Reading— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, reduce fillers (uh), and add a brief specific example to make your answer richer. Keep to 3–4 sentences max.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy reading and it’s one of my main hobbies. I usually read when I have free time or when I want to learn something new, for example I recently read a book about personal finance that helped me manage my budget. Reading relaxes me and also gives me useful information.

Sugerencia: Use clearer structure and more precise vocabulary. State your preference directly, give 1–2 specific reasons linked with linking words (e.g. because, however), and avoid vague claims like 'eye disease' without explanation.

Ejemplo: I prefer reading on paper because the text feels clearer and I find it easier to concentrate. However, I do use screens for news and long articles when paper is not available, although prolonged screen time can cause eye strain.

Sugerencia: Begin with a direct topic sentence, then contrast the two situations with linking words (for example, whereas). Add a brief specific example of each situation to make your answer more concrete.

Ejemplo: I need to read carefully when I’m preparing for exams or doing research for an assignment, because I must understand details and avoid mistakes. Whereas when I’m stressed or just want to relax, I read fiction casually to unwind, for example I often read short stories before bed.

Sugerencia: Avoid repetition and hesitations; use one clear term (detailed reading) and give concise reasons with an example. Use linking words (because, therefore) and keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: I prefer detailed reading because it helps me fully understand complex ideas and remember important points. For instance, when I study a textbook chapter I read it slowly and re-read difficult paragraphs to make sure I grasp the author’s meaning.

× 'Whenever I am free or uh, I need some information from the books, I start reading books.'

✓ 'Whenever I am free or when I need some information from books, I start reading.'

'books' after 'information from' is unnecessary plural; also redundant repetition of "books". Use 'from books' or 'from a book' and remove repeated noun. Also add 'when' for clarity.'

× 'I prefer to read on paper because on paper the text is clear, cleaner and the text is latest but on the screen while it is good to read from screen but it can cause eye disease.'

✓ 'I prefer to read on paper because the text on paper is clearer and more up-to-date, while reading on a screen can cause eye strain.'

'clearer' is comparative form needed; 'latest' is incorrect adjective choice — use 'more up-to-date'. 'on the screen' -> 'on a screen' or 'on screens'; 'eye disease' is unnatural, use 'eye strain'. Also remove repeated conjunctions and improve sentence flow.'

× 'When I am attempting some sort of test or I'm studying about the subject of my assignment, I need to read carefully and when I am just bored, stressed and need something to relax, I read casually.'

✓ 'When I am preparing for a test or studying the subject of my assignment, I need to read carefully; when I am just bored or stressed and need something to relax, I read casually.'

'attempting some sort of test' is awkward; use 'preparing for a test'. 'studying about the subject' is incorrect preposition use — use 'studying the subject'. Maintain consistent present continuous/simple contrast. Add conjunction 'or' between bored and stressed and punctuation for clarity.'

× 'I prefer detailed detailed reading courses.'

✓ 'I prefer detailed reading.'

'detailed detailed' is repetition. 'reading courses' changes meaning; context asks about style, so 'detailed reading' (noun phrase) is appropriate. No -ing form error beyond redundancy.'

× 'Through detailed reading I can learn every task, uh everything written in the book and uh if I am not understanding I even read a line or a an article two or three times to get what is author is saying in the line.'

✓ 'Through detailed reading I can learn everything written in the book, and if I do not understand, I even read a sentence or an article two or three times to get what the author is saying.'

'every task' is odd here — use 'everything'. 'if I am not understanding' is incorrect tense and form; use 'if I do not understand'. 'a an article' has an article error and duplication. 'what is author is saying' has incorrect word order and missing article before 'author' — use 'what the author is saying'. Also replace 'line' with 'sentence' for clarity.'}]}README.md