Walking— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear and relevant, but a bit short and could be enriched with a brief reason or example. Also avoid absolute fragments like "Absolutely yes"—use smoother phrasing. Keep it within 3–4 sentences and add a linking phrase to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: Yes, I walk a lot because it helps me stay fit and clear my mind. For example, I usually walk 40 minutes every morning and sometimes in the evenings as well, which keeps my energy up throughout the day.

Sugerencia: Grammar and clarity need work. Use past tense consistently and correct word choice—"go to for work" is incorrect. Provide a direct topic sentence followed by a specific supporting detail and a linking word. Limit to 2–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often went out for walks with my grandmother when I was a child. We would walk to the nearby market every evening, which was a nice chance to talk and enjoy the fresh air.

Sugerencia: Good idea, but refine grammar and avoid repetition ("parks" repeated). Make the sentence more natural and use linking words to explain consequences. Use singular/plural forms correctly and limit length.

Ejemplo: People like walking in parks because the greenery and quiet atmosphere help them relax. As a result, many find walking there is a good way to reduce stress and enjoy nature.

Sugerencia: Meaning is unclear because of the word "work"—you probably meant "walk." Use a conditional structure correctly and add specific details about why you choose that place. Keep it concise and natural.

Ejemplo: If I had the chance, I would like to take a long walk along a quiet country road lined with trees, because the shade and scenery would make the walk peaceful and refreshing.

Sugerencia: Question asks about a recent walk (past tense), but your answer is general (present habit). Answer specifically about a recent occasion and give one or two details about where and why. Use past tense and a linking word to add detail.

Ejemplo: Lately I went for a walk in the small public park near my house. I walked there last Saturday to get some fresh air and I stayed for about half an hour.

× Absolutely yes. Walking is my favorite way of getting fit.

✓ Absolutely yes. Walking is my favorite way to get fit.

The original uses a gerund phrase 'way of getting fit' which is acceptable but 'way to get fit' is more natural and concise in this context. This corrects a present tense usage to match habitual preference; no tense change is required, just a clearer infinitive structure.

× As far as I remember, I usually go to for work every evening with my grandmother.

✓ As far as I remember, I usually went for a walk every evening with my grandmother.

The question asks about past habitual behavior, so the verb should be in the past tense ('went') rather than present ('go'). Also 'go to for work' is ungrammatical and likely intended as 'went for a walk'. Use past tense for repeated past actions.

× Because parks are a good place for walking as there is a lot of greenery in the parks which help the peoples to relax and unwind.

✓ Because parks are a good place for walking; there is a lot of greenery in parks which helps people relax and unwind.

Multiple issues: 'the parks' and 'parks' redundancy removed, 'which help' must agree with singular 'a lot of greenery' so use 'helps', and 'peoples' is incorrect plural of 'people'. Also 'help relax' should omit 'to' after 'helps'. This fixes pronoun and subject-verb agreement errors.

× If I ever got a chance, I would surely like to work on a random state road with a lot of trees around it.

✓ If I ever got the chance, I would surely like to walk along a random country road with a lot of trees around it.

The context asks where the student would like to take a long walk, so 'work on' is incorrect verb choice. Replace with 'walk along'. 'State road' is acceptable but 'country road' or 'country lane' is more natural; also 'the chance' fits conditional phrasing. Tense (second conditional) is appropriate as written.

× I usually go for a walk near my locality, such as in public parks or some random roads.

✓ I usually go for a walk near my home, for example in public parks or along nearby roads.

'Near my locality' is awkward; 'near my home' or 'nearby' is more natural. 'Some random roads' is informal and vague; 'along nearby roads' is clearer. Present simple 'usually go' is correct for habitual action, so keep tense but improve preposition usage and word choice.