Reading— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise, correct grammar and choose accurate verbs. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and give one specific example with correct tenses. Also watch pronunciation/repetition (e.g., duplicate words).

Ejemplo: I enjoy reading because it helps me relax. For example, I usually read a few pages of a novel before bed, and this routine helps me fall asleep more easily.

Sugerencia: Use correct expressions and vocabulary (say "on paper" or "print books"), avoid filler words, and give a short reason plus a concrete example. Correct verb choices (read/watch) and word order will improve clarity.

Ejemplo: I prefer reading on paper because I find it easier to concentrate. For instance, I often read printed books before bed, which helps me relax and avoid screen glare.

Sugerencia: Organize into two clear parts (when and when not), correct grammar (e.g., "if I'm preparing" not "for something" vague), and use specific examples. Remove unclear phrases like "before step" and "make me feel common online."

Ejemplo: I read carefully when I'm studying for an exam or preparing a presentation because I need to understand details. By contrast, I skim light articles or social media posts in the evening when I just want to relax.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear preference statement, use precise vocabulary ("skimming" instead of "scanning" is fine but be consistent), and link reasons with a connector. Give a brief, specific example of each case.

Ejemplo: I usually skim when the information is not important, such as browsing news headlines, because I just want the main idea. However, I read in detail for academic articles or work documents to understand facts and nuances.

× Yes, I like to read a lot because it makes me feel relaxed when I I am reading.

✓ Yes, I like to read a lot because it makes me feel relaxed when I am reading.

Duplicate 'I' is a typo and does not match any grammar list but removing it fixes the sentence. The verb 'am reading' is correct present continuous to describe an action happening now; ensure no repeated words. Suggestion: proofread to remove accidental duplications.

× For instance, before I sleeping I usually watch a bunch of pages of the books.

✓ For instance, before sleeping I usually read a lot of pages of books.

'Before I sleeping' mixes subject + gerund incorrectly; use 'before sleeping' or 'before I sleep'. 'Watch' is incorrect verb for reading; use 'read'. 'A bunch of pages of the books' is awkward: use 'a lot of pages of books' or 'many pages of a book'. Suggestion: use correct verb (read) and correct form after 'before' (infinitive or gerund consistently).

× It makes me feel easier to sleep.

✓ It makes it easier for me to sleep.

Incorrect adjective/adverb usage and missing dummy subject 'it'. Use 'it makes it easier for me to sleep' to express that something facilitates sleeping. 'Easier' modifies the situation, not the person directly. Suggestion: include 'it' as dummy subject and 'for me' to indicate the person affected.

× I prefer to read down papers because I can stay more, uh, focus on the reading when I use the book.

✓ I prefer to read on paper because I can stay more focused on the reading when I use a book.

Preposition 'down' is incorrect with 'papers'; use 'on paper'. 'Stay more, uh, focus' is wrong word form and order: use 'stay more focused' (adjective form). 'The book' implies a specific book; 'a book' or 'books' is more natural unless referring to a specific one. Suggestion: use 'on paper' and the adjective 'focused' after 'stay'.

× For instance, before I sleep, I watch the books and it makes me feel calm.

✓ For instance, before I sleep, I read books and it makes me feel calm.

Use of 'watch' is incorrect for reading; 'read' matches the present simple habitual action 'before I sleep'. Suggestion: use verbs that match the action (read for books).

× When I'm preparing for something or I really interested in something, I would read carefully.

✓ When I'm preparing for something or I'm really interested in something, I read carefully.

Missing auxiliary 'am' before 'really interested' makes the clause ungrammatical. Use present continuous 'I'm preparing' and 'I'm really interested' for current states; use simple present 'I read carefully' for habitual behavior. Also 'would read carefully' suggests conditional; here simple present is better to state habit. Suggestion: include 'am' in the second clause and use consistent tense for habits.

× But if I read before step I usually don't read like really carefully because I just want to make me feel common online before sleep.

✓ But if I read before sleep, I usually don't read very carefully because I just want to relax online before bed.

'Before step' is incorrect; intended 'before sleep'. 'Don't read like really carefully' is colloquial and ungrammatical; use 'don't read very carefully'. 'Make me feel common online' is unclear; likely intended 'relax online'. 'Before bed' is more natural than 'before sleep'. Suggestion: replace unclear phrases with common expressions like 'relax online' and 'before bed' and use adverb 'very' for degree.

× When the context is not that important, I prefer scanning, but if the content is talking about the topic more serious, I would prefer detailed reading because I can catch as much as I can when I'm reading.

✓ When the context is not that important, I prefer scanning, but if the content is about a more serious topic, I prefer detailed reading because I can catch as much as I can when I'm reading.

'The content is talking about the topic more serious' is ungrammatical: use 'the content is about a more serious topic'. 'Would prefer' suggests conditional; simple present 'prefer' is consistent when stating general preferences. Also 'more serious' should modify 'topic', not 'serious' directly. Suggestion: use 'about' for topics and adjective 'more serious' before 'topic', keep tense consistent for general statements.