shopping for two or three hours still to the walk and and then and before two or three days ago I am going to the park and start to work there.

✓ I go to the mall often. I usually shop there for two or three hours and walk around, and two or three days ago I went to the park and started exercising there.

Mix of present continuous and past context incorrect. Use simple present 'I go' for habitual actions and past simple 'I went' for specific past actions. 'make shopping' -> 'shop'. 'start to work' -> 'started exercising'. Keep tense consistent and use correct verb forms.