Reading— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be direct and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers and repetitions, and give 1–2 specific supporting details. Use linking words when adding details and keep to 3–4 short sentences. Also correct grammar (e.g., “I like reading Nepali storybooks by well-known authors. I especially enjoy comedy and romantic stories.”).

Ejemplo: I enjoy reading Nepali storybooks by well-known authors. In particular, I like comedies and romantic stories because they are entertaining and easy to relate to. For example, I recently read a romantic novella that had realistic characters and made me reflect on relationships.

Sugerencia: Answer directly: state your preference in one clear sentence, then give 1–2 specific reasons using linking words (e.g., “because”, “so”). Avoid vague or repetitive phrases and correct verb forms. Keep the response within 3–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: I prefer reading on paper rather than on a screen. I find paper more comfortable because it is easier on my eyes and I enjoy the physical feeling of turning pages. For example, when I read a novel on paper I can make notes in the margins, which helps me remember the story better.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear statement about when you read carefully, then contrast with when you do not, using linking words such as “but” or “however.” Provide a specific reason or short example to support each case and avoid awkward phrasing.

Ejemplo: I read carefully when the material is realistic or informative, such as news articles or non-fiction, because I need to understand facts accurately. However, I do not read comedies or light romantic stories as carefully since I read them mainly for enjoyment and relaxation.

Sugerencia: Answer the exact question (scanning or detailed reading) with a clear topic sentence. If you prefer detailed reading, explain why with specific reasons and link your ideas. Mention examples of when you use each method. Keep sentences simple and grammatical.

Ejemplo: I prefer detailed reading because I usually need to understand all parts of a text carefully. For instance, when I study online articles or research, I read every section slowly and take notes. Sometimes, however, I scan webpages quickly to find specific information such as a name or date.

× I like reading of most of Nepali story books that, that of famous, uh, writers and I exactly like a comedy and some romantic, some real kinds of story books. I, uh, before I.

✓ I like reading most Nepali story books by famous writers, and I especially like comedies, some romances, and some realistic stories.

The student used incorrect prepositions and awkward phrasing ('reading of', 'that of famous') and unclear word choices ('exactly like', 'real kinds'). Use 'reading most Nepali story books' without 'of', use 'by famous writers' to indicate authors, and replace 'exactly' with 'especially'. Also replace 'comedy' with the plural 'comedies' and 'real kinds of story books' with 'realistic stories' for clarity. Suggestion: simplify phrases, use 'by' for authors, and prefer adjectives like 'realistic'.

× I exactly prefer a read on a paper in a paper.

✓ I exactly prefer reading on paper.

The student used an incorrect article and word form ('a read on a paper in a paper'). Use the gerund 'reading' and the uncountable noun 'paper' without an article when referring to the medium in general. Suggestion: say 'I prefer reading on paper' or 'I prefer to read on paper'.

× When I toss that paper that filled me while I read some book book or some novels or some stories in the papers, I feel that's the reasons of the most.

✓ When I hold a paper that excites me while I read a book, novel, or story on paper, I feel happiest.

This sentence has multiple structure and word choice errors ('toss that paper that filled me', 'book book', 'in the papers', 'that's the reasons of the most'). 'Toss' is wrong verb; 'hold' or 'have' fits. 'Filled me' is unclear; use 'excites me' or 'interests me'. Use singular or plural consistently and simplify to 'book, novel, or story on paper'. Replace awkward phrase 'that's the reasons of the most' with 'I feel happiest'. Suggestion: use clear verbs and concise structure: subject + verb + object.

× I exactly prefer a read on a paper in a paper. When I toss that paper that filled me while I read some book book or some novels or some stories in the papers, I feel that's the reasons of the most.

✓ I especially prefer reading on paper. When I have a paper that excites me while I read a book, novel, or story on paper, I feel happiest.

Verb forms and tense consistency were inconsistent ('toss' with present 'read'). Use simple present 'prefer' and 'have' to describe general habits. Ensure verbs match habitual meaning. Suggestion: maintain simple present for preferences and habitual actions.

× I exactly read on the realistic of books carefully and I did not read some comedy or some romantic book, not carefully that kinds of book.

✓ I read realistic books carefully, and I do not read comedies or romantic books carefully.

Incorrect preposition 'on the realistic of books' should be 'realistic books'. Also tense and negation were awkward: use 'I read... carefully' for habitual action and 'I do not read... carefully' for the contrasting idea. Replace 'that kinds of book' with 'those kinds of books' if needed. Suggestion: use correct noun phrases ('realistic books') and consistent negation with 'do not' for present simple.

× I exactly like a comedy and some romantic, some real kinds of story books.

✓ I especially like comedies, some romantic stories, and some realistic stories.

The phrase mixed singular 'a comedy' with vague 'some romantic, some real kinds'. Use correct plural forms and quantifiers: 'comedies' (plural) and 'some romantic stories', 'some realistic stories'. Suggestion: match quantifier and noun number: 'some' requires plural countable nouns.

× I, uh, before I.

✓ No correction possible: this fragment is incomplete; suggest 'I used to read them before.'

This is a sentence fragment without a verb or clear meaning. It likely intends to say a past habit ('I used to' or 'Before, I...'). Suggestion: complete the sentence with a verb phrase, for example 'I used to read them before.'

× In a digital reading I known about all things that details one by one, one of parts and that helps for readings.

✓ With digital reading I know all the details one by one, and that helps my reading.

Incorrect verb form 'known' should be 'know' for present tense and pronoun/possessive 'that helps for readings' is awkward; use 'that helps my reading'. Also word order 'all things that details one by one' should be 'all the details one by one'. Suggestion: use correct present tense 'I know' and clearer noun phrases 'all the details' and 'helps my reading'.

× I prefer a digital reading. In a digital reading I known about all things that details one by one, one of parts and that helps for readings.

✓ I prefer digital reading. In digital reading I know all the details one by one, and that helps my reading.

'I prefer a digital reading' uses unnecessary article and awkward noun form. Use 'digital reading' as an uncountable activity. 'Known' is incorrect past participle; present simple 'know' is required. Suggestion: use 'I prefer digital reading' and maintain present simple for general statements.