Reading— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be concise and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, then give one or two specific supporting details. Use linking words to make it coherent and correct small grammar issues (e.g., avoid repeating 'actually', use plural agreement and articles correctly).

Ejemplo: I don't enjoy reading very much. I prefer hands-on activities like team sports and outdoor pursuits because I find them more engaging and active, and reading feels too passive for me.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and give one clear reason with a specific example. Avoid contradicting remarks and repetitive fillers. Improve grammar (e.g., 'I prefer reading on a screen because I remember information better' and 'documentaries and technology articles' instead of 'documentaries stuff').

Ejemplo: I prefer reading on a screen because I find it easier to access up-to-date articles and multimedia, such as technology blogs and online documentaries, which keep me more interested than printed books.

Sugerencia: Organize your response: give a clear topic sentence, then two specific examples of when careful reading is needed and when it is not. Remove hesitations and use accurate vocabulary (e.g., 'legal or financial documents' instead of repeated 'something related to').

Ejemplo: You need to read carefully for legal, financial or exam-related documents because mistakes can have serious consequences; but for light reading, like social media posts or casual news, a quick skim is usually sufficient.

Sugerencia: State your preference clearly in one sentence and give a concise reason with an example. Fix grammar errors and avoid repeating phrases. Use linking words for coherence (e.g., 'because', 'so').

Ejemplo: I prefer detailed reading because I want to fully understand the ideas and facts; for example, when I study an article about technology I read every paragraph carefully to avoid missing important points.

× Actually, I actually hate reading.

✓ I actually hate reading.

The sentence contains a redundant repetition of 'actually.' Remove the first 'Actually' to avoid repetition and improve fluency. Use a single adverb 'actually' before the verb to emphasize the speaker's feeling.

× I'm more interested in doing things with my hand.

✓ I'm more interested in doing things with my hands.

The phrase 'with my hand' should be plural 'with my hands' because it refers generally to manual activities; idiomatically native speakers say 'doing things with my hands.' This fixes number agreement for the body part.

× I do like activities such as, you know, sports, going outside and doing teams activities and reading is not a good hobby for me actually.

✓ I like activities such as sports, going outside, and doing team activities, and reading is not a good hobby for me.

Remove filler 'I do' for naturalness. 'Teams activities' is incorrect; use 'team activities' (singular noun as an adjective). Add commas for clarity and place 'actually' at the end is optional — removed here for concision. Also add 'and' before the last item in the list for correct coordination.

× I actually prefer reading things on a screen because I don't remember.

✓ I prefer reading on a screen because I don't remember books well.

'Actually' is unnecessary. The clause 'I don't remember' is incomplete: add the object ('books' or 'what I read') and an adverb ('well') to clarify meaning. Keep tense present simple for preference.

× My parents used to buy me a lot of books, but I didn't read them actually.

✓ My parents used to buy me a lot of books, but I didn't actually read them.

Place 'actually' before the verb for natural emphasis: 'didn't actually read them.' The past habitual 'used to' correctly pairs with past action 'didn't read.'

× But I was pretty interested in reading things on screen such as documentaries stuff and some new things related to technology.

✓ But I was quite interested in reading things on a screen, such as documentaries and news about technology.

Use 'quite' instead of 'pretty' for more natural spoken English (both acceptable). 'Documentaries stuff' is ungrammatical; separate items with 'such as documentaries and news about technology.' 'On a screen' or 'on screens' is preferable. 'New things related to technology' is better expressed as 'news about technology.'

× And those kind of things are like much more interested things that I read on screen.

✓ Those kinds of things are much more interesting to me, and I read them on a screen.

'Those kind' should be plural 'Those kinds of things.' 'Much more interested things' is wrong; use 'much more interesting' and change structure to 'interesting to me.' Keep tense consistent and simplify.

× I mean, if it is something related to an exam or something related to bank documents, something related to common documents, something like, you know, a work related stuff that you have to put much more care effort on, you know, or your reading, you have to be careful when you when you read them.

✓ If it is something related to an exam, bank documents, common documents, or work-related papers, you have to be more careful when you read them.

This long sentence is repetitive and ungrammatical. Combine related items into a concise list, use the adjective form 'work-related,' and use 'papers' or 'documents' rather than 'stuff.' Use 'be more careful' instead of 'put much more care effort on' and remove repeated phrases 'you know' and duplicate 'when you.'

× But other than that, you must not need to be like, you know, careful about reading.

✓ But otherwise, you don't need to be careful when reading.

'You must not need to be' is ungrammatical. Use 'you don't need to' to express lack of necessity. Remove filler 'like, you know.' Keep present simple for general statements.

× When you read the other.

✓ When you read other things, you don't need to be so careful.

The original is a fragment and unclear. Specify 'other things' and complete the clause to state the intended meaning. Match tense and make a full sentence.

× I prefer detail ready because I want to get the details more clarified.

✓ I prefer detailed reading because I want to understand the details better.

'Detail ready' is incorrect; use the noun phrase 'detailed reading.' 'Get the details more clarified' is awkward; use 'understand the details better.' Maintain present simple for preference.

× I wanted to get the idea about what I'm reading otherwise everything would be like.

✓ I want to get the idea of what I'm reading; otherwise it would be difficult for me.

Maintain present tense 'I want' to match current preference. 'Get the idea about' is better as 'get the idea of.' Complete the second clause to express consequence: 'it would be difficult for me.'

× So I mean so hard for me.

✓ So it's very hard for me.

Fix sentence fragment by adding subject and verb: 'it's very hard for me.' Remove duplicated filler 'so I mean so.' Use 'very' for emphasis.

× I mean scanning is not a thing for me.

✓ I mean, scanning is not for me.

'Omit 'a thing' which is colloquial and unnecessary. 'Scanning is not for me' is concise and grammatically correct.

× I I would really love to read things in detail.

✓ I would really love to read things in detail.

Remove duplicated 'I.' The rest is fine: present conditional 'would' expresses preference politely.