Walking— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Улучшите грамматику и связность. Сформулируйте тему предложения ясно, используйте корректные времена и местоимения, уберите лишние повторы. Добавьте одно-два подробных объяснения (например: с кем, как часто, зачем).

Ejemplo: Yes, I walk a lot. I usually walk with my friend Euna because we enjoy chatting and exercising together. Recently I prefer walking more often because it is a convenient and healthy way to travel short distances.

Sugerencia: Исправьте грамматические ошибки и согласование времен. Начните с прямого ответа, затем добавьте конкретный пример или причину. Используйте корректные формы глаголов и отрицания.

Ejemplo: Not really. When I was a child, my parents liked to take me outside with them, but they did not allow me to go out alone, so I didn't walk outside very often.

Sugerencia: Сформулируйте чёткое мнение и используйте связующие слова. Исправьте грамматику (например: "it helps"), дайте конкретные причины или примеры, избегайте противоречивых заявлений без пояснения.

Ejemplo: Personally, I find walking only in parks a bit boring, but many people enjoy it because it helps them relax, breathe fresh air and escape city noise.

Sugerencia: Уберите словесные паузы и повторы, объедините идеи в связные предложения. Дайте конкретное описание места и причину выбора, используйте эмоциональные или описательные слова.

Ejemplo: I live in a big city, but I love nature, so I'd choose a long walk in the mountains or a forest. I enjoy the fresh air, peaceful scenery and the chance to see rivers and wildlife.

Sugerencia: Исправьте артикли и порядок слов, дайте больше деталей о прогулке (куда именно, с кем, как долго, как вы себя чувствовали) и избегайте общих фраз.

Ejemplo: Yesterday I walked along one of the beautiful lanes near my home. It was lined with trees and small cafes, and I spent about thirty minutes there enjoying the view.

× Yes I do, I usually walk with my friends, her name is Euna we best friends.

✓ Yes, I do. I usually walk with my friend; her name is Euna and we are best friends.

The sentence uses 'friends' then 'her name' which mismatches plural/singular and pronoun reference. Use singular 'friend' if referring to one person, and include the verb 'are' to link 'we' and 'best friends'. Also add punctuation for clarity.

× But now I prefer walk a lot because it's more convenient for me.

✓ But now I prefer walking a lot because it's more convenient for me.

After 'prefer' when talking about general habits, use the gerund form 'walking'. Using the base verb 'walk' is incorrect in this structure.

× When I was a child, my parents loved me go outside with them.

✓ When I was a child, my parents loved me to go outside with them.

The verb 'loved' followed by another verb requires the infinitive with 'to' in this context ('loved me to go'). Omitting 'to' is ungrammatical. Consider using 'liked taking me outside' for a more natural phrasing.

× They don't allowed me go alone, so I didn't go outside often.

✓ They didn't allow me to go alone, so I didn't go outside often.

'Don't allowed' is incorrect: past tense requires 'didn't allow' and the verb following 'allow' needs 'to' before the infinitive. Also ensure tense consistency: use 'didn't' for past.

× If you ask me, walking in only parks is boring, but I think other people like it because it's help them to relax and enjoy the quiet.

✓ If you ask me, walking only in parks is boring, but I think other people like it because it helps them to relax and enjoy the quiet.

Word order should be 'walking only in parks'. 'It's help' is ungrammatical; third person singular requires 'helps'. Also 'the quiet' is acceptable but ensure article use fits context.

× As for me, I live in a big city, but I like nature.

✓ As for me, I live in a big city, but I like nature.

No grammatical change needed; sentence is correct. No correction provided because it does not match listed error types.

× I like forests, rivers, mountains.

✓ I like forests, rivers, and mountains.

List items are fine but adding 'and' before the final item clarifies the list and conforms to standard English punctuation and structure.

× So if I had a chance, uh, to take a long walk, I would like to uh, go to the forest or mountains.

✓ So if I had the chance to take a long walk, I would like to go to the forest or the mountains.

Remove filler 'uh'. Use 'the chance' (more natural) and include article 'the' before 'mountains' for parallel structure. Modal 'would' is correctly used for hypothetical.

× I live in a big city so there are a lot of beautiful lane and yesterday I walked on the one of them.

✓ I live in a big city, so there are a lot of beautiful lanes, and yesterday I walked on one of them.

'Lane' should be plural 'lanes' when preceded by 'a lot of'. 'The one of them' is incorrect; say 'one of them'. Add commas for sentence clarity and ensure verb tense 'walked' is correct for past event.