Walking— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be direct and clear. Start with a simple topic sentence answering the question, then add 1–2 specific supporting details. Avoid confusion between 'work' and 'walk' and correct grammar (use present simple). Use linking words like 'for example' or 'also' to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: Yes, I walk a lot. For example, I walk to school, to work and to the gym most days, which helps me get exercise and avoid traffic.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and use past simple. Give a clear topic sentence about frequency and one specific detail about where and with whom you walked. Correct verb choice: use 'walk' not 'work.' Use a linking word like 'usually' or 'often'.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often walked outside when I was a child. Usually I walked to kindergarten with my parents, and we sometimes stopped to play in the park on the way.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear opinion, then give 2–3 specific reasons using linking words ('because', 'for example', 'also'). Use correct noun forms and articles (a park, parks are). Keep sentences concise and avoid repetition.

Ejemplo: People like walking in parks because they are peaceful and full of trees, which makes the air fresher. For example, the park near my house is very popular because families and joggers enjoy the quiet paths and green spaces.

Sugerencia: Use conditional correctly (would + base verb) and give a clear location plus specific reasons. Keep to 1–3 sentences and use linking words like 'because' and 'so'. Correct grammar (that park is very big, I can hear birds singing).

Ejemplo: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk in Hangzhou Park because it is very large and full of nature. I could walk for hours there, listening to birds and enjoying the trees and lakes.

Sugerencia: Use past simple correctly and state a clear time and place. Give one specific reason or detail about the experience. Avoid tense errors (I went, I felt) and be concise. Use linking words like 'because' to explain.

Ejemplo: I went for a walk two weeks ago in a park near my home called 112 Park. I didn't enjoy it much because the paths were steep and I felt very tired after the walk.

× Where, To be honest, I work a lot every day. I walk to school, I walk to work, I walk to the gym near my house. So I work very much for a day.

✓ To be honest, I work a lot every day. I walk to school, to work, and to the gym near my house. So I work a lot each day.

The original uses awkward phrasing and incorrect adverbial expression 'very much for a day'. Use simple present for habitual actions ('I work a lot every day') and parallel structure for lists ('I walk to school, to work, and to the gym'). Replace 'very much for a day' with 'a lot each day' for natural English. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× When I was a child, I was often work. I was often work daily with my mom and dad to my to the kindergarten near my house.

✓ When I was a child, I often worked. I often walked with my mom and dad to the kindergarten near my house.

The verb form 'was often work' is incorrect. Use simple past for habitual actions in the past: 'I often worked' or better 'I often walked' if the intended meaning is going on foot. Also remove redundant words and correct word order: 'with my mom and dad to the kindergarten'. Grammar problem type ID: 5

× Hmm, to be honest, I think people like to walk in parks because park are very nice place to walk it peaceful, it has a lot of trees and when people walk, they will feel very happy.

✓ To be honest, I think people like to walk in parks because parks are very nice and peaceful places to walk. They have a lot of trees, and when people walk, they feel happy.

Multiple problems: plural noun agreement ('parks are', 'places'), misuse of 'it peaceful' which should be adjective phrase 'peaceful places', and unnecessary future 'will feel'—use simple present for general truths. Also use 'they have' to refer back to parks. Grammar problem type ID: 13

× For instance, the Huang want to park near my house have very much has very much people walk every day.

✓ For instance, the Huangwang Park near my house has many people walking every day.

Fix singular/plural and noun phrase order: 'the Huang want to park' is likely a mistranscription of a park name; assume 'Huangwang Park'. Use singular verb 'has' for the park, replace 'very much has very much people' with 'many people', and use 'walking every day' for continuous activity. Grammar problem type ID: 1

× I think if I had a chance I will go to hang on to park and walk every day.

✓ I think if I had the chance I would go to Hangon Park and walk every day.

This is a second conditional sentence: use 'would' in the main clause when the if-clause uses past tense ('if I had'). Also correct place name and preposition: 'go to Hangon Park'. Grammar problem type ID: 4

× I will, I mean walk all days long because that park very big and have a lot of things to do.

✓ I would, I mean, walk all day long because that park is very big and has a lot of things to do.

Use 'all day long' not 'all days long' for continuous daily action. In conditional context use 'would'. Include the verb 'is' for 'that park is very big' and correct subject-verb agreement 'has a lot'. Grammar problem type ID: 13

× I can walk while hearing the birds singing and see the tree maybe.

✓ I can walk while hearing the birds singing and see the trees, maybe.

Use plural 'trees' if referring generally; punctuation and word order improved. 'Hearing the birds singing' is acceptable as present participle clause; add comma before 'maybe'. Grammar problem type ID: 10

× Well I was went for a park 2 Week 2 weeks ago it was 112 park and I don't like it so much because the last time I walk I feel very tired.

✓ Well, I went to a park two weeks ago. It was 112 Park, and I didn't like it very much because the last time I walked I felt very tired.

Remove incorrect auxiliary 'was' before 'went'. Use simple past 'went', 'didn't like', 'walked', 'felt' for past events. Spell out 'two weeks ago' and fix article 'a park' and tense consistency. Grammar problem type ID: 5