Walking— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be concise and accurate. Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add one or two specific supporting details. Correct grammar (verb forms, prepositions) and avoid redundancy. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' for coherence.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do walk a lot. I often walk every night to get fresh air and calm my mind because studying at university can be stressful.

Sugerencia: Answer directly in past tense and give specific details. Use correct verb forms and clearer sequencing words (e.g., 'usually', 'then'). Avoid confusing numeric or place descriptions.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often went for walks as a child, especially in the evenings with my family and friends. We usually walked to the park and then flew kites together.

Sugerencia: Give a clear topic sentence and follow with two specific reasons using linking words (because, furthermore). Use correct noun forms and concise phrasing. Replace vague phrases like 'relax things' with specific effects (reduce stress, enjoy scenery).

Ejemplo: I think people like walking in parks because they can enjoy nature and reduce stress. Furthermore, parks provide space for families to spend time together and play games.

Sugerencia: Be realistic and accurate. Use conditional structure correctly and avoid exaggerated or incorrect facts. Give one clear destination and a plausible reason (scenery, exercise). Correct time/distance expressions and calorie claims.

Ejemplo: If I had the chance, I would walk to the park near my university, which takes about an hour to reach, because I enjoy the scenery and the exercise.

Sugerencia: Use past tense consistently and give specific activities and durations. Avoid vague adjectives like 'wonderful' without explanation. Use linking words (and, so) and correct plural/singular and time expressions.

Ejemplo: Lately I went to the park near my university with friends. We played frisbee, had a picnic, and chatted for about an hour, which made our friendship stronger.

× Yes, I do work a lot, especially right now when I entering university.

✓ Yes, I do work a lot, especially right now when I am entering university.

The verb 'enter' needs the present participle form with the auxiliary 'am' to form the present continuous: 'am entering'. Use 'am entering' to show an action happening now. Suggestion: use subject + be + verb-ing for current ongoing actions (I am entering).

× I really like to walk every night to getting fresh air and calm my mind.

✓ I really like to walk every night to get fresh air and calm my mind.

After 'to' as part of an infinitive, use the base verb, not the -ing form. 'To get' is correct; 'to getting' is wrong. Use 'to get' for purpose: 'to get fresh air and calm my mind.'

× Yes, I do often go outside to have a walk when I were a child, especially in the evening with my family members and friends.

✓ Yes, I often went outside to have a walk when I was a child, especially in the evening with my family members and friends.

The sentence describes a past habit, so use past tense 'went' and 'was' (not 'do often' or 'were'). 'Do often' is present; 'were' is incorrect singular. Use simple past for repeated past actions: 'I often went' and 'I was a child.'

× We usually walk 2 day, park and then play kite together.

✓ We usually walked to the park for two days and then flew kites together.

Numbers need correct units and article use. '2 day' should be 'for two days' to indicate duration. 'Park' needs 'to the park' and sequence requires verbs in past 'walked' and 'flew kites' (correct collocation). Also 'play kite' should be 'flew kites' or 'played with a kite.' Use clear duration and correct verb collocations.

× In my opinion, people like to walk in the parks because parks is actually a place where they can spend their time with the nature, where they can calm their mind and relax things.

✓ In my opinion, people like to walk in parks because a park is actually a place where they can spend time with nature, calm their minds and relax.

Do not use plural 'the parks' when speaking generally; use 'in parks' or 'a park'. 'With the nature' is incorrect—use 'with nature' (no article). 'Calm their mind' should be plural 'calm their minds' to match plural subject. 'Relax things' is incorrect; 'relax' can be intransitive without an object. Use concise phrasing.

× Other than that, it's also a place where they can spend time with their family members and enjoying playing games.

✓ Other than that, it's also a place where they can spend time with their family members and enjoy playing games.

After 'where they can' use the base verb 'enjoy' not the -ing form 'enjoying'. Use 'enjoy playing games' where 'enjoy' takes a gerund object. Maintain verb form consistency after modal-like structure 'can'.

× If I had a chance to take a long walk, I would like to go to the park near my university where it take one hour to go there.

✓ If I had a chance to take a long walk, I would like to go to the park near my university which takes one hour to reach.

Relative clause needs correct subject-verb agreement: 'park ... takes' (not 'take'). Use present simple 'takes' to describe a general fact. Use 'reach' or 'get to' rather than 'go there' for clarity. 'Which' or 'that' can introduce the clause.

× So if I walk to the park, I will lose 2000 calories because the long take 220 kilometer to go there.

✓ So if I walk to the park, I will burn 2000 calories because the walk takes 2.2 kilometers to get there.

Use 'burn' instead of 'lose' for calories. 'The long' is unclear—use 'the walk'. Use correct verb agreement 'takes' and correct distance units: '220 kilometer' is incorrect—likely '2.2 kilometers' or a suitable figure. Use plural 'kilometers' and include decimal if appropriate. Also 'to get there' is clearer than 'to go there.'

× Lately I went to the park near my university with my friends.

✓ Recently I went to the park near my university with my friends.

'Lately' is often used with present perfect; when using simple past 'recently' fits better. Use 'recently I went' for a past event. If keeping 'lately', change verb to present perfect: 'I have gone to the park lately.'

× It was a very wonderful and exciting experience where we do a lot of activities together and chatting almost one hours where it make our bond become more stronger.

✓ It was a very wonderful and exciting experience where we did a lot of activities together and chatted for almost one hour, which made our bond stronger.

Use past tense 'did' and 'chatted' for past events. 'One hours' should be 'one hour' (singular). 'Where it make our bond become more stronger' is ungrammatical; use 'which made our bond stronger.' Remove redundant comparative 'more stronger'—use 'stronger.' Use correct clause connectors and verb agreement.