Reading— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be clearer and more grammatical: begin with a direct topic sentence, avoid fillers, correct verb forms, and give a specific example with brief details. Use linking words (for example, because) to show reason. Keep to around 2–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I love reading because it helps me relax and improves my mental well-being. For example, I am currently reading The Hundred-Year-Old Man Who Climbed Out the Window and Disappeared, which is humorous and keeps me engaged. Reading fiction like this helps me unwind after a busy day.

Sugerencia: State your preference directly, then give two specific reasons using linking words (because, so, therefore). Correct collocations (e.g., 'my eyes feel strained', 'concentrate on the page'). Keep sentences concise and natural.

Ejemplo: I prefer reading on paper because my eyes feel strained when I read on a screen and I dislike blue light. As a result, I can concentrate better on physical pages, so I usually choose printed books over digital ones.

Sugerencia: Begin with a clear topic sentence addressing both parts, use correct tense and vocabulary (e.g., 'for schoolwork' and 'for pleasure reading'), and explain reasons briefly with linking words (because, whereas). Avoid vague phrasing and ensure grammar is correct.

Ejemplo: I need to read carefully for schoolwork and academic texts because accuracy and understanding details are important. In contrast, when I read novels for pleasure I usually skim a little and focus on the general meaning, since I read mainly for enjoyment.

Sugerencia: Answer directly then contrast the two reading styles with clear examples and linking words (if, but, whereas). Use correct phrases ('it depends on', 'scan a book', 'detailed reading') and keep it to 2–3 sentences for clarity.

Ejemplo: It depends on the book: I usually scan light, enjoyable books to get the main points quickly, but I prefer detailed reading for academic texts or complex literature so I can fully appreciate ideas and language.

× Uh well I really love reading because reading in my joy and it very recreational.

✓ Uh, well, I really love reading because reading is my joy and it is very recreational.

Missing verbs and incorrect adjective/adverb usage: 'reading in my joy' should be 'reading is my joy' (linking verb 'is' needed). Also 'it very recreational' needs the verb 'is' to link the subject and adjective. Suggestion: include the correct form of the verb 'to be' when linking a subject to a noun or adjective (reading is my joy; it is very recreational).

× Also I think reading a book from my well mental well-being.

✓ Also, I think reading a book is good for my mental well-being.

Wrong word order and adjective usage: 'from my well mental well-being' is ungrammatical. Use 'good for' to show benefit and 'mental well-being' as the noun phrase. Suggestion: use 'is good for my mental well-being' or 'benefits my mental well-being'. Include 'is' as the main verb linking subject and complement.

× For example, I currently read a book name 100 years old man and a window very nice.

✓ For example, I am currently reading a book called The 100-Year-Old Man Who Climbed Out the Window and Disappeared, and it is very nice.

Tense and noun phrase errors: 'currently read' should be present continuous 'am currently reading' for an ongoing action. The book title needs correct wording and the verb linking to opinion requires 'it is'. Suggestion: use present continuous for ongoing actions and use 'called' to introduce titles; follow with 'it is' to state opinion.

× I think I prefer to read on paper because when I read on a screen my eye very tight and I don't like the blue blue light so much.

✓ I think I prefer to read on paper because when I read on a screen my eyes feel strained and I don't like the blue light so much.

Preposition and noun number issues: 'my eye very tight' is incorrect. Use plural 'eyes' and a verb 'feel' with an adjective 'strained'. Also 'blue blue light' is redundant; use 'the blue light'. Suggestion: say 'my eyes feel strained' or 'my eyes get tired' when reading on screens.

× So read on paper will help me to concentrate to the page.

✓ So reading on paper helps me concentrate on the page.

Verb form and preposition: 'read on paper will help me to concentrate to the page' should use gerund 'reading' as subject and the verb 'help' followed by base verb 'concentrate'. Use preposition 'on' with 'concentrate'. Suggestion: 'Reading on paper helps me concentrate on the page.'

× So that's why I always read on the book instead of screen.

✓ So that's why I always read from a book instead of a screen.

Article and preposition errors: 'read on the book' and 'instead of screen' are incorrect. Use 'read from a book' or 'read a book' and 'a screen' with the indefinite article. Suggestion: use appropriate articles ('a' or 'the') depending on specificity and 'from' or no preposition for reading a book.

× I think I need to read carefully for my school work and for academic subject.

✓ I think I need to read carefully for my schoolwork and for academic subjects.

Countable noun and compounding errors: 'school work' should be 'schoolwork' (one word). 'Academic subject' should be plural 'academic subjects' when speaking generally. Suggestion: use correct compound noun forms and pluralize when referring generally to multiple subjects.

× And when I was reading for fun or read a novel I often reached for fun.

✓ And when I am reading for fun or reading a novel, I often read just for enjoyment.

Tense and verb choice errors: Mixed past ('was reading') and incorrect verb 'reached' which is wrong context. Use present simple or present continuous to describe habitual actions: 'when I am reading for fun... I often read just for enjoyment.' Suggestion: keep tense consistent and choose verbs that match meaning (read for enjoyment).

× Don't need to very carefully but still need to understand the general meaning that auto want to give me.

✓ I don't need to be very careful, but I still need to understand the general meaning that the author wants to give me.

Missing subject and verb and wrong word forms: 'Don't need to very carefully' lacks subject 'I' and correct adjective 'careful' rather than adverb 'carefully' after 'be'. 'auto' should be 'author' and 'want' should be 'wants' to agree with singular subject. Suggestion: include subject, use 'be careful', and ensure subject-verb agreement ('author wants').

× I think it up to what kind of book I'm reading.

✓ I think it depends on what kind of book I'm reading.

Missing verb and incorrect structure: 'it up to' should be 'it depends on'. Suggestion: use the correct phrasal verb 'depend on' to express conditional preference.

× Like I was scanning even enjoyable book and like it.

✓ For example, I might scan even an enjoyable book and still like it.

Tense and article errors: 'I was scanning' suggests past continuous; use conditional/modal 'might scan' or present habit 'I scan'. Also 'enjoyable book' needs an article 'an'. Suggestion: use modals to express possibility ('might scan') and include articles for singular countable nouns.

× Not very academic but for my school subject or some literature book I will prefer detailed reading so I can enjoy the fully term of the book.

✓ Not very academic, but for my school subjects or for some literature books I prefer detailed reading so I can fully enjoy the book.

Word order and article errors: 'I will prefer' is unnatural for general preference; use 'I prefer'. 'Enjoy the fully term of the book' is incorrect—use 'fully enjoy the book'. Pluralize 'school subjects' and 'literature books' if speaking generally. Suggestion: use 'prefer' for habitual preferences, place adverb 'fully' before the verb, and simplify the final phrase to 'fully enjoy the book'.