Walking— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, phát âm/thiếu từ phù hợp. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp, dùng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sửa lỗi thời gian và động từ, giới thiệu chi tiết cụ thể (khi nào, với ai, ở đâu) và giới hạn trong tối đa 4-5 câu. Ví dụ: “Yes, I walk almost every day. I usually walk six or seven times a week with my friends or family in the park near my house. We walk in the evening to relax and chat after work. Walking helps me clear my mind and stay fit.”

Ejemplo: Yes, I walk almost every day. I usually walk six or seven times a week with friends or family in the park near my house. We walk in the evenings to relax and chat after work, and it helps me clear my mind and stay fit.

Sugerencia: Ý tưởng tốt nhưng ngôn ngữ bị sai nặng và khó hiểu. Trả lời trực tiếp bằng câu chủ đề, nêu hoạt động cụ thể khi nhỏ (ví dụ: đi bộ với hàng xóm đến công viên), dùng liên từ để nối ý và tránh từ sai nghĩa. Giữ 3–4 câu, cung cấp lý do vì sao bạn thích đi bộ lúc nhỏ.

Ejemplo: Yes, I did. When I was a child I often walked to the nearby park with my neighbors. We enjoyed exploring the trails and playing together, which I found very exciting. Those walks helped me make friends and feel part of the community.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời nêu được ý chính nhưng dùng từ sai và cấu trúc lủng củng. Nên mở đầu bằng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó giải thích cụ thể (không khí trong lành, an toàn, cảnh đẹp, tiện nghi) và dùng liên từ để mạch lạc. Giữ trong 3 câu.

Ejemplo: I think people enjoy walking in parks because the atmosphere is calm and the air is fresher than in the city. Parks also offer pleasant scenery and safe paths, which makes it easy to relax. As a result, walking there helps people unwind after a busy day.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời khó hiểu do từ bị dùng sai và phát âm/viết sai (blonde, cave Rd., rainfield, fish). Trả lời trực tiếp nêu địa điểm cụ thể (ví dụ: a riverside trail, countryside), lí do rõ ràng (scenery, fresh air) và dùng 2–3 câu. Tránh từ không liên quan.

Ejemplo: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk along the riverside trail near my house. The scenery there is beautiful and the air is very fresh and clear, which makes it a perfect place to relax. I would enjoy walking slowly and taking photos of the views.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời ngắn nhưng ý rõ ràng. Cần trả lời trực tiếp, sửa ngữ pháp (Hiện tại hoàn thành/simple past tùy context), nêu cụ thể hoạt động gần đây (khi, đâu, làm gì) và nếu có, lý do. Dùng 2–3 câu và tránh tiếng ồ ạt (“MMM”).

Ejemplo: I haven't been walking much lately; I've mostly stayed at home. I do some exercise at home but I haven't been consistent, so I haven't gone for long walks recently.

× I always seem six to seven times a week working with my friends or my family to relax and and bring me minds in the past near my house.

✓ I usually walk six to seven times a week with my friends or my family to relax and clear my mind near my house.

Student used incorrect verbs and phrasing for habitual present actions. Use simple present 'walk' or 'usually walk' for routines; remove redundant words ('seem', 'and and', 'bring me minds', 'in the past') and replace with 'clear my mind'. Also place time frequency phrase correctly: 'six to seven times a week'. Suggested improvement: practice forming simple present sentences for routines: subject + (usually) + base verb + object/place.

× Did you often go outside to have a walk when you were a child?

✓ Did you often go outside to have a walk when you were a child?

Question is already grammatically correct for past habitual actions using 'did'. No change needed. Suggested improvement: None; maintain 'Did you ... when you were a child?' for past habits.

× I usually want a flight to have a wife that involves a trial with my neighbors because I felt it's very interesting.

✓ I usually wanted to go on walks with my neighbors because I felt it was very interesting.

Mixed and incorrect verbs and nouns: 'want a flight', 'have a wife', 'involves a trial' are wrong collocations. For past habitual feelings use past tense 'wanted' and 'felt' and correct verb phrase 'go on walks'. Also maintain consistent past tense: 'it was very interesting'. Suggested improvement: learn correct collocations for 'go on a walk/walk with neighbors' and keep verb tense consistent.

× It's a chance to go out with many neighbors and trust with them.

✓ It was a chance to go out with many neighbors and get to know them.

Pronoun and verb choice errors: 'trust with them' is ungrammatical; likely intended 'get to know them' or 'build trust with them'. Also match past tense 'was' with the rest of the sentence. Suggested improvement: choose appropriate verb phrases to express socializing: 'get to know', 'spend time with', 'build relationships'.

× In the give, I think people like to walk in past recurrence, A essence, a pitch for atmosphere to work and it happened to relax and unwind their minds after a busy day.

✓ In general, I think people like to walk in parks because of the peaceful atmosphere; it helps them relax and unwind their minds after a busy day.

Many wrong word choices and prepositions: 'In the give' -> 'In general'; 'walk in past recurrence' -> 'walk in parks'; 'A essence, a pitch for atmosphere to work' -> 'because of the peaceful atmosphere'; 'it happened to relax' -> 'it helps them relax'. Use correct prepositions: 'walk in parks', 'helps them relax'. Suggested improvement: focus on common collocations: 'in general', 'walk in parks', 'relax and unwind'.

× If I have a chance I bring a blonde to take a long walk in a cave Rd. next to the rainfield before my house because I can see the atmosphere here is very fish and clear.

✓ If I had the chance, I would like to take a long walk on Cave Road next to the rice field near my house because the air here is very fresh and clear.

Conditional structure incorrect: for a hypothetical use second conditional 'If I had the chance, I would...'. 'I bring a blonde' and 'cave Rd.' are incorrect nouns; correct to 'take a long walk on Cave Road'. 'rainfield' -> 'rice field'; 'fish' -> 'fresh'. Also 'air' better than 'atmosphere' in this context. Suggested improvement: practice conditional forms (second conditional) and correct place names and collocations.

× MMM lately I don't go out and I stay at home.

✓ Lately I haven't been going out and have been staying at home.

For actions continuing up to now use present perfect continuous: 'have/has been doing'. 'Don't go out' is simple present and does not convey recent ongoing situation. Suggested improvement: learn use of present perfect continuous for recent repeated or ongoing actions: 'lately I have not been going out'.

× I usually do the exercise but not work properly.

✓ I usually exercise, but I don't do it properly.

'Do the exercise' can be simplified to 'exercise'; 'not work properly' is unclear — use 'don't do it properly' to refer to the exercise. Maintain negative auxiliary 'don't'. Suggested improvement: use concise verb forms and clear pronoun references: 'I don't do it properly' or 'I don't exercise properly'.