Walking— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be direct and clear: start with a concise topic sentence, avoid unclear phrases and irrelevant details. Use correct grammar (tenses, articles, countable/uncountable nouns) and link supporting details briefly. Keep under five sentences.

Ejemplo: No, I don't walk a lot. I prefer other forms of exercise, such as cardio and aerobics at home, because they are comfortable and convenient. They fit my schedule better and help me stay fit without needing to go outside.

Sugerencia: Use past tense consistently and give one or two specific examples. Avoid vague or contradictory phrases. Start with a clear topic sentence about frequency, then add a brief reason or memory with a linking word.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often went for walks when I was a child. For example, I used to walk to the park with my friends and our dog every weekend because it helped me relax and stay active.

Sugerencia: Give a clear topic sentence and two specific, well-linked reasons. Use correct verbs and plural/singular forms, and choose concise, appropriate vocabulary (e.g. 'greenery', 'fresh air', 'socialise').

Ejemplo: People like walking in parks because the greenery and fresh air help them relax. In addition, parks provide space to socialise, so many people walk there with friends or pets to enjoy a peaceful atmosphere.

Sugerencia: Answer directly with a specific place and clear reasons. Avoid unclear phrases and repetitions. Use conditional tense correctly and limit to two or three supporting points with linking words.

Ejemplo: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk in the large park near my hometown because it is peaceful and close. Walking there would help me relieve stress and keep fit.

Sugerencia: Be specific about time (use past tense) and place, avoid fillers and hesitations. Provide one clear descriptive reason and keep sentences short and correct. Correct word choice (e.g. 'a year ago', 'I went to', 'public plaza') and fluid linking will improve coherence.

Ejemplo: About a year ago I went for a walk at CMU's public plaza. I walked along the reservoir there; it was a relaxing, laid-back area where many students go to unwind.

× I intend to do another kinds of exercise instead.

✓ I intend to do other kinds of exercise instead.

The phrase uses 'another' incorrectly before a plural noun. 'Another' is used with singular countable nouns; for plural use 'other'. Also 'kinds' requires 'other kinds of exercise' to be grammatical.

× For example, I do like cardio or aerobics at home because it's really comfortable and convenient.

✓ For example, I like to do cardio or aerobics at home because it's really comfortable and convenient.

The original 'I do like' is emphatic but unnatural here. Use the simple present 'I like to do' to state a habit. Also 'like to do cardio or aerobics' is a clearer collocation.

× It's not considered a wet hair or something that disturb my progress.

✓ It is not a problem if my hair gets wet or anything that would disturb my progress.

The sentence misuses 'a wet hair' (singular) and 'something that disturb' (verb agreement). 'Hair' as uncountable or plural; rephrase to 'if my hair gets wet'. Also use 'would disturb' or 'disturbs' to agree with singular 'anything'.

× Did you often go outside to have a walk when you were a child?

✓ Did you often go outside to have a walk when you were a child?

No correction needed: question correctly uses past simple 'did' to ask about a past habit.

× Yes I do. When I was a child I tend to go to work because it's help me.

✓ Yes I did. When I was a child I tended to go for walks because it helped me.

The reply should match past time reference. Change 'do' to 'did' and 'tend' to past 'tended'. 'Go to work' is wrong meaning; use 'go for walks'. 'It's help me' is ungrammatical: use past 'it helped me'.

× It's a great way to unwind and relax and I tend to walk with my friends and pets because it's really good.

✓ It was a great way to unwind and relax, and I tended to walk with my friends and pets because it was really enjoyable.

Maintain past tense consistency when speaking about childhood: change present forms to past ('is'->'was', 'tend'->'tended'). Also 'really good' is vague; 'really enjoyable' is more natural.

× Great way to improve my health.

✓ It was a great way to improve my health.

This fragment lacks a subject and verb. Add 'It was' to form a complete sentence and maintain past tense.

× Walk in park can be a great way to unwind and relax because the park is surrounded by greenery and have a lively convenience and for example, people can walk with their pets or friends to create a peaceful situation.

✓ Walking in a park can be a great way to unwind and relax because the park is surrounded by greenery and has a lively atmosphere. For example, people can walk with their pets or friends to enjoy a peaceful setting.

Use gerund 'Walking' as the subject. Add article 'a park'. Verb agreement: 'park... has' not 'have'. 'Lively convenience' is incorrect collocation; use 'lively atmosphere'. 'Create a peaceful situation' is awkward; use 'enjoy a peaceful setting'.

× Well I just need some kind of park nearly to my hometown because walk in the park can be a great way to take my up things and and win after 10 stay.

✓ Well I just need some kind of park near my hometown because walking in the park can be a great way to clear my mind and unwind after a long day.

'Nearly to my hometown' should be 'near my hometown'. Use 'some kind of park' is acceptable but 'some park near my hometown' is simpler. 'Walk in the park' requires gerund 'walking'. 'take my up things and and win after 10 stay' is unclear; interpret as 'clear my mind and unwind after a long day'.

× Then it's can help maintain my body fits and improve my overall well-being.

✓ Then it can help me maintain my fitness and improve my overall well-being.

Remove extra contraction 'it's can' -> 'it can'. 'Maintain my body fits' is ungrammatical; use 'maintain my fitness' or 'keep my body fit'. Add object 'me' after 'help'.

× Where did you go for a walk lately?

✓ Where did you go for a walk recently?

The question as written is slightly awkward: 'lately' is possible but 'recently' is more natural with 'did'. Either is acceptable; suggested change for naturalness.

× A years ago, I intend to walking into like CMU, uh, public plates.

✓ A year ago, I intended to walk to CMU, to a public place.

Use singular 'a year ago'. Match past tense: 'intend' -> 'intended'. Use infinitive 'to walk'. 'Public plates' is incorrect; likely 'public places'.

× It's the place that, uh, students can walk along the reservoir.

✓ It's a place where students can walk along the reservoir.

'The place that' is acceptable but 'a place where' is more natural. No major tense issue.

× It's quite a great area with the real laid back atmosphere and relaxing, peaceful.

✓ It's quite a great area with a really laid-back, relaxing, peaceful atmosphere.

Use 'a' before 'really'. 'real' should be adverb 'really'. Hyphenate 'laid-back'. Place adjectives before 'atmosphere' in correct order and remove trailing commas.

× It's quite a great area with the real laid back atmosphere and relaxing, peaceful.

✓ It's a great area with a really laid-back, relaxing, peaceful atmosphere.

The original is repetitive and ungrammatical. Simplify and correct adjective form and article usage to produce a fluent sentence.