Reading— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more natural and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence, then briefly explain why with specific reasons and an example. Avoid repetition and grammatical errors (e.g., tense and article use). Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' to make your answer coherent.

Ejemplo: Not really. I don't enjoy reading books much because I find them slow and hard to concentrate on. For example, I often get distracted after a few pages, so I prefer listening to podcasts or watching documentaries instead.

Sugerencia: Clarify and simplify your reason. Use correct vocabulary and grammar (e.g., 'short sight' not 'short sides', 'devices' and singular/plural agreement). Give one or two clear reasons and a brief example. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example'.

Ejemplo: I prefer reading on paper because it is easier on my eyes and helps me focus. For example, when I read a printed book I can concentrate longer without the distractions of notifications on my phone.

Sugerencia: Organize your answer: state clearly when careful reading is necessary and when it's not, then give reasons. Correct grammar ('grammar mistakes', 'read as you like') and use linking words like 'when' and 'while' to contrast the situations.

Ejemplo: You need to read carefully during exams or work tasks because accuracy matters and small mistakes can change the meaning. By contrast, when I'm reading for pleasure I read more casually and skip details if I'm enjoying the story.

Sugerencia: Give a clear direct answer and support it with concise reasons and a short example. Avoid hesitations and correct grammar ('takes a lot of time'). Use linking words like 'because' and 'however' to compare scanning and detailed reading.

Ejemplo: I prefer scanning most of the time because I'm not keen on long reading sessions and scanning lets me find key points quickly. However, for study or complex texts I use detailed reading because it helps me understand and remember important information.

× I don't like reading. I'm not a fan of reading books. I found reading is a very boring thing and I do not get any fun during the process.

✓ I don't like reading. I'm not a fan of reading books. I find reading very boring and I do not have any fun while doing it.

Original uses 'I found' which is past tense but context is general preference, so present simple 'I find' is correct. 'Reading is a very boring thing' is wordy and unidiomatic; use 'reading very boring'. 'Do not get any fun during the process' is unnatural: use 'do not have any fun while doing it'. Suggestions: use present simple for habitual statements and prefer natural collocations (find + adjective, have fun + while doing).

× I do prefer reading on paper because I don't want to get short sides of spending too much because of spending too much time on the screen and or some inertia devices. And probably paper is a convenient ways to read.

✓ I prefer reading on paper because I don't want to suffer the negative effects of spending too much time on screens or other electronic devices. Paper is also a convenient way to read.

Many preposition and word choice errors: 'get short sides of' is incorrect; use 'suffer the negative effects of'. 'Because of spending too much time on the screen' should be 'spending too much time on screens' or 'on the screen' depending on context; plural 'screens' is natural. 'and or some inertia devices' is incorrect; correct phrase is 'or other electronic devices'. 'a convenient ways' mixes singular article with plural noun; use 'a convenient way'. Suggestions: use standard prepositions ('of','on') and correct noun forms; avoid literal translations like 'inertia devices'.

× Probably doing the exam you should read the paragraph more carefully and just avoid some grammat grammatically mistakes. And when you are just reading for fun you could read you like.

✓ When doing an exam, you should read the paragraphs more carefully and avoid grammatical mistakes. When you are reading for fun, you can read however you like.

Word order and tense/modal issues: 'Probably doing the exam you should' is awkward; use 'When doing an exam, you should'. 'Read the paragraph more carefully' -> plural 'paragraphs' or 'a paragraph' depending, but in general 'paragraphs' fits. 'Avoid some grammat grammatically mistakes' mixes words; correct is 'avoid grammatical mistakes'. 'You could read you like' is incorrect pronoun/order; use 'you can read however you like'. Suggestions: use correct adjective form 'grammatical', correct modal ('should' for advice, 'can' for permission) and natural adverbial phrases ('however you like').

× Probably scanning because I'm not a big fan of reading and probably I read I just read on my exam. So if I want to get my school very well, you know to read in some skills, not detailed reading because detailed reading requires many time.

✓ I prefer scanning because I'm not a big fan of reading; I only really read when I have exams. If I want to do well at school, I use some reading skills rather than detailed reading, because detailed reading requires a lot of time.

Tense and word choice problems: 'Probably scanning because I'm not a big fan' needs a main clause 'I prefer scanning'. 'I read I just read on my exam' is ungrammatical; corrected to 'I only really read when I have exams'. 'If I want to get my school very well' is incorrect; use 'do well at school'. 'To read in some skills' is wrong; use 'use some reading skills'. 'Requires many time' should be 'requires a lot of time'. Suggestions: choose appropriate main verbs, use idiomatic verbs ('do well'), and correct quantifier expressions ('a lot of time').