Walking— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be clearer and more natural: start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using correct grammar and linking words. Keep it within 3–4 sentences and avoid unclear phrases (e.g. “having in career my mind”). Use present simple for habits.

Ejemplo: Yes, I walk a lot. I usually walk daily for 30–45 minutes because it helps me clear my mind and stay fit. Also, I enjoy walking with friends at weekends, which makes it more social and motivating.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and avoid filler words. Use past tense consistently and give a concise reason with a linking phrase (e.g. “because”). Limit to 2–3 sentences and give a specific detail about where or with whom you stayed.

Ejemplo: Not often. I loved walking as a child, but I rarely went out because my family stayed at home most of the time. When I did go out, I usually walked with my mother around the neighborhood.

Sugerencia: Give a clear topic sentence and two concrete reasons with linking words (e.g. “because” and “for example”). Use correct grammar (singular/plural, verb forms) and precise vocabulary (e.g. “safe paths”, “fresh air”).

Ejemplo: People like walking in parks because they are peaceful and safer than busy streets. For example, parks have dedicated footpaths and less traffic, so walkers can relax and enjoy fresh air and greenery.

Sugerencia: Be specific and use conditional and infinitive forms correctly. Start with a clear conditional sentence (“If I had the chance, I would...”) and give one or two specific destinations or activities, using linking words to explain why.

Ejemplo: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk along the seaside. I would not plan a fixed route; instead I would stroll slowly, stop at interesting cafés and take photos of the views.

Sugerencia: Use past tense to describe recent events and be concise. Start with a direct answer naming the place, then add one specific detail about the activity and who you were with. Avoid irrelevant or unclear phrases.

Ejemplo: Lately I didn't go out much because of school, but last week I went for a walk in the nearby park with a friend. We walked for about an hour and then sat and talked on a bench.

× Yes, I enjoy walking a lot compared to my friends or my family.

✓ Yes, I enjoy walking a lot more than my friends or family do.

The original uses 'compared to' awkwardly and omits the auxiliary verb for comparison. Use 'more than' for clear comparison and include 'do' to complete the clause. Suggestion: Use 'more than' + subject + auxiliary for comparisons.

× I found out walking is having in career my mind and I feel satisfied when I working.

✓ I discovered that walking is always on my mind, and I feel satisfied when I am walking.

Multiple issues: 'found out' is acceptable but 'discovered' is clearer; 'walking is having in career my mind' is ungrammatical — use 'walking is always on my mind.' 'when I working' misses the auxiliary 'am' and requires present participle 'walking'. Suggestion: Use 'is always on my mind' and 'when I am walking'.

× Not leery. Uh, what? I know that since I was a child that I love walking, but I don't have opportunity to go outside to have a walk that much because mostly I just stay home with my mother.

✓ Not really. Uh, what? I have loved walking since I was a child, but I don't have many opportunities to go outside for walks because I mostly stay at home with my mother.

'Not leery' is a misspelling of 'not really.' 'I know that since I was a child that I love walking' should use present perfect 'have loved' for an action from the past continuing to now. 'don't have opportunity' needs plural 'opportunities' and 'to go outside to have a walk' is awkward; use 'to go outside for walks.' 'stay home with my mother' should be 'stay at home with my mother.' Suggestion: Use present perfect for continuing states and correct collocations: 'opportunities' and 'go outside for walks.'

× I believe that walking in park uh, have many benefits, but mostly people.

✓ I believe that walking in parks has many benefits for most people.

'walking in park' needs plural or article: 'walking in parks' or 'in the park.' 'have' must agree with singular subject 'walking' or be replaced with 'parks have'; here use 'parks has many benefits' is incorrect — correct form: 'walking in parks has many benefits.' 'but mostly people' is awkward; replace with 'for most people.' Suggestion: Use correct noun forms and prepositional phrase 'for most people.'

× People decide to walk in the park because it provided special land for they and they don't have to aware about the car or auto accident.

✓ People decide to walk in the park because it provides a safe space for them and they don't have to worry about cars or accidents.

'it provided' should be present 'provides' to match general truth. 'special land for they' is wrong pronoun and collocation; use 'a safe space for them.' 'don't have to aware about' is incorrect verb usage — use 'don't have to worry about.' 'car or auto accident' should be pluralized/shortened to 'cars or accidents.' Suggestion: Use correct pronoun 'them,' correct verb 'worry about,' and present tense for general statements.

× If I have the chance I will like normally going to walk.

✓ If I had the chance, I would normally like to go for a walk.

This is a second conditional expressing an unreal or hypothetical situation; use past simple 'had' in the if-clause and 'would' in the main clause. Also 'like normally going to walk' is ungrammatical — use 'would normally like to go for a walk.' Suggestion: Use correct conditional structure: 'If I had the chance, I would...'.

× I will not searching for my destination but I just going walk to watch out the towel and find something interesting to be my stop.

✓ I will not search for a destination; I will just go walking to look around and find something interesting to stop at.

'will not searching' mixes future auxiliary with -ing form; use base verb 'search.' 'I just going walk' should be 'I will just go walking' or 'I will just go for a walk.' 'to watch out the towel' is unintelligible — likely 'look around.' 'find something interesting to be my stop' should be 'find something interesting to stop at.' Suggestion: Use base verbs after 'will,' correct phrasal verbs like 'look around,' and proper infinitive/particle use 'stop at.'

× Since it was my school bag so I didn't go out of my home that much.

✓ Because it was during the school term, I didn't go out of my home much.

'Since it was my school bag' is unclear and ungrammatical; likely intended 'since it was during school' or 'because of school.' Use 'Because it was during the school term' or 'Because I had school.' Avoid using both 'since' and 'so' together; here use one conjunction. 'didn't go out of my home that much' can be simplified to 'didn't go out of my home much.' Suggestion: Use clear causal connectors and correct time expressions for school period.

× Mostly if I go for a walk it will be uh going to Duba for and finding some restaurant to eat at dinner with my family.

✓ Mostly, if I go for a walk it will be going to Dubai and finding a restaurant to have dinner with my family.

'going to Duba for' misspells 'Dubai' and misuses 'for.' Use 'going to Dubai' or 'going for a walk in Dubai.' 'finding some restaurant to eat at dinner' is awkward; use 'finding a restaurant to have dinner at' or 'to have dinner.' Suggestion: Correct place names and prepositions: 'in/ to Dubai' and 'have dinner at a restaurant.'

× But uh, I think last week I go hang out with my friend in the park and we walk.

✓ But, uh, I think last week I hung out with my friend in the park and we walked.

This recounts a past action, so use past tense 'hung out' and 'walked.' 'I think last week I go' incorrectly uses present tense 'go' for a past event. Suggestion: Use simple past for completed actions in the past: 'I hung out' and 'we walked.'