Reading— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời đúng hướng nhưng cần tự nhiên hơn, sửa ngữ pháp và rút gọn để súc tích; thêm câu chủ đề rõ ràng và một chi tiết cụ thể. Lưu ý dùng thì và cấu trúc hợp lý (ví dụ: “I enjoy reading” thay vì “I realized reading”). Hạn chế lặp từ (avoid repeating “reading”).

Ejemplo: I enjoy reading because it helps me gain knowledge and broaden my view of the world. For example, I often read short non-fiction books about history and science to learn new facts and perspectives.

Sugerencia: Ý rõ ràng nhưng nên viết tự nhiên hơn và ngắn gọn; sửa cấu trúc như “prefer reading on paper” và tránh lặp lại từ. Thêm một lý do cụ thể và một ví dụ ngắn để làm câu trả lời thuyết phục hơn.

Ejemplo: I prefer reading on paper because screens strain my eyes after long periods. For instance, I usually choose a paperback novel or a printed newspaper when I want to read for an hour or more.

Sugerencia: Cần rõ ràng hơn và sửa ngữ pháp (ví dụ: “information” không đếm được). Tránh liệt kê dài không mạch lạc; tách thành hai phần: khi cần đọc kỹ và khi không cần. Thêm linking word để mạch lạc (e.g., “however”, “on the other hand”).

Ejemplo: I read carefully when I am working or studying, for example when I analyze data for a school project because accuracy matters. However, when I want to relax, I skim articles or light stories to unwind.

Sugerencia: Ý chính rõ ràng nhưng cần sửa ngữ pháp và rút gọn. Dùng cụm từ đúng như “detailed reading” và kết hợp linking word “because” để nối lý do. Bổ sung ví dụ cụ thể về trường hợp cần đọc kỹ.

Ejemplo: I prefer detailed reading because it helps me understand the author’s points and learn more. For example, I read academic articles closely to take notes and remember key arguments.

× Yes, I realized reading because reading can help me to improve my knowledge as well as expand my horizons about the world.

✓ Yes, I enjoy reading because it helps me improve my knowledge and expand my horizons about the world.

Student used 'realized' incorrectly; the intended verb is 'enjoy'. The sentence also repeats 'reading' and uses 'can help me to improve' which is wordy. Use simple present 'helps' to state a habitual fact and remove the unnecessary infinitive 'to'. Suggestion: replace 'realized' with 'enjoy', use 'it' to avoid repetition, use 'helps me improve'.

× I think I prefer to read on the paper because reading on the screen can have a bad impact on my eyes and my health too.

✓ I think I prefer to read on paper because reading on a screen can have a bad impact on my eyes and my health.

The phrase 'on the paper' is incorrect; use the uncountable 'on paper' for the medium. 'On the screen' should be 'on a screen' to refer to screens in general. The final 'too' is redundant. Suggestion: use 'on paper' and 'on a screen', and omit unnecessary 'too'.

× So I always read on the paper or some newspaper.

✓ So I always read on paper or in a newspaper.

'On the paper' is incorrect; use 'on paper' or 'in a newspaper' to express reading format. 'Some newspaper' is ungrammatical; use 'a newspaper' or 'newspapers'. Suggestion: use 'in a newspaper' or 'newspapers' depending on meaning.

× I sometimes read carefully when I am working or studying or analyzing some data for my school, and when I wish to relax, I sometimes go over many informations to unwind.

✓ I sometimes read carefully when I am working, studying, or analyzing data for my school, and when I want to relax I sometimes go over a lot of information to unwind.

Use parallel gerund forms without repeating 'or'. 'Some data' is acceptable but 'informations' is incorrect because 'information' is uncountable; use 'a lot of information' or 'some information'. 'Wish' is formal and uncommon here; 'want' is more natural. Also remove the comma before 'and when' for better flow. Suggestion: use parallel verbs, correct uncountable nouns, and prefer 'want' for casual speech.

× I prefer to detail reading because when I read carefully I can improve myself. Also understand more about the information that the passage want to give me.

✓ I prefer detailed reading because when I read carefully I can improve myself and understand more of the information that the passage wants to give me.

'Detail reading' is incorrect; use the adjective 'detailed' before 'reading'. The second sentence fragment 'Also understand...' lacks a subject—combine with the first sentence or add 'I' as the subject. 'Information' is uncountable so use 'of the information' or 'the information'. 'Passage want' is wrong subject-verb agreement; use 'passage wants'. Suggestion: use 'detailed reading', ensure each clause has a subject, and correct subject-verb agreement.