Walking— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be clear and use correct verbs (walk, not work). Start with a direct topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details, using linking words to connect ideas. Reduce hesitation and filler words. Keep answers under five sentences and avoid repetition.

Ejemplo: Yes, I walk a lot. I usually walk in parks and quiet streets because I enjoy the fresh air and scenery. However, I avoid busy roads with heavy traffic because they are noisy and crowded. Walking helps me relax and stay healthy.

Sugerencia: Use past tense consistently and correct verbs (walked, not work). Give a clear topic sentence about past habit, then one specific detail (who, how often, why). Avoid long hesitations and incomplete sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often went for walks as a child. My mother had diabetes, so the doctor advised her to walk for at least one hour every day, and she often took me with her in the evenings. Those walks became a regular family routine.

Sugerencia: Begin with a direct reason, then give two specific supporting points connected with linking words (for example, because, also, and). Use correct nouns and possessives (green space, good air) and avoid vague or repetitive phrasing.

Ejemplo: People like to walk in parks because they are calm and full of greenery. For example, parks offer fresh air and a peaceful atmosphere, and they provide a safe space where neighbors can meet and exercise.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear conditional answer (If I had the chance, I would...). Name the place correctly and give two specific reasons using linking words (because, and). Avoid hesitations and incorrect word forms (beach, not butcher).

Ejemplo: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk on Cox's Bazar beach. I would enjoy the sound of the waves and the cool sea breeze, and I could relax while watching the sunset.

Sugerencia: Use correct tense and verbs (I have been walking / I often walk). Give a clear topic sentence about recent activity, then one or two specific reasons (what you do there, how it helps you). Avoid unclear phrases ('laser time', 'traces') and reduce repetition.

Ejemplo: Recently I have been walking in a small park near my house. I often go there to relax, breathe fresh air, and clear my mind after work.

× When I go outside, I always prefer to walking, uh, park and other, uh, beautiful St. uh, But in the busy street I cannot work because of umm, lots of traffic and uh, uh, many crowded.

✓ When I go outside, I always prefer walking in parks and other beautiful streets, but on busy streets I cannot walk because of lots of traffic and crowding.

The verb 'prefer' should be followed by the gerund form without 'to' when speaking generally: 'prefer walking' (Grammar Problem Type 8). Also 'to walking' is incorrect. 'Park' and 'St.' need plural forms to match general meaning (see Singular and plural issue ID 1). 'Work' is misused where 'walk' is intended; replace with 'walk'. 'many crowded' is incorrect; use 'crowding' or 'crowds'. Suggestions: use 'prefer walking in parks', use plural nouns for general statements, and use 'crowding' or 'crowds'.

× When I go outside, I always prefer to walking, uh, park and other, uh, beautiful St. uh, But in the busy street I cannot work because of umm, lots of traffic and uh, uh, many crowded.

✓ When I go outside, I always prefer walking in parks and other beautiful streets, but on busy streets I cannot walk because of lots of traffic and crowds.

The speaker refers to parks and streets in general, so plural nouns are required: 'parks' and 'streets' instead of 'park' and 'St.' (Grammar Problem Type 1). Also 'the busy street' should be 'busy streets' for a general statement. Suggestion: use plural forms when talking about types of places generally.

× Yes, I work quite a lot.

✓ Yes, I walk quite a lot.

The intended verb is 'walk', not 'work'. Use the correct lexical verb to match meaning. Suggestion: choose verbs that match the activity being discussed.

× Did you often go outside to have a walk when you were a child? -> Yeah, in my childhood, I always work with my mother because she was, she is a diabetes person, uh, doctor prefer her to walk daily, at least, umm, one hour.

✓ When I was a child, I always walked with my mother because she had diabetes; the doctor recommended that she walk daily for at least one hour.

When describing past habits, use past simple ('walked') rather than present tense 'work' (Grammar Problem Type 5). 'She was, she is a diabetes person' is incorrect: use 'she had diabetes' (past) or 'she has diabetes' (present); here past fits context. 'Doctor prefer her to walk' should be passive or reporting verb: 'the doctor recommended that she walk' or 'the doctor preferred that she walk'. Suggestions: use past tense consistently for past events and use appropriate reporting verbs.

× So every day ** *** took me with her, uh, to walking in the evening.

✓ So every day she took me with her to walk in the evening.

After verbs of movement like 'took', use the base form 'to walk' (infinitive) rather than 'to walking' (Grammar Problem Type 8). Also restore missing subject 'she'. Suggestion: 'she took me with her to walk' or 'she took me for a walk'.

× People love to work in parks because of its, uh, calm and, uh, peaceful nature and it's a very place, uh, greenery place where people get, umm, good oxygen level and also people can connect their, uh, neighborhoods and it is a very peaceful for their.

✓ People love to walk in parks because of their calm and peaceful nature; parks are green places where people get fresh air and can connect with their neighbors, and they are very peaceful for them.

Pronouns and possessives were incorrect: use 'their' to refer to 'parks' (plural) and 'they are' for parks (Grammar Problem Type 12). 'It's a very place' is ungrammatical; use 'parks are green places'. 'Good oxygen level' should be 'fresh air'. 'Connect their neighborhoods' should be 'connect with their neighbors'. Suggestion: match pronouns to their antecedents and use correct collocations like 'fresh air' and 'connect with neighbors'.

× Where would you like to take a long walk if you had the chance? -> Yes, I like to take a long walk if I had any chance, umm, I want to work in the sea beach, uh, which is Cox's butcher sea beach, umm, because of its wave sounds and it's a peaceful uh, weather and, and enjoy the sunset.

✓ If I had a chance, I would like to take a long walk on the seashore at Cox's Bazar beach because of the sound of the waves; the peaceful weather and the sunset are enjoyable.

Use conditional 'If I had a chance, I would like' for hypothetical situations (Grammar Problem Type 7). Prepositions: use 'on the seashore' or 'at the beach' rather than 'in the sea beach' (Grammar Problem Type 11). 'Cox's Bazar' is correct name. 'Wave sounds' better as 'the sound of the waves'. Suggestion: use correct conditional form and appropriate prepositions: 'on the beach' or 'at the beach'.

× Where did you go for a walk lately? -> Recently I have been working in a small park which is near to our house.

✓ Recently I have been walking in a small park that is near our house.

The present perfect continuous 'have been walking' fits 'lately' to show recent repeated action (Grammar Problem Type 6). 'Working' is wrong verb. Use 'near our house' rather than 'near to our house' (preposition issue ID 11). Suggestion: use 'have been walking' and correct preposition 'near'.

× Some I often I often walking there because of spending my laser time and get relaxed to my all traces and get fresh air.

✓ I often walk there to spend my leisure time, relax, and get fresh air.

Use base form 'walk' after subject ('I often walk') rather than 'walking' (Grammar Problem Type 8). 'Laser time' is incorrect; should be 'leisure time'. 'Get relaxed to my all traces' is ungrammatical; use 'relax' and omit 'to my all traces'. Suggestion: simplify: 'I often walk there to spend my leisure time, relax, and enjoy fresh air.'