Reading— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and structured. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes, I enjoy reading), then give one or two specific reasons with a linking word (because / for example). Avoid repetition and filler words. Try to keep the response to no more than 3–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy reading. I read a variety of books because they help me learn new things and broaden my perspective. For example, reading history books has taught me about different cultures and important events.

Sugerencia: Give a clear topic sentence and add one or two specific reasons using linking words (because, therefore). Remove fillers and repeat only necessary points. Mention a brief comparison to strengthen your answer.

Ejemplo: I prefer reading on paper because I can concentrate better and find it easier to remember what I read. For example, when I read a printed novel I rarely get distracted by notifications, whereas reading on a screen often interrupts me.

Sugerencia: Answer directly by stating specific situations for careful reading and for casual reading. Use linking words (for example, while, whereas) and give a short reason for each. Reduce repetition and correct grammar (it depends, comfortable).

Ejemplo: I need to read carefully when the material is technical or for study, for example when I read articles for an exam I take notes and read slowly. In contrast, I read storybooks more casually, usually in the evening to relax, because I just want to enjoy the plot.

Sugerencia: Give a clear topic sentence stating your preference and then provide specific reasons with linking words (because, therefore). Avoid fillers and awkward repetition. Provide a brief example of a situation where detailed reading is useful.

Ejemplo: I prefer detailed reading because it helps me understand complex ideas and remember information better. For instance, when I study for exams I read chapters slowly, highlight key points and summarize them so I can recall the material later.

× Yes, I like reading books because I know many I know I learn many things reading books and it is interesting because, uh day by day I learn many things That's why it is very.

✓ Yes, I like reading books because I learn many things from them and it is interesting; day by day I learn more, so it is very enjoyable.

The student uses awkward present-tense expressions and repeats phrases. This is a present tense and sentence structure problem. Use simple present consistently for habitual actions (I learn), add 'from them' to show source, and combine clauses with connectors to make the sentence clear and grammatical. Replace vague 'it is very' with 'very enjoyable' to complete the thought.

× Well, I prefer to read, uh, on paper, uh, because, uh, when I read book, umm, I fully concentrate on uh, on paper, uh, because uh, it's like, look like a book. That's why I prefer and enjoy it.

✓ Well, I prefer to read on paper because when I read a book I can fully concentrate; it looks like a real book. That's why I prefer and enjoy it.

Errors include missing article 'a' before 'book' and awkward phrase 'look like a book.' Use the base verb 'read' with the infinitive 'to read' or 'I read a book'; here simple present is fine. Replace 'look like a book' with 'it looks like a real book'. Remove filler words for clarity.

× Well it is totally depend on books because when it is storybooks I comfort for evening reading book because this time I this time I enjoy reading books for especially story books.

✓ Well, it totally depends on the book, because for storybooks I prefer reading in the evening since I especially enjoy reading stories at that time.

Multiple present tense and agreement errors: 'depend' should be 'depends' to agree with 'it', and 'book' vs 'books' needs clarity. The sentence structure is awkward; rewrite to show contrast and preference. Use 'prefer' and 'in the evening' and remove repeated fragments.

× Well, I prefer detailed reading because when I detailed reading books, umm, I uh, learn many things and expand my knowledge and that's why I, uh, reading books detailed and my knowledge, uh, I clearly, uh, understand.

✓ Well, I prefer detailed reading because when I read books in detail I learn many things and expand my knowledge; that's why I read books carefully and I understand things more clearly.

Incorrect use of 'detailed' as verb form; use 'read in detail' or 'read books in detail'. Fix word order and tense consistency: use simple present 'I read' and 'I learn'. Replace awkward fragments with clear phrases 'read books carefully' and 'understand more clearly'.