Walking— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and check grammar (use simple past/present correctly). Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one supporting reason using a linking word. Avoid redundancy.

Ejemplo: Not really. I don't walk much in my free time because I'm a nurse and I already walk a lot during my shifts. Therefore, when I get home I usually prefer to rest and recover.

Sugerencia: Improve verb tense consistency and clarity. Use past tense throughout and give one clear reason with a linking phrase. Avoid unclear phrases like 'I work with my friends' and correct grammar.

Ejemplo: Yes, I used to walk to school every day when I was a child because my parents were busy, so I went with my friends and neighbors. It was fun and helped me feel independent.

Sugerencia: This answer is generally good—concise and relevant. Improve coherence by adding linking words and varying vocabulary slightly, and avoid short grammatic slips (use 'Walking in parks').

Ejemplo: People often walk in parks because they enjoy the peaceful atmosphere and the chance to see trees, flowers and birds. Moreover, walking there provides gentle exercise and an opportunity to meet friends.

Sugerencia: Make the conditional sentence smoother and complete your thoughts. Be specific about where in Spain or what you expect to see, and avoid incomplete fragments like 'and I think.'

Ejemplo: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk in Spain, perhaps along the coastal paths of Catalonia, because I have only seen it in photos and I imagine the scenery and peaceful atmosphere would be wonderful.

Sugerencia: This answer is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Answer directly in past tense: say when or where you last walked, or explain you haven't walked recently because of work. Keep it to one main sentence plus one brief reason with a linking word.

Ejemplo: I haven't been for a walk recently because I have been very busy working as a nurse, and I usually get enough walking during my shifts. The last time I walked for leisure was a few weeks ago in a nearby park.

× No, I don't walk much. I'm a nurse and I spend hours of walking during my shift and when I get home I prefer to rest rather than to go for a walk.

✓ No, I don't walk much. I'm a nurse and I spend hours walking during my shift, and when I get home I prefer to rest rather than go for a walk.

Use of 'spend hours of walking' is ungrammatical; after 'spend' use a noun or gerund without 'of' (spend hours walking). Also 'prefer to rest rather than to go' is acceptable but more natural to say 'rather than go' by omitting the second 'to'. These are present simple habitual actions, so keep present tense verbs.'

× Yeah, when I was a child, I used to walk every day back and forth from the school and I enjoyed it because I work with my friends and my neighbors.

✓ Yeah, when I was a child, I used to walk every day back and forth from school, and I enjoyed it because I walked with my friends and my neighbors.

Mixing past and present verbs: 'used to' and 'enjoyed' require past context, so 'work' should be past 'walked' (likely intended). Also 'from the school' usually omits 'the' when speaking generally ('from school'). This fixes tense consistency and article use.'

× For example, my father cannot fetch me from the school. Then we go.

✓ For example, my father could not pick me up from school, so we went on foot.

The original mixes modal and tense awkwardly with 'cannot' and immediate narrative; when describing past habitual action use past modal 'could not' or 'would not' and a clearer result clause. Also 'fetch me from the school' is wordy; 'pick me up from school' is natural and omit 'the' for general school.'

× I think people like to walk in parks because they enjoy being in a peaceful environment and looking at nature such as trees, flowers and birds. Walk in parks also helps them relax and get some gentle exercise and many people meet friends there.

✓ I think people like to walk in parks because they enjoy being in a peaceful environment and looking at nature such as trees, flowers, and birds. Walking in parks also helps them relax and get some gentle exercise, and many people meet friends there.

Use of 'Walk in parks' is incorrect; a gerund 'Walking in parks' is needed as the subject. Also punctuation improvements and 'Walking' matches parallel structure with 'helps'.'

× If I were given a chance to walk, I would choose to walk in Spain because I haven't seen Spain in real, only in pictures and I think. The environment there is peaceful.

✓ If I were given the chance to take a long walk, I would choose to walk in Spain because I haven't seen Spain in real life, only in pictures, and I think the environment there is peaceful.

Minor phrasing and article errors: 'given a chance' -> 'given the chance' is more natural; 'to walk' -> 'to take a long walk' matches question. 'in real' should be 'in real life'. Also combine sentence fragments for clarity.'

× I actually don't have a recent work because I am always busy in my work as a nurse and I think my parts of my spent hours in walking is already enough when I am.

✓ I actually haven't had a recent walk because I am always busy with my work as a nurse, and I think the amount of walking I do during work is already enough for me.

Many issues: 'don't have a recent work' is incorrect; the intended idea is 'haven't had a recent walk' (present perfect for recent experiences). Use 'busy with my work' not 'busy in my work'. 'my parts of my spent hours in walking' is ungrammatical; rephrase to 'the amount of walking I do during work'. Also 'is already enough when I am' is incomplete; 'for me' completes the thought.'