Reading— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (uh, um), correct grammar (want to read), and give one or two specific reasons or an example. Keep it under 4 sentences and use linking words to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: I don't read often. However, I sometimes try books recommended by my friends because their suggestions are interesting. Generally, I prefer other activities like watching videos, so I feel reading can be a bit time-consuming for me.

Sugerencia: Start with a direct answer, then give one clear reason with a linking word (because, so). Avoid repetition and long run-on sentences. Use precise vocabulary (eye strain instead of 'eyes get sore').

Ejemplo: I prefer reading on paper. Because long periods of reading on a screen cause eye strain, paper feels more comfortable for novels and helps me concentrate better.

Sugerencia: Give a clear topic sentence answering both parts, correct grammar (reading tasks -> reading tasks; find every detail; skim, not 'scream'), and use linking words (while, whereas). Provide specific examples of tasks requiring careful reading versus skimming.

Ejemplo: I read carefully when I need to understand facts or answer questions, for example when studying for an exam or doing work-related reading. In contrast, I skim when I only want a general idea, such as when browsing news articles quickly.

Sugerencia: Answer directly, then give one clear reason and a concise example. Use correct terms (scanning or skimming) and avoid repetition and hesitations. Keep sentences short and coherent with linking words (for example, therefore).

Ejemplo: I prefer scanning because it helps me find the main points quickly. For example, when I only have a few minutes, I scan chapters to understand the plot without reading every sentence.

× No, I'm not a big fan of reading but I do read sometimes, especially my friends will recommend me to read some books.

✓ No, I'm not a big fan of reading but I do read sometimes; for example, my friends often recommend books to me.

Incorrect pronoun use and sentence structure: 'my friends will recommend me to read some books' is unnatural. Use 'recommend books to me' or 'recommend that I read some books.' Also change 'especially' to 'for example' for clarity and use a semicolon to join related clauses.

× Uh, I will probably give it a try but most of the time I want to reading because I think uh, it's kind of waste of time to me.

✓ Uh, I will probably give it a try but most of the time I don't want to read because I think it's kind of a waste of time for me.

Mixed tense and verb form errors: 'want to reading' should be 'want to read' (infinitive after 'want to'). 'Kind of waste of time to me' needs article 'a' and preposition 'for' -> 'a waste of time for me.'

× I prefer to read on the paper because if you read a fancy novel and you are quite interested in it and then you will spare a long time to read it on the screen and and your eyes probably get sore and I don't think it's a good idea.

✓ I prefer to read on paper because if you read a fancy novel and are quite interested in it, you may spend a long time reading it on a screen and your eyes will probably get sore, so I don't think it's a good idea.

Article and wording issues: 'on the paper' should be 'on paper' (no article). 'Spare a long time' should be 'spend a long time.' Remove duplicate 'and' and use modal 'may' or future 'will' consistently. 'Get sore' -> 'will probably get sore.'

× When I'm doing a reading tasks, I will find every details to get the main idea of the whole text.

✓ When I'm doing a reading task, I look for every detail to get the main idea of the whole text.

Number agreement and tense: 'a reading tasks' mixes singular and plural; use 'a reading task' or 'reading tasks.' 'Will find every details' should be present simple for habitual action: 'look for every detail.' Also 'every details' -> 'every detail' (singular after 'every').

× Then I will do reading carefully.

✓ Then I read carefully.

Tense and verb form: For habitual or sequential actions use present simple 'I read carefully.' 'Do reading' is awkward; use 'read' or 'read carefully.'

× If I'm just do a rational reading and I will probably reading it at will, I will scream the whole text very fast at the fast pace as I can.

✓ If I'm just doing a quick, general reading, I will probably read it casually and skim the whole text as fast as I can.

Multiple structure and word choice errors: 'If I'm just do' -> 'If I'm just doing.' 'Rational reading' is incorrect; likely 'general' or 'quick reading.' 'I will probably reading it at will' -> 'I will probably read it casually.' 'I will scream the whole text' should be 'I will skim the whole text.' Replace 'at the fast pace as I can' with 'as fast as I can.'

× I prefer scanning because I think is the quickest way for me to read a novel.

✓ I prefer scanning because I think it is the quickest way for me to read a novel.

Missing subject 'it' after 'think': use 'I think it is...' for a complete clause.

× For example, if I don't have much time to spend, I will probably choose scanning to for to get the main idea of the whole text.

✓ For example, if I don't have much time, I will probably choose scanning to get the main idea of the whole text.

Redundant and incorrect prepositions: 'to spend' is unnecessary after 'time' here. 'Choose scanning to for to get' contains extra 'to' and 'for.' Use 'choose scanning to get' or better 'choose to scan to get.'

× And I feel quite I I think scamming is quite useful.

✓ And I think scanning is quite useful.

Repetition and wrong word: 'scamming' is incorrect form; should be 'scanning.' Remove duplicate 'I' and simplify to 'I think scanning is quite useful.'