Reading— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 문장이 전반적으로 이해되지만 몇 가지 문제를 개선해야 합니다. 먼저 중복된 단어(예: "read read")를 제거하고 동사 시제 일관성을 유지하세요. 질문에는 간단한 주제 문장으로 바로 답한 뒤 추가 설명을 한 두 문장으로 연결하는 것이 좋습니다. 연결어(예: "nowadays", "but")를 적절히 사용하되 문장 구조를 더 자연스럽게 만드세요. 또한 구체적인 예시(좋아하는 장르나 최근 읽은 책 제목)를 덧붙이면 답변이 더 풍부해집니다.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy reading. When I was in high school I mostly studied textbooks, but nowadays I prefer reading fiction, especially contemporary novels. For example, I recently read a mystery novel that kept me guessing until the end.

Sugerencia: 의견은 분명하지만 표현이 어색하고 문법적 오류가 있습니다. 'prefer A to B' 구조를 사용하고 이유를 간결하게 두 문장으로 나누세요. 또한 'distracting'를 수동태/능동태로 정확히 쓰고, 'it is hard for my eye' 대신 'it strains my eyes' 같이 자연스러운 표현을 쓰세요. 연결어로 'because' 다음에는 구체적 이유를 하나 또는 두 개로 정리하세요.

Ejemplo: I prefer reading on paper to reading on a screen because I can concentrate better. Reading on screens often distracts me with notifications, and it also strains my eyes after a long time.

Sugerencia: 답변이 길고 문장 마무리가 불완전합니다. 두 가지 상황(주의가 필요한 경우와 필요하지 않은 경우)을 명확히 나누어 간결한 문장으로 말하세요. 이유는 구체적으로 제시하고 문장 끝을 완성하세요. 예: 'when I study for exams'과 'when I read for pleasure'로 구분하고 연결어('however', 'on the other hand')를 사용하세요.

Ejemplo: I need to read carefully when I'm preparing for midterm or final exams because as a junior my grades affect my future job and graduate school applications. On the other hand, I don't read very carefully when I'm reading for fun or relaxing.

Sugerencia: 의견은 명확하지만 표현이 부자연스러우며 몇몇 문법 오류가 있습니다. 'read all the letters' 대신 'read everything' 또는 'read every word'가 더 자연스럽습니다. 'I'm a little perfectionist'는 관용적으로 'I'm a bit of a perfectionist'로 고치고, 'I don't like miss any letters'는 'I don't like to miss anything'로 수정하세요. 한두 개의 연결어로 이유를 더 자연스럽게 연결하세요.

Ejemplo: I prefer detailed reading to scanning because I tend to be a bit of a perfectionist. Therefore I try to read every word carefully so I don't miss any important information.

× When I was in high school I usually read the textbook, but I usually read read fiction novels nowadays.

✓ When I was in high school I usually read textbooks, but nowadays I usually read fiction novels.

Sentence mixes past habit with present habit; use plural textbooks for general reference and place 'nowadays' before the present verb; remove duplicated 'read'. Suggestion: Use 'textbooks' for general study materials and put time adverbials near the verb for clarity.

× I prefer reading on paper more than reading on a screen because reading on paper is more focused and reading on a screen makes me distracting like watching YouTube and it is hard for my eye.

✓ I prefer reading on paper to reading on a screen because reading on paper helps me focus, whereas reading on a screen distracts me, for example with YouTube, and is hard on my eyes.

Use 'prefer A to B' not 'prefer A more than B'. 'Makes me distracting' is incorrect; use 'distracts me'. 'Hard for my eye' should be 'hard on my eyes'. Also improve sentence connectors and parallel structure. Suggestion: Use 'prefer A to B', 'helps me focus' and 'distracts me' and plural 'eyes'.

× I need to read carefully when I study my major for midterm or final exams because I'm a junior and my score is very important to get a job or prepare Graduate School and I don't need to carefully read when.

✓ I need to read carefully when I study for midterm or final exams in my major because, as a junior, my scores are very important for getting a job or preparing for graduate school, and I don't need to read carefully for less important materials.

Original sentence has incomplete clause 'and I don't need to carefully read when' and awkward word order. Use 'study for exams in my major', 'as a junior' and 'scores' plural. Use 'preparing for graduate school' and complete the contrasting clause. Suggestion: Complete clauses and use proper prepositions ('for exams', 'for graduate school') and parallel structure.

× I prefer detailed reading to scanning. Whenever I read some materials, I have to read all the letters on the paper because I'm a little perfectionist and I don't like miss any letters.

✓ I prefer detailed reading to scanning. Whenever I read material, I read every word on the page because I'm a bit of a perfectionist and I don't like to miss anything.

Use 'material' or 'materials' consistently; 'letters' is unnatural—use 'words'. 'I'm a little perfectionist' needs article: 'a bit of a perfectionist'. 'Don't like miss' should be 'don't like to miss' or 'I try not to miss'. Also 'all the letters' -> 'every word' and 'on the paper' -> 'on the page'. Suggestion: Use natural collocations: 'read every word', 'a bit of a perfectionist', and include 'to' before verbs like 'to miss'.