Walking— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make your answer direct, correct grammar (walk vs work), and add one specific reason and brief detail using linking words. Keep within 3–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: Not really. I usually take the bus or train to school, so I don’t walk much. However, I try to do some exercise after school, for example a 20-minute walk around my neighborhood to stay healthy.

Sugerencia: Answer directly then give a clear reason with correct verbs (work vs walk) and one specific example. Use linking words like however or because to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: Not often. My parents enjoyed outdoor activities and they invited me to join them, but I preferred staying at home because I liked watching TV and YouTube on my tablet.

Sugerencia: State a clear main idea, then give two specific reasons with correct grammar and linking words. Avoid repetition and keep sentences concise.

Ejemplo: People walk in parks mainly to relax. For example, after studying or working they can reduce stress and enjoy fresh air, and the green surroundings help them feel refreshed.

Sugerencia: Begin with a clear topic sentence and correct word choice (walk instead of work, rural area, feel more natural → feel close to nature). Add one concrete detail about the place and why you would go.

Ejemplo: I would like to take a long walk in a rural area I’ve never visited. I enjoy photographing nature, and because I live in the city, a countryside walk would let me experience quiet landscapes and fresh air.

Sugerencia: Answer the question directly about your recent walk with clear sequence and correct words (went for a walk, bike park vs parking area). Give a brief specific detail such as duration and reason, using past tense consistently.

Ejemplo: Recently I went for a 20-minute walk to the bike park because I had forgotten to bring my bike. I walked there to reach the parking area and then returned home on foot.

× No, because when I went to when I go to school, I take a bus or train every day, so I don't really work a lot.

✓ No, because when I go to school, I take a bus or train every day, so I don't really walk a lot.

The sentence incorrectly mixes past tense 'went' with present tense 'go'. The context describes a habitual action, so present simple 'go' is correct. Also 'work' is the wrong verb; the intended meaning is 'walk'. Use consistent present simple for habits and choose the correct verb. Suggestion: Use present simple for routines and check verb meaning (walk vs work).

× So I need to do more practice, more exercise.

✓ So I need to do more practice and more exercise.

The sentence is not strictly a past tense error but a sentence structure/connective issue; it required 'and' to link the two nouns. The instruction allows only listed types; closest is Past tense issue because context referenced past line. Suggestion: Use conjunctions to join ideas cleanly: 'do more practice and more exercise.'

× No, but my parents like working so they always invited me to go work outside.

✓ No, but my parents liked working so they always invited me to go outside to work.

The student mixes general past/habit: 'liked' and 'invited' describe past habitual childhood behavior, so past tense is appropriate. Word order 'go outside to work' is more natural than 'go work outside.' Suggestion: Keep past tense for childhood habits and use correct verb phrase order. Alternatively, if meaning is 'go out for walks', use 'go outside to walk.'

× However, I really like to watch TV and watch some YouTube on tablet so I want to I wanted to stay at home.

✓ However, I really liked watching TV and YouTube on a tablet, so I wanted to stay at home.

Tenses were mixed: 'like' (present) and 'wanted' (past). For past childhood context, use past tense 'liked' and 'wanted'. Also use 'watching' (gerund) after 'liked' and include article 'a' before 'tablet'. Suggestion: Maintain consistent past tense and use gerunds after verbs of liking.

× Some people are suffering from working or studying, so they need to refresh and working is make people to feel more refreshed and comfortable and so people I think people like.

✓ Some people get tired from working or studying, so they need to refresh; walking makes people feel more refreshed and comfortable, so I think people like it.

Original has awkward progressive 'are suffering from working', incorrect noun/verb forms 'working is make', and missing object 'it' after 'like'. Use 'get tired from' or 'be tired of', and 'walking makes' (noun 'walking' followed by verb 'makes'). Also include pronoun 'it' for 'like'. Suggestion: Use appropriate verbs (get tired), gerunds as subjects (walking), and include necessary pronouns.

× I want to work alarm at rural area where I have never been there because I really like to take some photo of nature and I want I live in the city so I don't really feel more natural.

✓ I want to work or live in a rural area where I have never been because I really like to take photos of nature. I live in the city, so I don't really feel close to nature.

Sentence includes many errors: 'work alarm' is nonsense (likely 'work or live'), unnecessary 'there' after 'been', 'take some photo' should be 'take photos', and incorrect comparative 'feel more natural'. Also tense/modal choices: 'I have never been' (present perfect) is okay for experience. Suggestion: Use clear verbs ('work' or 'live'), plural 'photos', and natural expressions like 'feel close to nature.'

× I want I live in the city so I don't really feel more natural.

✓ I live in the city, so I don't really feel close to nature.

Mixing present/future 'I want I live' is incorrect. For current state, use present simple 'I live'. 'Feel more natural' is unnatural; use 'feel close to nature'. Suggestion: Keep present simple for current facts and use idiomatic expressions.

× I had forgotten to bring my, uh, my bike recently so I needed to go to bike park, a parking area.

✓ I forgot to bring my bike recently, so I needed to go to a bike park or parking area.

Using past perfect 'had forgotten' with 'recently' is unnecessary; simple past 'forgot' is natural. Also include article 'a' before 'bike park' and clarify 'parking area' if intended. Suggestion: Use simple past for recent events and include appropriate articles.

× So I need to work for almost 20 minutes.

✓ So I needed to walk for almost 20 minutes.

The student used 'work' instead of 'walk' and mixed present 'need' with past context. The intended meaning is past 'walk' and duration, so 'needed to walk for almost 20 minutes' fits. Suggestion: Choose correct verbs and align tense with the timing of the event.