Reading— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答は意図が伝わるが、文法・語彙・論理の誤りが多く、発話が不自然です。まず、主題文で直接答え（Yes/No + brief reason）を述べ、その後で具体的な例（どんな種類の本か、なぜ好きか）を1〜2文で付け加えてください。接続語（for example, because, so）を使って文の流れを整え、語彙は Nobel→novels、your book→books など正しい単語を使いましょう。発話は最大5文に収め、冗長な言い回しや曖昧な代名詞は避けること。

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy reading. I usually read novels and biographies because I like learning about people’s lives and different cultures. For example, last month I finished a biography of a famous scientist which inspired me a lot.

Sugerencia: 文法と語彙の誤り（leading→reading、Comm→commute、冗長な構造）が多く、答えが分かりにくいです。まず明確に「paper」か「screen」を選び、その理由を2つ程度具体的に述べてください。接続語（because, and, however）で理由をつなぎ、場所の例（on the train）を自然に示しましょう。短く簡潔な文章に分けると良いです。

Ejemplo: I prefer reading on a screen because it is more convenient and portable. For instance, I can read e-books on my phone during my commute on the train, and I can adjust the font size easily.

Sugerencia: 主題文はある程度あるが、語順・語彙の誤り（their→things?; lead→read）と不自然な表現が目立ちます。まず直接に「I need to read carefully when...」と述べ、具体例（exams, contracts）と理由（to avoid mistakes, to understand questions）を述べてください。必要でない場合の例（軽いニュース記事やSNSの投稿）は対比として一文で示すと効果的です。

Ejemplo: I need to read carefully when I am studying for exams or reading academic texts because small mistakes can affect my grades. However, I don’t read carefully when I browse social media or light news articles, since those are for casual information.

Sugerencia: 答えがあいまいで、話の筋が通っていません。まずどちらが好きかを明確に述べ、その理由を論理的に説明してください。不要なフィラー（uh）を減らし、代名詞や語彙の誤り（their own eyes, the me）を避けてください。具体例（reading for study requires detailed reading）を添えると説得力が増します。文は短めにして最大5文に収めましょう。

Ejemplo: I prefer detailed reading because it helps me fully understand the meaning and remember important points. For example, when I study textbooks I read slowly and take notes, while I only scan emails for key information.

× As I like reading so I usually read your book including a Nobel and biography as all, so it is very fun time for me.

✓ As I like reading, I usually read books, including novels and biographies, so reading is a very enjoyable pastime for me.

The student used incorrect pronouns and nouns (your book, a Nobel) and awkward phrasing. Use 'books' (plural) for general reading, 'novels' not 'Nobel', and 'biographies'. Replace 'so it is very fun time for me' with 'reading is a very enjoyable pastime for me' for natural expression. Use commas to separate clauses. Grammar problem type ID:12

× I prefer to leading material or screen because the leading on screen is a bit convenient and efficient and then leading a paper so I can read everywhere like a train and Comm during commute.

✓ I prefer reading material on a screen because reading on a screen is a bit more convenient and efficient than reading on paper; I can read anywhere, for example on a train during my commute.

The student used 'to leading' incorrectly; the correct form is the gerund 'reading'. 'Leading' should be 'reading'. 'Comm' is incomplete; use 'commute'. Compare two things with 'more... than'. Also add punctuation to clarify meaning. Grammar problem type ID:8

× I read their carefully thing I take examination like a Japanese and English subject.

✓ I read carefully when I take exams, such as in Japanese and English subjects.

The student used 'their' incorrectly; likely intended 'there' or 'they', but context requires adverb placement: 'read carefully'. Use plural 'exams' and 'subjects'. Correct word order: adverb 'carefully' after verb 'read'. Use 'when' to introduce the time clause. Grammar problem type ID:9

× So it is very important for us to lead carefully in order to get to a better school.

✓ So it is very important for us to read carefully in order to get into a better school.

The verb 'lead' is wrong; should be 'read'. 'Get to a better school' is unnatural; use 'get into a better school'. Maintain infinitive 'to read carefully'. Grammar problem type ID:12

× I don't like scanning a paper because, uh, for instance, uh, in my opinion, a their own eyes is a very important for us, uh, to understand the me.

✓ I don't like skimming a paper because, in my opinion, using our own eyes to read carefully is very important for understanding the content.

Many pronoun and noun errors: 'scanning a paper' is better as 'skimming a paper' but 'scanning' is acceptable; however context implies quick reading so 'skimming'. 'a their own eyes' is incorrect; use 'using our own eyes' or 'reading with our own eyes'. 'to understand the me' is wrong; use 'understanding the content'. Remove filler words 'uh' for clarity. Grammar problem type ID:12