Walking— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Cần cải thiện ngữ pháp cơ bản, chia động từ và cấu trúc câu; làm câu trả lời ngắn gọn, rõ ràng (tối đa 5 câu); thêm liên từ hợp lý và chi tiết cụ thể (khoảng cách hoặc thời gian đi bộ). Ví dụ: nêu tần suất, mục đích và thời lượng mỗi lần đi bộ.

Ejemplo: Yes, I walk a lot. I usually walk around my neighborhood every evening for about 30 minutes to stay healthy and burn calories. Walking helps me relax after work and I often take the same route past the park.

Sugerencia: Cần trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi về quá khứ (chia thì quá khứ), tránh thông tin không liên quan; sửa lỗi từ vựng (ví dụ: 'drag bike' không phù hợp) và dùng lý do rõ ràng. Nên nói rõ tần suất khi còn nhỏ và hoạt động thay thế bạn làm.

Ejemplo: No, I didn’t walk very often when I was a child. Instead, I used to ride a bicycle around the neighbourhood almost every day because it was faster and more exciting for me.

Sugerencia: Cần cấu trúc câu rõ ràng: mở đầu trả lời ngắn gọn, sau đó nêu 2–3 lý do cụ thể với liên từ (for example, because, so). Sửa từ vựng sai (anmospheres → atmosphere, amorphine → endorphins) và tránh lặp từ. Nên dẫn ví dụ thực tế như hoạt động trong công viên.

Ejemplo: People like walking in parks because the atmosphere is peaceful and pleasant. For example, parks offer green spaces where people can exercise, do yoga, or let their children play. Walking there also boosts mood because being outside releases endorphins.

Sugerencia: Cần hiểu rõ câu hỏi giả định (dùng cấu trúc điều kiện loại 2), nói rõ địa điểm và lý do cụ thể. Sửa lỗi từ vựng (citizenship không đúng, có thể là 'city centre' hoặc 'a new city'). Tránh lặp từ và giữ câu ngắn gọn, mạch lạc.

Ejemplo: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk in the city centre. I would enjoy walking past modern buildings and towers, and I would like to walk across a famous bridge to see the skyline.

Sugerencia: Cần trả lời ở thì quá khứ đơn vì câu hỏi là 'lately' (gần đây). Tránh câu lặp và ngập ngừng; nêu thời gian cụ thể và mô tả ngắn gọn nơi bạn đi bộ và lý do. Ví dụ: đi dạo quanh siêu thị sau khi dậy muộn và gặp bạn bè.

Ejemplo: Recently, I walked around the area near the supermarket because I woke up late and wanted a short stroll. I often meet a friend there who works nearby, so we sometimes walk together for 10–15 minutes.

× I would say yes I working a lot because it's helped me burn calories and it's good for health.

✓ I would say yes, I work a lot because it helps me burn calories and it's good for my health.

Incorrect use of verb+ -ing: 'I working' should be 'I work' to express a habitual action. 'It's helped' mixes past participle with present meaning; use simple present 'it helps'. Also add 'my' before 'health' for correct possessive. Suggestions: Use simple present for habits (I work, it helps) and include possessive adjectives when needed (my health).

× I usually have a show every night and I walk around my neighborhood from thousands step over.

✓ I usually have a show every night and I walk around my neighborhood for thousands of steps.

Incorrect quantifier and noun form: 'from thousands step over' is ungrammatical. Use 'for thousands of steps' to indicate duration/distance. Also plural 'steps' required and 'for' fits this context. Suggestions: Use 'thousands of steps' or specify a number 'about 2,000 steps'.

× I I didn't walk a lot before because I choose another truck from to exercise particularly is drag bike because it's also burned more calories than work and also I can go on man many places in the city.

✓ I didn't walk a lot before because I chose another route to exercise, particularly a drag bike, because it burned more calories than walking and I could go to many places in the city.

Multiple tense and word choice errors: 'choose' should be past 'chose' to match 'didn't'. 'truck' likely intended 'route' or 'track'; corrected to 'route'. 'is drag bike' -> 'a drag bike'. 'it's also burned' mixes forms; use simple past 'it burned'. 'work' should be 'walking'. 'can go on man many' corrected to 'could go to many'. Suggestions: Keep past tense consistent for past habits and choose precise nouns (route/track), and use correct verbs for activities (walking).

× What is the blue moon? I I didn't walk a lot before because I choose another truck from to exercise particularly is drag bike because it's also burned more calories than work and also I can go on man many places in the city.

✓ What is the blue moon? I didn't walk a lot before because I chose another route to exercise, particularly a drag bike, because it burned more calories than walking and I could go to many places in the city.

Preposition errors: 'from to' is incorrect and removed. 'go on man many places' corrected to 'go to many places'. Suggestions: Use 'to' with 'go' (go to a place) and avoid extraneous prepositions. Ensure prepositions match verbs (go to, walk around).

× I would say I believe people walk that people they love walk in the park because they love the anmospheres at the park because have many people that you start to do exercise such as yoga people or children, they use that to playing some sports. So people love that the amorphine that.

✓ I believe people like walking in the park because they enjoy the atmosphere there. Parks have many people who start exercising, such as doing yoga; children also play sports there. So people enjoy that atmosphere.

Problems with word choice and adjective/adverb use: 'love walk' -> 'like walking'; 'anmospheres' -> 'atmosphere'; 'that you start to do exercise' -> 'who start exercising'; 'to playing' -> 'playing' or 'to play'. 'amorphine' unclear, corrected to 'atmosphere'. Suggestions: Use gerunds for activities (walking, exercising), choose correct nouns (atmosphere), and use relative clauses correctly ('people who'). Keep sentences concise.

× If I have a chance I would choose citizenship is the apply for me work because in the citizenship where I have lots of modern facility I will I will go past from lots of building and tower enjoy watching the bridge.

✓ If I had the chance, I would choose the city where I work, because the city has many modern facilities. I would walk past lots of buildings and towers and enjoy watching the bridge.

Conditional and future errors: Use second conditional 'If I had the chance, I would...' to express hypothetical. 'citizenship' incorrect noun; use 'city'. 'is the apply for me work' ungrammatical; simplified to 'the city where I work'. Repetition 'I will I will' removed. 'go past from' -> 'walk past'. Suggestions: For unreal present situations use 'If I had... I would...'. Use correct nouns (city) and simpler verb phrases ('walk past').

× Well, if I woke up late I would what I will, I will. I would walk around the supermarket because I'm at at flights from 6:00 AM. Also have my friend in there because they also umm, they working uh, like like me.

✓ Well, if I wake up late I will walk around the supermarket because my shift starts at 6:00 AM. I also have friends there because they also work like me.

Tense and verb errors: For a real possible future use first conditional 'If I wake up late, I will...'. 'I'm at at flights' unclear; interpreted as 'my shift starts'. 'have my friend in there' -> 'I also have friends there'. 'they working' -> 'they work'. Suggestions: Use first conditional for likely future events, ensure subject-verb agreement ('they work'), and state occupations/shifts clearly.