Reading— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it has minor accuracy and fluency issues (word choice and grammar). Make one concise topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details. Correct word forms (e.g., 'action' -> 'action', 'mysterious feelings' -> 'a sense of mystery') and simplify phrasing to sound more natural.

Ejemplo: Yes, I love reading. My favourite genres are thrillers, action and mystery because they create a strong sense of suspense and I enjoy trying to work out the ending. For example, I often re-read clues in the last chapters to see how everything fits together.

Sugerencia: Your idea is good but the answer contains grammatical errors, hesitations and vague expressions. Use a clear topic sentence, correct subject-verb agreement, and concise supporting reasons. Avoid fillers like 'umm' and replace awkward phrases ('try to hinder that') with natural alternatives ('avoid screens').

Ejemplo: I prefer reading printed books. My eyes get tired quickly when I read on a gadget, which makes me feel mentally fatigued, so I usually avoid screens for long reading sessions.

Sugerencia: Good contrast between careful and casual reading, but grammar and word choice need polishing, and avoid filler words. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give specific examples and reasons using linking words ('for example', 'however'). Replace 'your process might be wrong' with a clearer consequence.

Ejemplo: You should read instructions and manuals carefully because missing a step could cause a mistake or even be dangerous. However, you can skim advertisements or emails that aren’t important to get the main idea quickly.

Sugerencia: The response is structured and relevant but has hesitations and small grammatical errors. Use natural collocations ('detailed reading' -> 'detailed reading' or 'reading in detail'), avoid fillers, and tighten sentences. Provide one clear reason for each preference with a linking phrase ('for instance', 'on the other hand').

Ejemplo: It depends on the purpose. For novels I prefer reading in detail because I want to form vivid images and remember characters, so I sometimes re-read passages. On the other hand, during exams I scan texts to find specific answers quickly.

× Yes, I love reading and my favorite genre is thriller, actions and mystery because it gives some mysterious feelings that at the end of the book you need to uncover.

✓ Yes, I love reading and my favorite genres are thriller, action and mystery because they give a mysterious feeling that you need to uncover at the end of the book.

Errors: 'genre' should be plural when listing multiple types; 'actions' is incorrect as an adjective/noun here — use 'action'; 'it gives some mysterious feelings' mixes singular/plural and uses 'some' unnecessarily, better: 'they give a mysterious feeling' or 'they give mysterious feelings'; word order 'at the end of the book you need to uncover' is awkward. Suggestion: make subject/verb number agree (genres/are/they), use correct noun form 'action', use singular 'feeling' or plural consistently, and place the clause 'at the end of the book' before 'you need to uncover' for clarity.

× In my opinion I prefer to read on a real book based on paper because when I start reading on my gadget, my eyes is getting tired easily and the exhaustion usually umm comes up to my brain and my head, so I try to hinder that.

✓ In my opinion I prefer to read from a real paper book because when I start reading on my gadget my eyes get tired easily and I usually feel exhausted in my head, so I try to avoid that.

Errors: 'read on a real book based on paper' is awkward — use 'read from a real paper book'; 'my eyes is getting tired' has subject-verb agreement and progressive misuse — 'eyes' requires 'get', not 'is getting'; 'the exhaustion usually comes up to my brain and my head' is incorrect collocation and redundancy; 'hinder' is wrong verb choice — use 'avoid'. Suggestion: use simple present for habitual states ('my eyes get tired'), correct verb agreement, use natural collocations like 'feel exhausted' and avoid redundant phrases.

× In my opinion you need to read some manual books, for example carefully, because if you're not reading thoroughly, all your process might be wrong, and when not is perhaps on the uh, advertisement on things that you're not really interested to skimming it maybe just fine.

✓ In my opinion you need to read some manuals carefully, because if you don't read thoroughly your whole process might be wrong, and you don't need to read carefully advertisements or things you are not really interested in; skimming them may be fine.

Errors: 'some manual books' should be 'some manuals' or 'manual books' with plural; misplaced adverb 'for example carefully' — move 'carefully' after the object; 'you're not reading' should be simple present 'you don't read' for general advice; 'all your process' should be 'your whole process' or 'the whole process'; 'when not is perhaps on the uh, advertisement on things that you're not really interested to skimming it maybe just fine' has multiple issues: 'when not' unclear, incorrect preposition 'interested to' should be 'interested in', 'skimming it' wrong pronoun and structure. Suggestion: use simple present for general truths, correct plural forms, use 'interested in', and restructure the sentence into two clear clauses.

× It depends on the situation. For reading a book, I would love to detail reading. Even if I fail to umm, have a descriptive image in my head, I will try to read it again so I can memorize it better. But for exam for example if it's like a short question, I will prefer to scan.

✓ It depends on the situation. For reading a book, I prefer detailed reading. Even if I fail to form a descriptive image in my head, I will try to read it again so I can remember it better. But for an exam, for example, if there are short questions, I prefer to scan.

Errors: 'would love to detail reading' is ungrammatical — use adjective 'detailed reading' or 'read in detail'; 'fail to umm, have a descriptive image' should use 'fail to form' (verb + object) rather than 'have' with 'fail to'; 'memorize it better' is acceptable but 'remember it better' is more natural here; 'for exam' needs article 'an exam'; 'if it's like a short question' should be plural 'if there are short questions' or 'if it is a short question' and use consistent preference phrasing. Suggestion: use correct adjective forms, use 'fail to form' for creating mental images, use articles with 'exam', and keep number agreement.