Reading— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答は意味が通じますが、文法と語順、時制の一貫性、情報の構成を改善しましょう。トピック文（好きかどうか）を明確に述べ、その後で理由を具体的に短く付け加えると良いです。例えば過去の習慣と現在の状況を対比する際は “used to” と現在形を正しく使い分け、冗長な表現を避けてください。

Ejemplo: I used to enjoy reading a lot, but since I started high school I don’t have much free time, so I rarely read these days.

Sugerencia: 理由は明瞭で個人的な好みも示されていますが、時制の誤りや繰り返しが見られます。短く、論理的に整理して linking word（for example / because / therefore）を使い、重複する語（“paper”や“books”）を減らしてください。

Ejemplo: I prefer reading on paper because screens strain my eyes. Also, I enjoy the texture of a physical book, so I usually choose paper books for leisure reading.

Sugerencia: 回答は意図がわかりますが、表現が曖昧で一部意味が不明瞭です。まず直接に『いつ注意深く読むか』を述べ、次に『いつそうしないか』を対比で説明しましょう。具体例（課題、契約、重要な指示など）を加えると説得力が増します。文法（relative clauses）も整えてください。

Ejemplo: I read carefully when the material affects my studies or future plans, such as assignments or official documents. In contrast, I skim simple or familiar texts like casual messages or short news items.

Sugerencia: 短く率直ですが語法と語順が不自然です。まず主張（どちらを好むか）をはっきり述べ、その理由を具体的に説明してください。'concentration' の使い方や形容詞／副詞の位置に注意し、接続表現で論理をつなげましょう。

Ejemplo: I prefer scanning because I have difficulty concentrating for long periods. However, I do detailed reading when the text is important or complex.

× I used to like reading because since I became high school student I don't have much time to read, so recently I can't make enough time to read.

✓ I used to like reading, but since I became a high school student I haven't had much time to read, so recently I haven't been able to make enough time to read.

The sentence mixes past and present incorrectly. 'Since' with a past starting point requires present perfect (have/has + past participle) to show a situation that started in the past and continues: 'I haven't had'. Also 'can't make enough time' is better as present perfect continuous/experience: 'haven't been able to make'. Add the article 'a' before 'high school student'. Use 'but' to connect the contrast. Suggestion: Use present perfect to show actions from the past continuing to now and include necessary articles.

× If I read on a screen, I became very tired, especially my eyes.

✓ If I read on a screen, I become very tired, especially in my eyes.

Conditional with general truth should use present simple, not past 'became'. Use 'become' for habitual result. Also say 'in my eyes' to describe where the tiredness occurs. Suggestion: Use present simple for general facts and correct prepositional phrase for body parts.

× If I read on a screen, I became very tired, especially my eyes.

✓ If I read on a screen, I become very tired, especially in my eyes.

Missing preposition 'in' before 'my eyes' makes the phrase awkward; this is classified here as an article/preposition-related error resulting in unnatural phrasing. Suggestion: Add 'in' to indicate the location of the tiredness.

× So I prefer to read on paper and I like the texture of the books, so I usually read on paper, especially books.

✓ So I prefer to read on paper and I like the texture of books, so I usually read on paper, especially for books.

'The books' implies specific books; use 'books' generally. Repetition 'read on paper, especially books' is awkward; clarify with 'for books' or simplify to 'especially books'. Suggestion: Use general noun without definite article when speaking generally.

× I need to read carefully when I read something, something that related to my studying or my future, and when I lead with doing something, I don't need to read carefully.

✓ I need to read carefully when I read something related to my studies or my future, but when I am just following instructions to do something, I don't need to read carefully.

The original sentence has unclear structure and wrong verb forms: 'related' needs to be 'related to' and 'studying' should be plural noun 'studies' for general meaning. 'Lead with doing something' is ungrammatical; replace with 'am just following instructions to do something' or 'am doing something hands-on'. Use 'but' to show contrast. Suggestion: Use clear relative clause 'something related to X' and correct verbs and conjunctions to clarify contrast.

× I don't have much concentration to reading with detailed, so I prefer scanning reading.

✓ I don't have much concentration for detailed reading, so I prefer scanning.

Use the noun phrase 'detailed reading' (adjective + noun) rather than 'reading with detailed'. 'Concentration for' is the correct preposition. 'Scanning reading' is redundant; 'scanning' alone or 'skimming' is better. Suggestion: Use 'concentration for' + noun and prefer concise term 'scanning' or 'skimming'.